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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: punam2712
MAYA HAS REALIZED THAT SHE IS HARMING HERSELF ONLY WITH HER DRINKING AND TANTRUMS
AND SHE IS SCARED OF TURNING INTO HER - WHY SO MUCH REFERENCE TO MADHUBALA ALL THE TIME
WHY HAS RISHAAN CHANGED AND MELLOWED DOWN
WHERE IS RUDR
BITTUJI WAS MESMERISED TO SEE HIS BHABHIJI IN THE WEDDING DRESS
HE GOT TRANSPORTED TO THE PAST

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

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Survival

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Congratulations on the new chapter, I loved it, it made me see new shades of Rishaan, it had a nice scene between Rudra and Maya, I loved the line that reminded me of Rishbala too, about Rudra just like Rk having to remind himself to breath to behold the beauty of Maya just the way Rk said that to Madhu. Rishaan talked about the fact that her being part of the film industry is actually her destiny and not only a deed by him, he was actually a means to make her discover her past life, to make her meet the one she is meant to meet...

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Tainar

@Tainar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Holy Smokes! Just started reading the story and finished first 3 chapters. I can't believe I am saying this, but I find RK's brother Rudra more SEXY! 😆😆 Hayee...! You are a wonderful storyteller and I am HOOKED! Okay...back to reading! 😃

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Wonderful update Maria Di!Loved the Rudr-Maya scene!Rishaan told her that it was in her destiny & not because of him that she was here!pls show more Rudr-Maya scenes!pls continue soon!

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

When are you planning to make Rudr & Maya realise everything.. more of them pls

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vimala jersha

@christobelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

nice update maria

thanx for pm n i have accepted buddy request

coming to the update

rudra is haunted by maya in everything he does

rishaan is also having some feelings towards maya

maya n rudra eyelock .god! it reminds me of rishbala

why dont they remember their past

i eagerly waiting when rudra n maya wud know that they r real rishbala

they r meant to be together

i hate rishaan soo plz next time more of rudra n maya

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

here comes my review

so now maya has started staying in a shell

seems rishaans words have affected her greatly

so rishaan secretly steals glances at maya

but why was he at unease ?

why did he dislike her way of surrender ?

rudra never went to the sets

but i did not get why should rishaan have a problem

i mean if he changed her PA to keep a watch on her

he did it so that maya cannot play any more tricks

and so that the film works well

so why should rishaan have a problem with it ?

well its not surprising that her voice haunted rudra

in fact her voice was the last thing he had heard b4 death in the last birth

well it seems the fire has gone out of maya now

i know its temporary but rishann does not like it ?

he is a confused and unpredictable man now

isnt that what he had wanted ? that maya obeys him in all ?

yet now he does not like it ?

will review the premier night in another post

Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago

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taraka2005

@taraka2005

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

lovely update 😛
ahaaan premiere night 😳

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Awesome update Maria 👏

I really loved the 11 and 12th chapters. I am really glad to know that Maya accepted Rishaan's deal and acting normal. Btw who is this 'she' like whom Maya does not want herself to be, who comes after Madhubala ?? Is that Maya's mom? Was she alcoholic??

Rishaan is mentoring Maya?? Rishaan tells Maya that may be film industry is her destiny, Rishaan does not like a surrender Maya, And he even gets mesmerized by Maya( which is solely RK's haq ), and Rishaan is changing his attitude towards Maya and she notices the change in him 😲. What i want to ask is all these are RK's traits and how come Rishaan inherited those😕??

And Rudr, my poor Rudr is restless with or with out Maya. I can understand him. His bossy nature reminds me real RK 😛, and he gets mesmerized by her is also RKish😳, but what i dont understand is ,Why is he controlling maya and her drinking habbits? Is it for Rishaan or Himself?? I could not stop smiling thinking about that make-up artist 😆. And i am really happy that both Rudr and Maya feels the pull towards each other.

And these brothers shares a very beautiful bond. May be its just me But i find them very complicated together, And its really difficult for me to decode their conversations 😕 and Lastly Where is Meera?? I miss her 😊

Forgot to mention the banner is awesome. Going well with the story 👏

Edited by aan-rish - 11 years ago