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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

till now i understand that it is maya's nightmare . is it so ?


Yeah it is a nightmare! 😳

its strange and so unnatural that she is fearing of turning into what she was in her previous birth

Ironic, isn't it?

i understand that she wants to keep and protect and safeguard her identity

Right!

thankfully now she is aware that she is on the path of self destruction by drinking
she is determined that she will not change but i know fate has different plans for her

Right again!

i understand very well why sitara studio gives her the creeps and she feels strange there
she had a very strong connection with sitara studio in her previous birth
in fact if i am not mistaken she had died in sitara studio as well right ?

Yeah RishBala died there.

so this self destruction mode of maya had started affecting rishaan too

Yes.

i am confused about 1 thing did rishaan purposely brought the news reporter ?
what must maya have gone through to know that the reporter will take her interview
that too when she was fully drunk and not in a fit state to give the interview

Yes Rishaan brought the journalist intentionally so that Maya could see that there is a world outside the studio who scrutinizes her every move and judges her.

and why did she feel that rishaan's look to her this time was different ?

Because something has changed in Rishaan... or should I changing... 😛😆

i really want to know what was going through his mind when she was being interviewed ?
rishaan is not the soul nate as we all know now i badly want to know his pov now

Lol. Let's keep him a mystery... 😉😆

i loved rishaans answer to the reporter it put the reporter in her place so well

Glad to know. 😳

i did not get why sonia was replaced and sahil was brought ? i mean what was the need ?
did rudra feel that maya would lesson her tantrums if her pa was a male ?
i actually am a bit confused about this replacement part

Rudra replaced Maya's PA with an employee of his own so he can keep an eye on her and boss her around indirectly. Plus, he thinks not many women are that competent to work under him so he chose a man to work for him. He is khadoos that way. 😆

i loved how rishaan protected and defended her brother from being bad mouthed by maya
loved to see the strong brotherly bond still intact

I love their bond as well. 😳

will update more a bit later

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

maria,this was also a super update👏,why u said u didn't liked it???😒
i think frm now on maya will co-operate with the shooting as per the deal so this update was necessary to show her transformation...😊
i felt too bad to read maya loosing herself in alcohol...poor she...she hated being in industry but now forced to in it😒
i don't know why but for a moment i thought rishaan sitting beside maya during interview is not rishaan but rudra with blue lenses...i don't know hw i got that pic in mind but it happened so i thought to share with u...maria i really wanna see rudra acting for rishaan when rishann will met with some accident or something,u know like identity changing...😆ha ha its only my wish...u continue dear,ur story is just awesum👏

the part i liked most was last para...bittuji seeing maya...he recongnised his bhabhiji😊...and the situation was too perfectly He remembered the time when a lifeless Madhubala had walked towards Superstar RK to seal the deal of her life.👏
but i have a doubt,did bittuji never seen rudra???the real rk???i think no,right?then he should hav recongnised him too...
.is rishaan starts to fall for maya????😲😲?i like it dear...it will be interesting to read now
really reallly waiting plz plz plz jaldi update karooo😊


Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. And I didn't like the update much because I wanted to put a lot other things into as well but it already got so long that I had to edit it out...

Lol, A lot of people think it was Rudra... I can tell by the comments.. but no... it was Rishaan. 😆

Let's see, I cannot promise you to add it in the story at this moment as the story has it's own pace and content nor I can give you spoilers. But let's see.. 😉😆


Bittuji has obviously seen Rudra Kapoor in newspapers, magazines and maybe even parties... but no.. He hasn't really met him till date.

