SwaSan Drabble: 'Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu' - Page 5

Viji🤗 wonderful as always... Shekhar😡😡😡 Akal hai nahi, jhaadne chala hai😡😡 Seriously, what did Shomi see in him🤢🤢 But, she absolutely stole the show in this piece.. The clarity with which she showed Shekhar the mirror abt his hypocrisy was awesome! He realised she could possibly leave him if he keeps up with this tamasha.. Good for him..Anyways, he's just a waste of space IMO.. Glad swara took a stand and decided to leave with sanskar... Wish this happens in the show too.. Today's precap was.. Waise swara did in a way conjure sanskar there😉 Itne shiddat se yaad kiya that he felt her pain resonate with his, aur use aana hi pada... Uska pyaar use kheech le hi aya😃 So filmy na😆😆 Love this romantic melodrama😛😛 Loved this one too😃.

Hey Viji.. 🤗

Unres on Page 1 dear 😊

Thank you for writing what we all are feeling a swara whom finally stood by me her husband and told her dad to back away from her love...

Res ❤️ Can we send this OS in a nicely wrapped box to the CVs pls?

Unres:

🤗 Viji,

A delightfully soothing OS! Truly, after watching the episode and the new OLVs I think all us SwaSanians are dangling from a precarious edge.
Its really beautiful how you have captured the emotions flowing in SwaSan due to this unjust separation. I mean 'kuch bhi hai yeh toh'! They are continuing with the same 'ghissa pita' track of keeping SwaSan separate. How many times do these guys have to get married to be able to live peacefully. This show had the potential to really make the audience captivated but the CVs need to get help if they are trying to capture audience through this shit. I'll stop now because if I don't I can rant and rant and rant.
Your OS Viji! ❤️ Can I say that Mishty took the cake here? Oh how I love her as a mother. She is brilliant. Shekhar grew a spine at the wrong time. ROFL! What is wrong with Maheshwaris and Gadodias.?
SwaSan.! That emotional turmoil, and that hug! Oh and those teasing dialogues of Sanskaar over crying. It was so beautiful.!
Thank you so much for this OS. Its a ray of hope (which will be dashed, for certain!) Its a balm to this frustrated SwaSanians thoughts.

Keep writing! Awaiting more. :)

-V :)

I haven't seen the episode yet but this is outrageous! I mean Shekhar not allowing Swara to stay with Sanskar just because Laksh did not get married to Ragini! What the..! This marriage was not ek wedding ke saath doosra free free!!😕

Wow ,wow, wow x 10000tyms👏👏 there's no way anybody reading this can not have hearty clap for this work. Mindblowing dialogues through out the story.that's it, I just wish I had the power to fire the CVS just for one episode and give u the job of writing to swara back to her husband, powerful emotions there, viji. Swaras pain was heart wrenching her longing to be with her love after fighting so many obstacles to their relationship only now to be blocked by ur own flesh and blood is nothing less than criminal.in her pain and sadness she is nvr without her soulmate , her pillar of strength and his love is so pure nothing like ego , pride,anger or fear taints it , he knows he needs to be with her that all DAT matters everything as no place in his heart when it comes to swara. That scene when he comes to baadi for swara was mindblowing,in two ways it brought abt a smile of sheer happiness to face off his wife and the contrasting shrieks from dadi and shekar , then da showdown of words from shomi , omg if I could I would hug u for this scenario I would , strong , firm shomi fighting for her daughters happiness in da face off a selfish, egoistic father , that was magnificent. Viji I loved that u write like he feared losing shomi ,more thanfreely wanting to give swara her happiness cos to me in da serial is just shomis husband NVR acted as swaras father he only pulls out the father card when he wants stand his ground or disowe her, he is was and seem to continue to in the role of a dead beat father to swara. I loved da part of swara holding her mangalsutra and remembering sanskaar , their symbol of their love , bond and commitment to each other. Beautiful scene and so apt for newly wed bride deprived off the most special time with her husband.u do my heart good in ur portrayal of sanskaar so witty , wise , mature and responsible he is made only for swara ,he is Gods gift to her for having such useless father figures in her life. Thank you for giving swara the voice to stand up for her husband and his right over her against this overbearing ma beta combo.as I always complain that swara takes sanskaar for granted i loved that part a lot. I don't have to say it but another brilliant work from u , u really do set the bar high for itself and as yet u NVR fail to deliver.I applaud ur writing skills and imagination .great stuff viji

Haayyy! Viji
Main maar jawa...
I whole heartedly hope they show something like this pls pls
I want swara to wholeheartedly choose sanskar pls...or once atleast shomi take a stand for ur daughter.
Show spineless ffathe his true place