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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Very well penned down... The pain was described beautifully.. and the way he tried suicide... gosh! how did he come up with such a method... ah how much pain he must have felt. Good work dear... :)

I see a res does that mean u updating :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Wow amazing work 😊 the way u show their emotions and pain was just suverb 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Here is the next update I knoe it is really very short but I needed this one as a build up for next update.So dont curse me for the small length.Enjoy
Ohh!!! also I want to thank each and every person who read the story and reviewed too.Your feedback are really important and they are highly appreciated by me.
This update is specially dedicated to Oin diii.Dii this is for you hope you like it...

Third person POV
Sun enlightened the previously dark room and made everything visible.Between the crumpled sheets and pillows two bodies were situated on the bed tangled in such a way that one can miss if it was a single person or two.Their bodies joined so deliciously that one can't tell where the one ended and the other started.Sharon was the one to wake up first.Her head was pounding like someone dropped a dozen of bricks on her head.The hangover was killing her.Even the minute sunlight and birds chirruping was making everything hell for her.She was used to such mornings and she was well aware the there was someone beside her naked too.Well nothing new for her.
She blinked her eyes several times to adjust them to the brightness and massaged her temples careful enough not to wake the person beside her.She carefully sat up and clutched the sheet to her chest with one hand while she ran the other hand through her tangled tresses.When she was sure she can manage herself she decided to wake the stranger up and send him his own merry way.She turned sidewards but before her eyes could reach the face of the stranger they landed on the huge scar on his chest and like a flood all the memories of last night invaded her mind and she bacame numb.Every memory of last night was playing like a movie in her mind.She remembered everything the alcohol,the drugs,the haze,the game,the truth,the pain and then the relief.After remembering each and every detail her shoulders sagged and she layed back down thinking what to do.She dedinitely had gotten attached to him last night.It was not just a one night stand but then what was it.She was too lost in her musings to notice that he was awake now too.Like her the hangover struck him too.He repeated the same process that she did and when he realized where he was and why he got a little confused and kept mum thinking what to do next.Last night he spilled more than he should have but He did not regret it what was bothering him was how to broach the subject or more importantly did she even want to go there again.He decided to step up to the plate and break the silence.He took a deep breath and said
"good Morning"
it came out a little hoarse because of the hangover.
She was surprised that he was awake and calm considering everything that happened.She decided to go with the flow and see where the talk takes them
"morning to you too"
Silence prevailed again.Both of them were confused as to what to say or how to act.She knew he was tensed as he was the one who opened up to her and let out his pent up feelings.She just kept her head on his chest and once again started drawing patterns along the scar.He just tangled his fingers in her hair and caressed them.Silence was getting heavier and tension in the room was so thick that it could be cut with a knife so easily.Suddenly she blurted
"I never had the strength to do it"
"what"He asked confused as he had no idea what she was talking about.
"Try Suicide you know"
"you don't have any reason"
"Oh!I have plenty trust me"
"really"
"well then meybe they are not good enough"
"How do you know you dont even know me or my life"
"Well are you gonna tell or do I have to guess"
"My parents disowned me"
Her reply shocked him as he hadn't predicted this.Yes he did saw pain swimming in her orbs yesterday but this was the reason he couldn't have guessed
"Why"
He whispered ever so gently so that she does not close up once again he wanted to know her,Her pain.It was just this strong urge that he could not define.
"Because I wanted to be a Dancer and I did not love Shivam"
He chuckled a little at her random answer.It does not Make any sense.Why would someone disown their daughter just because she wanted to be dancer or because she didn't love someone called Shivam.It was ridiculous.
"You've got to be kidding me"
"No I am not"
"It does not make any sense,Will you kindly elaborate"
Silence prevailed again.He was curious to know but somewhere he was scared that she might close up again.He knew she had miles high walls around her heart.He knew that all the alcohol and drugs were just a means to be someone who is not vulnerable.He waited patiently for her to continue...


to be continued😈

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Res

Unre

Sorry for late unres
But u knw naa i was nt well

Comming to update everytime i read this ssz update one word come to my mind
That is HEAVY
Heavy emotionally
Romance is also very very heavy
And so much involment of physicality which proves u r defo nt a masoom at all 😉
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
res
unres😃
thank u for updating n a bada wala thank u for dedicating it to me🤗
this had become one of my fav works with the first chapter n after this it has ensured its place in my all-time fav stories.😳😳👏
you know how much i had been waiting for the 'morning after' and it was perfect. the mellow yet intense morning was just what the dramatic night needed. their apprehensions were beautifully brought forth. i love how real you've kept them both.
'he did not regret it' those 5 words told me more about swayam than an essay could have done. im so happy sharon has realized that this is more than a one night stand but hasn't pulled away as a result.. im as shocked as swayam to learn that sharon's parents disowned her and that too for such a frivolous reason😲😲
loved how understanding swayam is and how much he wants to know her n her pain. can't wait to read further so you better update soon.
Edited by austen4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
it was an awesum update
beautifully penned sply t confusion part aftr t hangova n thr awkwardness 👏
plz update soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
OMG harshu... kya udate hai...i love the way u write chotse hi sahi damdaar hai update...waiting for next part 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Wooww!! it was awesome 👏
Waiting for the next part. Plz update it soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

At last you updated!

A great build up for the further storyline.. Waiting for the more of it..😊Thanks for the pm.. Update soon n do pm me..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
I will comment long but I need to read the next part ..I wanna read it... all I can say its super awesome one really loved this ss 😊

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