Baby when You are drunk and I am high(swaron ss)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

harshi----

okay---first of all----i am right now feeling too hot---and that is saying something.

it was fast, breakneck paced...and i am panting from trying to keep up.

in such chapters people more often than not overdo the description part---or the erotica part.

but here---it was kinda----well horrifying the way it was absolutely senseless but terribly sense numbing. it was far from perfect--the situation that is---but yet just perfect.

i hope i can write like you someday harshi.

bold, depraved, and beautiful. dark can be beautiful too. meaningless void---they are drunk---and this relationship---a one night stand---is a dark void.

but still null sometimes is not just a black hole----it might be the creation of something ---the creation of evrything. the big bang.

it might be the creation of something they have never known---something beautiful.

it was so beautiful it hurt, harshi.

just salute.

all my love---

medha dii

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

awesome update dear... 😊

it was romantic... 😳 i guess u have totally justified ur title of ur ss... 😆

Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Kiddo yeh tune likha like seriously 😲
Tu toh koi angle se kiddo Nahi hai..
Oh gosh it was dam wild n hot. .
Read 2nd n 3rd part together..
Both were awesome. .
Am not able to tell anything yaar. .
I can't believe u wrote somethin like dis itna wild..
It was really amazing. .
U penned it down brilliantly..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

I hvnt read this at all
Strange na
Well just read 1st part
And its unique
Its quite heavy sharon is like a bad boy

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Part2
So romance has startd
Ahm ahm
Quite heavy one
Nyc
I m.loving it

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

God am shocked lol
Happy wala shock

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rinku90

@rinku90

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Just read all the three parts together.All are simply awesome.
U are definitely not a kid😆
In the first part u described a high and drunk sharon beautifully.
The third part was bold and it was surprising as it came from u.Loved it to the core.
The way sharon was feeling swayam's pain and wanted to take it away was written beautifully.
Harshi i like ur writing style.
Thanks for the PM.

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Shweta

@addicted_love

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Wow ! A very bold update harshita ! 😊
Liked it a lot 😊

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Whoa...

that was pretty amazingly written!!

that was perfectly detailed!!

it had enough of an affect to make me blush...

that scenario was definitely...different...

but you did an amzing job writing it!!

UPDATE SOON!!!

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

he did what😲

oh my god! how did you even come up with this?!!

just thinkin about it is making my stomach roll.

the way she was affected by his pain n was ready to do whatever it took to soothe hom, made me fall in love with her.

the sex scene was beautifully written. nowhere did it appear vulgar at all, the urgency n d desperation to get a even a seconds relief from the pain clawing away at their insides came forth vividly.it truly was "two broken souls healing each other".

another line i really loved was "his scar was the symbol of how strong yet weak he was". so true.

you are a very mature n clean writer. there is no fussy beating around the bush, its bold n in your face and i love it.👏

plz update this early, i wanna read what happens when the haze dissolves.

Edited by austen4ever - 12 years ago