AkDha FF:UNFORTUNATE COALESCE TURNS TO LOVE(poll added)

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

its amazing do continue soon.

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awesome update dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it.❤️
You have shown the differences of Jalal and Jodha's personality quite nicely-one is an Angel while another is a Monster!! 😉 😆
Waiting to see how will these two poles apart ppl will fall in love!! 😳
And OMG Jodha ne Jalal ka accident kar diya,And took him her home for treatment!! 😲 😉 😳 Hope We get some Akdha moments like Jalal mesmerized by her beauty and innocence ☺️
And Precap is really interesting dear!! 😉 😳
Pls Continue Soon. 😊 😳 😳
Thanks for the PM!! 😃

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Sumanpreet Ojla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

OMG Jodha hit Jalal with her car😲...i can only imagine what he would do to her when he regains his conscience...or i can wait for your next update to know what happens😛...well overall loved your first chapter...it was written very well👍🏼...cant wait to read some more...update soon and thanx for the pm🤗

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Very nice update.

Thanks for the pm.

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Tahniat Ahmad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Really very nice girl!
Waiting for the next one

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TheShySoul12

@TheShySoul12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: leelu0001
nice update dear, we understand u need to build up the story first, awaiting the next update

thanks for understndng...😊

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
Nice update... Like it
U hv dne a gr8 job

Continue soon
Will b waiting 4 next update

thank u...

yup will continue it soon

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TheShySoul12

@TheShySoul12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ashpat
thank you for the pm- i liked the contrast of characters- that how his day is not complete unless he kills or beats someone up (not that i am saying that is good thing for any person) and how her day is not complete unless she makes someone happy. it would be great to see how their story unfolds.

do continue soon!

its okay ...😃

will defo contnue soon...😊

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TheShySoul12

@TheShySoul12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: aanchal_c
its amazing do continue soon.

thank u..

yup will contnue it soon...

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
loved it...

happi that u liked it...😊

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TheShySoul12

@TheShySoul12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: janvie
Awesome update dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it.❤️
You have shown the differences of Jalal and Jodha's personality quite nicely-one is an Angel while another is a Monster!! 😉 😆
Waiting to see how will these two poles apart ppl will fall in love!! 😳
And OMG Jodha ne Jalal ka accident kar diya,And took him her home for treatment!! 😲 😉 😳 Hope We get some Akdha moments like Jalal mesmerized by her beauty and innocence ☺️
And Precap is really interesting dear!! 😉 😳
Pls Continue Soon. 😊 😳 😳
Thanks for the PM!! 😃

thank u...

don't say jalal a monster yaar ..

yup jodha ne jalal ka accident karidi..

may Akdha moments ho sakthehey...i don't knw..😆

will contnue soon..

and thanks for such a big comment...😃..dil khush karadi...and surely will contnue soon...

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TheShySoul12

@TheShySoul12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: suman4evr
OMG Jodha hit Jalal with her car😲...i can only imagine what he would do to her when he regains his conscience...or i can wait for your next update to know what happens😛...well overall loved your first chapter...it was written very well👍🏼...cant wait to read some more...update soon and thanx for the pm🤗

yes ..she hit him...

thank u ...😊

will try to update it ASAP...and its okay ...🤗