SwaSan Drabble: 'Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Viji,

"Words cannot express my Feelings"

"There has never been another you. With no effort on your part you were born to be something very special and set apart. What you are going to do in appreciation of that gift is a decision only you can make."

"Contentment is the reward of being appreciative and grateful. It goes that if you are grateful in every situation, you will be happy with everything and your happiness will be abundant and boundless."

Thank you for making my day beautiful with your subtle and soothening work 🤗

Just saying a "HEARTFELT" thank you ❤️

Love,
Esha 😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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New Drabble and that too on the current track , Thank you dear for wrtiting on this track😊 .Cvs have literally spoiled my Swasan wedding in there love for drama and in the name of Ragini Redemtpion they will keep them seperated using Shekhar the best dad for Ragini and worst dad of Swara.😡

And what a beautiful Drabble it was , Swara missing Sanskar and recollecting there happy but short wedding moments and how she wished she was with him on this very night . Feeling disappointed that she cant be happy even after marrying Sanskar by crossing so much hurdles.

Loved Sanskar and Swara meeting,the way they hugged each other and completely lost in the moment.❤️ And my favourite part was Swara choosing to go with Sanskar when faced with the question👏. Shomi spoke up for her Daughter and i always like her for being able to stand up for her daughters happiness even though i wish she has waited for Soulmate instead of falling in love with Shekhar.😆

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Viji 🤗

So this OS is wishful thinking on your part or are you sure this will happen?😆

TBH whatever role you have given to Swara & Shomi...I dont think mother daughter capable of doing that any more. While I would love to see Swara more than Shomi standing up for her marriage IDK I have no confidence or faith in her. Swara ka muh sirf Sanskaar ke samne hi khulta hai. Baki, she is a doormat for the rest of them. And if she doesnt show whats in her mind through her actions I am not going to waste my time deciphering what her anguished face & tears mean. I dont like her enough to give her the benefit of doubt. I guess you too arent 100% sure about the girl...maybe that is why you gave a major role to Shomi, not Swara😆 😆 😆

If any of this actually happens👏 but I have no hopes.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Esha, Nita, Shruti...🤗

Thanks a ton guys, really touched by the fact that you res'd even before I sent out PMs . 🤗 Will send those out after my horrendously late lunch. 😉

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Shaheenq

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is the Best thing that I have read today soo far. Its just Brilliant 👏 I hope the CV's use some of your magnificent ideas. 😉

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Poor Swara! I feel so bad for her. Why does she have to suffer all the time when it's never her fault. Why always her and Sanskaar! This is soo painful to imagine these two love birds away from each other and so distraught after so much struggle for love in their lives! Damn this gadha Shekhar!!

Atleast Sharmishtha supported Swara. In the show, Sharmishtha, even didn't think about Swara's happiness for once. When Maa had been her only hope then to Shomi supported Shekhar! I was like, what the hell. Now even Shomi, She was supposed to be the best mother of all and yet this decision which ruined her daughter's life. Swara just run from these Gadho-dias and go back to your beloved hubby!

The mangalsutra memory was so sweet. Enough to bring a smile on a person's face! Asanskaari Sanskaar haan? I like no scratch that I love him anyhow! The SwaSan hug was too beautiful! Full of the unconditional love that the two had for each other, full of the grief of separation, full of the solace of being in each others arms! OMG... so beautiful<3<3

Shekhar and Dadi are two loathsome creatures who just care for their beloved Laado and not for Swara. How much good Swara does, these two will anyhow show their vileness and just annoy the people around them! Idiotic Hypocrites. Even in the show. When Shekhar accused Sanskaar, I was like, you Ullu Ka Patha man! I'll kill you if you utter a word to Sanskaar! All he did was for your daughter, you git😡

I so wanted Shomi to snap at him like that. To give him back and tell him his double standards! When SwaSan had to go through divorce, why didn't he ask Ragini to come back home. Laksh had also tried to kill her then, why didn't he ask her to swear that you shall never step in MM? Why not? When Kavita came in SwaSan life, why didn't he ask her to come here and help her sister in such horrible conditions?? Then why Swara? Why such double standards Mr. Nalayak Gadodia??
Sorry dude, I started venting my anger on your post. But Shomi's each and every word was right!

I wish this man would have understood in the show just like your OS. Anyways the part with Sanskaar was so sweet. When he says that he'll take all her burdens now! Oh these two lovers<3 I love your love and your bond too much.

Sakshi

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

Viji dear. ...😉

This is so nice..perfectly suits the current situation.

Sekhar is always partial to ragini's happiness and no words for dadi.Being a father how can't. He see the torture that swara is going through.Sharmistha is absolutely right.Sanskar was the only one who stood by swara during her hard time.

Superb,sanskar and swara finally spoke.what's their fault.why they will pay for others deed always!!sharmistha again took my heart. ..she is a true mom...

Lovely one ...

Lots of love

Simi😊

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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My Dearest Viji 🤗

It's of course my turn now to do the "uthak bethak" no as you have started that trend now?!😉

I so so wish our makers had one iota of your sense or imagination, but then if they did, the situation that led to where you picked up on this fab OS from, would never occur in the first place so that all goes round and round! 😕😆

I was/ am apoplectic with rage at the current happenings. I had decided that once Cavity departed I would enjoy the track and not whinge but seriously this is the pits and the whole thing of a father behaving this way, after they ruin SwaSan's marriage yet again, is unacceptable to me.

And how I would love to see a super strong Swara, even more so than Shomi, but seeing Shomi finally crack and give spineless nincompoop what he should have had a long time ago (oh wait that might get her in for husband murder)- was great to read. I loved the perfectly sensible things you made the people that should say them utter 👏👏👏. It gave me a sense of peace for the time I read this, penned as usual with your finesse and flair, which makes all writing seem good.

I have to still restrain myself to commenting on the well executed OS here and not going off on another rant but you gave many much satisfaction I am sure with this retelling of exactly how things SHOULD be (if they got to that stupid point to start with of course). Little touches present as ever especially the scene where Sanskaar touches her neck 👏⭐️.

Great work as ever sis.

Lots of love xoxo

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virman_superhit

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey... Sorry for not commenting on your works ya... was busy... And did not sign in much.. But I am si glad to have signed in today and read your works... 👏👏👏

There are always a delight... loved your take on the current scenario more than what they are gonna show in the actual show.. 😆😆... i so wanted Swara to go back for only Sanskaar this time like in your story.. But it seems that the CVs want her to go back coz of the torture the family will face.. 😭😭..

Anyways... Coming back to your story... loveddd it... 👏👏.. Loved Swara, Sanskaar and Shomi in it... They were perfect and the actual way a normal person would react to such a situation.. lol.. Y will a wife leave her husband for something that her brother-in-law has done.. 👏👏.. as usual the story was perfect on emotions.. Hats off to you for that.. 😃... I wish you were the story writer of the show.. Lol.. We would have actually seen all your stories in reality.. 😆😆.. But they are a treat to read always...

Hate Shekhar.. 😡😡😡... He is stupid in the show just like in this story.. 😆😆.. Stupid and dumb.. and i wonder how that Dadi changes her sides so often.. 😆😆😆...

All in all it was a power packed One shot.. Loved their hug... In dreams still.. 😳😳... Love Swasan in all ur stories... they are my favourites.. 😳😉.. Keep updating.. please...

Thanks for the pm.. Biggg Huggg... 😃😃.. Sorry for the late reply.. 😭😭

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