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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update maria 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update maria. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
MAYA HAS REALIZED THAT SHE IS HARMING HERSELF ONLY WITH HER DRINKING AND TANTRUMS
AND SHE IS SCARED OF TURNING INTO HER - WHY SO MUCH REFERENCE TO MADHUBALA ALL THE TIME
WHY HAS RISHAAN CHANGED AND MELLOWED DOWN
WHERE IS RUDR
BITTUJI WAS MESMERISED TO SEE HIS BHABHIJI IN THE WEDDING DRESS
HE GOT TRANSPORTED TO THE PAST
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mydrashti

wonderfulll sixth chaptr it was chapter og hide n seek fr sme reasons as meera holding on her emotions n rishaan is one plllzzz allow me to call him a jerk with indeed sme smart qualities bt fr me maya is one whom i fall frm the first part bravoo character 👍🏼 she is a human with all the complexities bt fr a better reason i truly loveee her😛 bt the last part 🤣 when rishaan has a doubt abt maya s normal behaviour he is sexy n charming forever then why nt maya acknowledge him 😆 loveeeddd itt👏


Originally posted by: mydrashti

sorry i forgot to mention the goons part in prvs reply 😳😆 i loveddd ittt though rishaan got the message whom he is messing with she beat them n thn only the goons attacked her fr their own safety🤣 okkk cming to the seventh one awsummm i 👍🏼was just spell bound when maya gave back to rishaan in her mayavi style👏 this girl amaze me so rishaan first do all the nautanki thn blackmail her my god this man had nerve 😡 u better watchout dude wat goes around comes back around..



Originally posted by: mydrashti

eight one is giving me sme other vibes🤔 wat is this rishaan upto try out all his charmss on maya which failed then he forced her to come india n trying to embarass her in all the possible ways 😡 loved his concern fr rudra 😊 dnt knw bt this rudra is giving me goosebumps 😳😆 his smirk when he answered rishaan that he became more gorgeous after the accident😉 n what maya is in rudrs arms feeling warm n all n rudr is on the same pitch😲 so its rudr or its rishaan😕 ok comment after i read the ninth one😊



Originally posted by: mydrashti

my god😲😲 it was a shockkk of a lifetimes so rudra is the real one tooo goodd u r going to rule this forum all i can say star in the making👏 damnn goodd this twisttt is far moree better than the st n nautankis twist so accrodng to the present track u gave this idea fr double rk except changed eye colour 😆 i think u can also sue st n fr stealing this idea of urs the only difference is that in show one rk is after madhu n daru n the second is milkoholick 🤣 n i like both of them😳😉 so rudr is haunted frm the age of 5 the paintings of madhus maya s eyes ofcourse n maya is going through the same bt behaving in her manners hw dare rudr to kiss any random girl to fight his all restlessness jb jaanta hai ki end kya hone wala hai bar bar try kyun karta hai😡😆 n rishaan is one our right kameena justifies so he goes for a tatto bcz he is rk after that seriuosly man in dono bhaiyon ne jeena mushkil kar diya hai maya ka.. n then rudr ka accident ho gaya aur kaun laya hospital maya😛 n he said i found u biwi... too gooddd👍🏼



I am so sorry I have not been replying to many of the readers. I sometimes get lazy (sorry.. 😳) or sometimes it gets difficult... but from now on I will try my best to reply each one of you.

I gathered your comments... I know I missed some .. but still.. just to let you know.. I love your comments. They not only encourage me but they are so much fun to read. 😆😳

I am glad you're liking the story. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Awesome update !! All the three are battling and are restless and the beauty of the update is it clearly tells us to what an extent they are actually affected.

Rudra seems to be the most affected as he is swaying between this life and the previous life, it seems as though he will be instrumental in reminding Maya too !! Ah..the hospital scene...brought back so many memories( of mine too 😆,) ... Rudra's memory etched with those memories so deeply that it has made him suicidal...whereas made Maya confine herself to a nutshell !!! Am very much curious to witness, as in who is that first person who will see it all, feel it all and tell it all !!!

