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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Nice intro... Continue soon


thank u..yup will continue


thank u ...


thank u ...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

Nice start... Like d concept very much
Do continue
Update next part soon:-)

thank u ...
will defo continue...
and will try to update it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: suman4evr

21st century Jodha - Akbar...give me! give me! give me!😃...I love this concept of yours and the intro...please update soon...cant wait to read more


yup 21st century me hamarey AkDha...
thank u ...😊
will update it ASAP...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey It's just Amazing FF yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I really loved your concept and that intro of JA.❤️ 😳
Waise I want to know which country are they living in?! 😆
And I'm eagerly waiting to read this 21st Century Akdha Story! 😳
Pls Continue Soon and Do PM me. 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: janvie

Hey It's just Amazing FF yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I really loved your concept and that intro of JA.❤️ 😳
Waise I want to know which country are they living in?! 😆
And I'm eagerly waiting to read this 21st Century Akdha Story! 😳

Pls Continue Soon and Do PM me. 😊 😳 😳

thank u ...😃

lols..meney ab tak usey naam nahi diya hey denekey bat kud batavungi..😆

yup will contnue it soon..and will pm u ...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

loved it,do continue soon..😊

thank u ..yup will continue...

thank u ...😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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CH1:WHEN CRUELNESS MEETS SWEETNESS
It was a country where still monarchism exist..that to of mugals.. but yes it was well developed and modern country .all the religion people were living in the country not only the Islamic people..but also Hindus,Christians,Sikkim jst like our India..but the upper hand was always of Islamic people as the ruler was also one of them.
the shansha was discussing the problems with his minster in his chamber
"sir the people who had filed a case against us on a land issue has got a an famous lawyer for them,what will we do now?" asked the minster to the shansha.
"i wonder frm where the people got such courage to file a case against us?and on to that they also got a lawyer?"said the shansha
"but sir what will we do now?"ask the minster
"sorry to disturb u people sir but the prince had already taken an action on this issue"said the other minster.
"what ?when?"asked the shansha in shock.
"jst now "replyd the minster
" where is jalal now?"ask the shansha
"the prince is in the royal garden talking with the lawyer who is heird by the that people."said the
minster.
the shansha and his minsters went to the garden and saw the soldiers beating the lawyer and the lawyer fell on a person feet who was sitting on a chair at that place and begged for mercy.blood was coming out of the lawyers forehead.the person sitting in the chair kept his hand on his forehead and cleaned the blood off his head and "bag ja".he said in commanding voice the lawyer felt happy and started to run from there.but before he could cross the royal garden .the princess rosed from his chair and took the bow and arrow for one of the soldiers and point it to the lawyer's back and released it .the arrow went straight inside through the lawyer body and hanged him the royal palace's wall. the prince went near the lawyer who was hanging to the palace walls and removed the arrow and made him fall on the ground."hamarey hat si bach key jan ka ek hi ras tha hey wo upar ja hey"said jalal and sighed his soldiers to take the body away. he smiled at his abbajan and went into his chamber.

Jalal's day never ends without hurting ya killing ya at least bit up some one

In the same kingdom a little grl on a road side was try hard to pluck a flower on the top of a tree.the little soul was try her hard but was not able to reach the top as she was really vry small.jst then jodha came out of her house near to her car and saw this and went to the little grl and asked in a sweet voice "wo flower chahiye kya?".the kid nodded in yes and jodha startd trying to pluck the flower .well frist she too fail in plucking it,but finally she was successful in it . and she give the flower to the little girl ,girl was really vry happy and she gave a peck on jodha's check and "thank u di" with a wide smile on her face."its okay dear "jodha replied with a sweet smile,pulling the little girl's checks .she loves it when any one smile or becomes happy because of her.she never back off frm helping anyone.
Jodha's day never ends without making atleast one person happy
In the evening jalal was gng to his friend b'day blast when he sudden remembrd that he frgt to get a gft for him.soon he parked his car got down for that and crossed the road and went into the store ,got the gft.but while crossing the road again he got hit by a car and guess who car was it ?who else it was our jodha's car .she was try to avoid hitting a grl who came under car and hitd it to our jalal and jalal got wounded on his head and fell unconscious.jodha got down her car and rushed to him and trd her hard to wake him up.but he didn't woke up.she jst then saw that his head was bleeding .she felt really bad that because of her some one had got hurtd.with the help of some people dere she successfully place him in her car and took him to her house and she done the necessary first aid to him...and sat beside the bedpost and fell asleep at the same
place.
PRECAP:
jalal gains his conscious
jodha ask sorry to jalal about the accident
jalal saves jodha from falling ..
Author's Note:
i knw the chap was not up to the mark ..but next chap paka awsum wali update dungi. thank u for all ur lovely commnt, i loved reading them. .i hope u people will like the update ..and guys pls avoid commnt in one wrd or one line nice, awsum,thanks for the pm and update soon. such stuff's.pls do wrte what u really feel abt this chap..criticismis and suggestnsare always welcome ...silent reader to if possible do comment.pls give ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.as i didn't do the proof reading so pls ignore typo's...and for pm's add me...
luv,
renu

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dear, we understand u need to build up the story first, awaiting the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update... Like it
U hv dne a gr8 job

Continue soon
Will b waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you for the pm- i liked the contrast of characters- that how his day is not complete unless he kills or beats someone up (not that i am saying that is good thing for any person) and how her day is not complete unless she makes someone happy. it would be great to see how their story unfolds.

do continue soon!

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