About Rishaan's feelings for Maya.. well time will tell.. 😆


Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

i'm also a maria😆😆actually ROSE MARIA...u can call me rose😊u liked reading my comment??😲😲thats a very BIGGG compliment especially when i get it from one of my fav.writer.😊...thanks maria.😊...actually its ur updates which forces me to comment😉


Oh another Maria! 😆

Okay I will call you Rose. And thank you so much for your comments. It means a lot to me. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Congratulations Maria on your new update, I know how much effort it took you to decide about what you should include in this update, as you wanted to get done with many details and things to start telling the passionate story. I'm eager to read what happens next and you know that😉


Thanks JJ for being so understanding always! 🤗

Lol. Yeah you know what I have been through.. 😆 and I am looking forward to future updates as well.. 😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tiara255

Hey lovely update yaar

Loved the interview part
Bit just as a guess
I dont feel it was rishaan in the intervieq part
I dnt knoe why i thot it was rudra becoz
He dint embaress her
And she also felt differemt

Anf if its not rudra
Then plz shpw sme rudra madhu and nt madhu rishan scene
P.s i seriously doubt it was rudr



Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...but I don't know I felt that in the interview it was Rudra & not Rishaan...may be I am wrong but still...btw I have a request...want more & more rudra maya scene...I hardly read about him...plz from next update want some rudra maya interactions...



Originally posted by: SreeRK

Nice update..but where is Rudr? Want Rudr-Maya scenes..

waiting to know so many things so pls update soon



Thank you guys for your comments.

It was Rishaan in that scene... or in the entire update. If you guys remember the last update it was dominated by Rudra and Maya. Rishaan is very pivotal to the plot as he is connected to both Rudra and Maya and his journey as a character is not only as important as RishBala but is also entwined with their journey. The story has it's own pace. I cannot really force something to happen otherwise it will spoil the story and the characters. Just be patient please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the replies Maria
thanks for explaining the replacement of PA part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: christobelle

nice story

read it now only
its quite intriuging
rudra kapoor is the real rk n maya fears that she wud turn to herself
rishaan is feeling for maya oops
rudra to has a feeling towards maya hope maya develops feelings towards rudra
pm me when u update


Thank you so much. Will definitely PM you from now on.
I am glad you are ,liking the story so far. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_rk

Awesome update maria
feeling bad for Madhu..wow..rishaan feel for maya


Originally posted by: maria090

Awesome update maria 😳



Originally posted by: rekha.366

nice update maria. loved it


Originally posted by: Chitrarocking

superbly fantastic update maria dear😃😃 !!
beautifully u have written 👏👏& thank u for pm !! 🤗



Thank you so much guys!! I am so happy you guys liked the update. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

nice update so Maya is scared she might turn into someone don't want to unknowingly and Rudra well what can i say about him khud samne nahin hai lekin control hanth mein le rakha hai and Rishaan as a protective bro and I guess he has also started having feelings for Maya no plzzz and poor Bittuji aww someone give him a hug



Thank you. Lol. Just wait and watch ... I can only promise you this is NOT a cliched love triangle.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

about the last conversation rishaan and maya had

i mean risahan still has the wrong idea that maya loves publicity and fame ?
is it because he loves it ? so he feels she also loves it ?

Umm... No. He was being sarcastic. 😆

rishaan is right this time i feel
the tantrums did not harm him at all
he was not ruined at all
even the movie publicity did not suffer any damage
it only increased the publicity of the film
and it damaged and ruined and destroyed madhu fully
maya lost herself became an alcoholic
she went on s self destructing spree
she slowly is loosing her identity too

Exactly!

i liked the deal rishaan offered her here
that she can do 1 more film and go back
then she will be free from all this unwanted publicity

I am glad you liked it.

i loved bittujis part too
the way he saw rishaan settle his hair b4 a shot like the real RK
and the last scene really confounded me
maya walking towards rishaan in a wedding dress but in a daze
history repeating itself again ?

In a way, yes...

what does this scene imply
rishaan is also entwined with maya in some twisted way ?

Let's see... 😛😆



Dia I loved your other comment as well! I am running out of time and I want to update before I log out so I cannot answer. But I am really happy that you liked the update. I was not happy because I wanted it to be a lot better... it didn't turn out the way I wanted it to be...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis



Dia I loved your other comment as well! I am running out of time and I want to update before I log out so I cannot answer. But I am really happy that you liked the update. I was not happy because I wanted it to be a lot better... it didn't turn out the way I wanted it to be...

no problem i am happy u replied to my comment

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