AkDha FF:UNFORTUNATE COALESCE TURNS TO LOVE(poll added)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hie AkDhaians🤗..am renu,hope some of u knw me if no then hello ...aja kal meri dimaga me JA hi chalatha rahathahey..meri mind ka tha koi kam hi nahi hey koi na koi concept soch tha rahathahey tho meney JA bhi ek concept socha hey aur ab hum wo concept ko ff rup me aap sabkey samney pesh karana chahathey hey..tho meri mind me ye soch aya agar hamarey AkDha 21st century me hothey tho kesey hotha? i knw it is an lamb idea but still me es conpct pi stry lekhaney wali hu.i jst will take the characters and thoda sa storyline of the stry ..rest will be my imagination..and es stry me jalal ji ki 100 wife nahi hongey ..kyu ki es jamanemey ye sab nahi chelega na..agar wo 100 shadiya karenegey tho jhootey padenegey na..😆ruku will be cousin,childhood friend and girlfriend of jalal...but wife tho srif aur srif hamara jodha hi banegi... this stry will go in my style es me sirf mera imagination chalega aur kuch nahi ..bohat over hogaya hey na? chalo chodiye me ab apaki dimaga aur nahi kana chahithihu so i will jaldi give the intro of my stry ..so here it go...

INTRODUCTION:

It was a country where still monarchism exist..that to of mugals.. but yes it was well developed and modern country .all the religion people were living in the country not only the Islamic people..but also Hindus,Christians,Sikkim jst like our India..but the upper hand was always of Islamic people as the ruler was also one of them .due to ruler responsibilities the shansha didn't concentrate about his son ..his son was brought by the shansha's brother's wife MA .JALAL was totally under MA's control.he use-to do what ever she says .so as the child had grown up he became an cruel and heart less person.he had become an such ziddhi that if he wants some thing he should get it by hook or crook ..he doesn't care for any one else expect MA.he was plaining to get marry to his cousin .but destiny h ad different plain for him..

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On the other hand there was a beautiful girl who can't stand any injustices to any one ,specially for weaklings..JODHA is a daughter of a very rich business magnate .she loves her family alot .she is always held up in doing social causes..the smile on someone's face because of her was her happiness.hate people who are cruel and heart less..knws to handle guns,sword and all the fighting missionary.she was not only beautiful externally but was also beautiful internally too.. don't know why but she alway hated the mugals and there rulering.there cruelness every thing abt them make her hate them..she was plaining to get marry to the son of her dad's childhood friend but she doesn't knw that god had other plain for her..

what happens when this people meet each other ?how will these people get along each other and fall in love?will jodha's love change jalal?or will he remain the same?

so bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ..let me knw if u want me to wrte it further or not...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed

Author's Note:

If my story resemble to any others stry its jst truly a coincidence .don't think that i have copped it ,as i will never ever do it because i myself don't spare such people and i am a girl who think not writing anything and keeping quite is far better than stealing some one's work and getting applause...i hope u people understand why am writing this note. and one more thing please only do comment what you fell about my ff ..i don't mind about it..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept...I loved your introduction...👍🏼

Please continue...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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im impress with all the forum members who writes with diff style n diff scenario... In reality sometimes people just recycle n reuse n makes the fans angry 😆...
Do continue 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hye!
it is awesome dear, i just loved it
& thank u soo much for giving a new story track of akdha of 21st century
i to had a same thought
thank u dear thak u soo... much for giving this ff
please do continue soon
i'm eagerly waitting for it
🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start... Like d concept very much
Do continue
Update next part soon:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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21st century Jodha - Akbar...give me! give me! give me!😃...I love this concept of yours and the intro...please update soon...cant wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Super Kool

Nice concept...I loved your introduction...👍🏼


Please continue...😊


thank u ...
yup will continue...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyya6

im impress with all the forum members who writes with diff style n diff scenario... In reality sometimes people just recycle n reuse n makes the fans angry 😆...

Do continue 😳


well to tell the truth this recycling and reusing make me also angry ...😆
will continue ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_pooja

hye!
it is awesome dear, i just loved it
& thank u soo much for giving a new story track of akdha of 21st century
i to had a same thought
thank u dear thak u soo... much for giving this ff
please do continue soon
i'm eagerly waitting for it
🤗

hey..
thank u ..glad that u have loved it 😛
its okay yaar..there is no need to thank
really? then ek hi5 tho banthahey😉
will continue soon...🤗

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