I also loved how rudra, did not slap Maya, in spite of her deathly hold and grip for aggravating the matter that's actually troubling his beloved brother !! Hmm so his heart is weighing heavier than his brain at the moment and the guy who is into S&M, this itself should be a waking call if realised or it will be the end of the world 😆!!

My heart goes out for Maya🤗..in a sad way !! She is totally baffled with all the inner turmoil...she is where basically she doesn't want to be there...doing exactly that she hates to do...to top it all, kapoor brothers are barging one after the other 😆 to give her the ultimatum !! Poor Madhu 😳 !!

Finally Rishaan, firstly he can do anything to reach his goal ..secondly he won't tolerate anyone to hindering his success and he won't LET anyone meddle with What belongs to HIM and what's is HIS !!

Sorry for commenting so late..loved it to the core and waiting for the next one now



Extremely sorry for not replying earlier..😳

I had read your previous comment as well but I don't think I replied to that. Sorry...

But seriously! You're so spot on with your take on each of the characters! I loved it!

I loved reading your comments! 😆😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Hiya, The Banner is Beautiful. 👏


Maria, Thank You so much for updating. Is it Maya's nightmare?

**Edit**

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what a co-incidence!!
I was actually commenting about the teaser.

Will read & comment on the update later. 😊

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History repeating itself with the 4 phere wedding ?? I' love this Right Kameena.
Maya is a tantrum queen. 😆😆 I like it.


Lol. What timing! 😆

Thank you for your comment. 😳

History is getting repeated in a twisted way. You love Rishaan? 😳 He is different from our Right Kameena... but still he is very much a Kameena! 😆 ... and yeah Maya snaps a lot! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Feeling sorry for Madhu. Rishan is so khadoos. And, Rudra... he is cherry on the cake.😆 Bittuji is lost in the past. I just hope everything will be fine. And, Waiting for Rudra and Madhu's love story to come on floor.

Waiting for a happy waala update. Liked this update, Maria. 👏


Thank you so much.

Lol. Did Rishaan look khadoos here? 😲😆 and yeah, Rudra is that way. 😆
Happy wala update... umm... 🤔 ... I cannot promise you that as the story has it's own pace. But let's just wait. All in good time, hon. 😳



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Awesome update sistar 👏
Miss you 😳
So Maya agrees to comply...because she is afraid to becoming like "her "...unfortunately her struggle to stay true to herself is pushing towards losing herself in another past name.
Rishaan that sly dude 😆...and whats this...overprotective little bro 😆
Poor Bittuji...lend him a hanky someone ...and that was the unwedding scene 😲

Love it all...😃

Stay tuned for the next chappie folks 😎


I have missed you like anything!!! 🤗

Thank you so much sistar! I am glad you liked it! So happy to see a long comment from you. 😆

And needless to say, you hit the nail on the head! But what makes you think Rishaan is the little brother? 😛😆 ... And no that was the 4 phere wedding... as here like Madhu... Maya sealed a deal with Superstar RK.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you. 😳
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Originally posted by: war_is_peace

so, rishaan has started feeling for maya now...and he cant see her like that...he doesnt say it though...thats y the deal ...nice!


Yeah. 😳

maya and her nightmares...this girl just needs to get herself hypnotised to forget her past 😆

LOL! That's a good suggestion! 😆

rudra...the man himself act smart but, has no guts to meet the lady because it is too much for him too handle 😆

Yeah... He is keeping his distance for the sake of his own sanity. 😆

yes i was right about bittuji! exactly y he rented the studio to rishaan

Aren't you almost always right? 😉😆

btw all thru the studio part i kept feeling that maya is starting to soften towards rishaan

Hmmm.. Good observation as always.

all well that doesnt end well 😆

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i dont luv u! so update soon 😡 😈 😆

LOL! Meanie! Updating in a bit! 😆

PS : btw the teaser comment was just to confuse ppl...i meant just the opposite 😉 😆

Yeah yeah I got it. I know you kameeni! 😆


Love you Hiyu! 🤗

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