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Posted: 11 years ago
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CH2:THE MORNING COFFEE

It was morning. Jodha was still sleeping near the bedpost.soon jalal gains his conscious.he was slowly opened his eye.as everyday he stretched his arms but wait it was not his room..the room looked like a grl's room.he sat on the bed with a jerk and his eyes scanned the whole room at last found jodha near the bedpost .he was jst lost in her beauty for few sec..she was looking utterly cute while sleeping her long hair were left open and the wind was playing with them.he was mesmerized by her beauty "masha alla kithini khubsurat hey "he thought to himself.studs of her hair were falling on her face disturbing her sleep. he slowly lock the studs of her hair behind her ears.she jst give an sweet smile in her sleep.aftr sometime she woke up and found jalal staring at her ,she sat straight witha jerk and he siad looking at him "apa kesi ho? are u feeling better now?"she said looking at him."yup me tek hu BTW me yeha kesi ayahu?"jalal ask jodha ."well wo kya hey na kal rat apaka accident huvatha ..aur apa unconscious hogi the so i brought u here for ur medication "jodha reply getting up frm the place she sat. "oh acha thanks for helping "jalal said giving jodha a smile.."hmm actually i have to say u sry becoz wo accident menehi kiya tha.."jodha said ."kya?"jalal shouted."ah actually i can explain about this..wo kya hey na..ek choti bachi ko bachaneki koshi me meney apako accident karadi ..am really sry abt that ..me apako chot nahi pochana chahithi thi..trust me" jodha said while tears were making dere way frm her eye.jala stood up frm the bed and sweep ed tear frm her checks and said "its okay u don't mean to do it rght then why are u cryng?"."i can't see any one suffering because of me.."said jodha.that it he was hell impressd by her."okay me tumare liya coffee lathihu"said jodha and went into kitchen and came back with two cups of coffee.

There was a long silence none of them talk anything .but finally jalal broked the silence "so ethney badey ghar me akaley rahitho ho tum?" ."nope actually merey mom dad aur meri do choti sister yeha rahathey hey" said jodha sipping her coffee "oh tho tum log thin ho ?"said jala having his coffee."nope we are actually seven i have four elder brothers and two younger sisters"said jodha aftr that there was a long chatting section b/w them and jodha was telling everthng abt her family her taste and jalal did the same but he never mention that he was a prince ."well i think i have to lev .my dad may be waiting for me ..it was great meeting you jodha ..cia. "said jalal "okay fine cia..but take care of your self and have a great day ."said jodha "yup okay "said jala and he left the door and was about to leve the gate .jodha saw jalal's jacket in the house and she took it and rushed towrds him .in the running process jodha's leg got twisted and she was about to fall .but jalal save her frm falling .she closed her eye in fear .she slowly opned her eye to find herself in his arms...her eye's got locked with his eye and they shared a LLHH moment.aftr some time they both came to there sense and jalal bid a gud bye to jodha ,had left to his place .but still both were think about the other..it was night but still our AkDha were lost in thoughts of each other..and son both went to sleep.

Next day jodha's dad company receives an email frm the shansha .that they shld handover there company building to them as they want to extend the mughal exports which was beside it ...jodha's dady reject to give it to them .so the next day they sent some people to close the company and jodha came to know about this and she has suggestd her dad that they will go to court on this issue and get the justices

PRECAP:

jodha witness jalal's curelness

jodha and jalal's second meeting .

jalal and jodha first fight

jalal gets impressed by jodha's braveness..

well i know it was short and not upto mark am really sry about that guys am not feeling well so i was not able to wrte a gud update this time but next time pakka super wala update dungi...and thank u for all ur lovely commnt, i loved reading them. .i hope u people will like the update ..and guys pls avoid commnt in one wrd or one line nice, awsum,thanks for the pm and update soon. such stuff's.pls do wrte what u really feel abt this chap..criticismis and suggestnsare always welcome ...silent reader to if possible do comment.pls give ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.as i didn't do the proof reading so pls ignore typo's...and for pm's add me...
luv,
renu

Edited by 123renudrlng - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Hey Awesome + Amazing Update!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Really Cute!! 😳 Loved it.❤️
Jalal again back to his Tharkey mode and got lost in Jodha's beauty!! 😳 😆
Their convo was really cute,fun to read!! 😊
The best part of the interaction in room was Jodha crying,Jalal wiping her tears and She saying that She cannot see anyone suffering because of her!! 👏 ⭐️ 😳 Even I'm amazed and super-impressed by her angelic nature and qualites. 😃 😳 No Wonder,Our Prince must be in Dreamland!! 😉 😆
And the last part where She rushed to give his jacket,then slips and falls was good as well. 😊
I'm waiting for the story to move to their Marriage actually!! 😳 😆 I can't wait for that!! 😳
The Precap is really Interesting!! 😛 😃 😳
Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳
And Thanks for the PM.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update.
Thanks a lot for the pm.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ausme update... like it...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey dear its been so long waiting...😔 update next part na... hw much more we hv to wait...???😔 plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

hey dear its been so long waiting...😔 update next part na... hw much more we hv to wait...???😔 plz continue soon...

well dear sorry to say but i am think to discontinue this ff...as am not getting god responses for this..😔.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123renudrlng

well dear sorry to say but i am think to discontinue this ff...as am not getting god responses for this..😔.


bt ur ff is really very nice... bt still as u want...
i would like to suggest u why dont u create a poll and ask other members whether they like it or nt...
becoz there r many silent reader who dont comment but jst read nd leave...
btw many other ff r also hving dis problm not getting deserving response... for that even i hv also make a post for requesting khdha fans to atleast hit d like button...

rest is all ur will... according to me i like ur ff very much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA


bt ur ff is really very nice... bt still as u want...
i would like to suggest u why dont u create a poll and ask other members whether they like it or nt...
becoz there r many silent reader who dont comment but jst read nd leave...
btw many other ff r also hving dis problm not getting deserving response... for that even i hv also make a post for requesting khdha fans to atleast hit d like button...

rest is all ur will... according to me i like ur ff very much...

well thanks for ur suggestion dear ..i will defo wrk on it...😃
and am glad that atleast some one likes my work...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123renudrlng

well thanks for ur suggestion dear ..i will defo wrk on it...😃
and am glad that atleast some one likes my work...😛


u r most welcome dear...😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Renu! 😊

Amazing Concept! Different Story!😊😊
Loved it👏👏
Continue soon!!😳

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