TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know, I know,u guys are probably thinking ki 4 ff hai, wo to thik se update karti nahi, ab EK AUR!!! Par please try to understand, i got tons of plots swimming in my head,i have tried to pen those down later, bt now they are creating WRITER'S BLOCK for me...i will not be able to update the rest of the ffs with a clear mind until i discharge atleast some of the new ideas out of my head...OH ! another MOST IMPORTANT thing, i HATE TO BE MISUNDERSTOOD..I want to say this CLEARLY to all, that i won't copy other's work..(even if i do, either i have asked permission first,or the similarity would be unintentional) & if anyone sees similarities IN SCENES or IN THE PLOT ITSELF pls contact me & tell me straightforwardly,i would be happy to change,if there is really similarity.

So,here is my LONG DUE...

TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story




CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED ALONG THE STORY




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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



Prologue-
My dear babaji...Oops!! sorry sorry,diary pe likhte waqt to sab MY DEAR DIARY likhte hai na,par meri koi galti nai hai babaji, app ki galti hai...are!! aise ghur kya rahe hai?? Apki galti hi to hai! Main to saradin apse bate karti rehti hu,apni manki sari bate SIRF apse share karti hu,to phir meri diary kaun padega,diary thodi apne apko padega,app hi to padoge..to phir galti kiski hui,ha..bolo,bolo?

Accha chodo,ye 1st january hai na..har bar ki tarha iss baar vi main apne bare mein thoda likhti hu. Mera naam GEET HANDA hai,just gave the 2nd biggest exam of my life,now CHUTTI!!!! Main ek middle class family se hu,are babaji,Gussa kyun karte ho?? middle class hu mujhe isse koi shikwa nahi,main bohut khush hu...Meri choti si ,pyari si family mein..Mere papa Mohinder Handa,mamma Rano Handa,aur mera Khadus,par pyaar karne wala bhai Brij ...pata hai,ek aur naya member vi add hone wali hain,wo na, mere brij bhai ki shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai,bhabi mujhe bohut pasand hai,bas bhabi ki padai khatam ho jaye...

Ek secret batati hu,mera na, aj tak koi boyfriend nahi hai...actually pehle mere sab friends ko proudly batati thi,par wo mujh par haste hai,isiliye ye apka aur mera secret,ok babaji?

Waise ek baat batau..mujhe ye accha nahi lagta,timepass karne ke liye,ya propose kiya hai -dil tut jayega bechare ka ye soch kar jab log dating karte hai...kya faida? Baad me khud ro,usko rulao,aur dono gharwalo ka vi dil todo. Ha agar pyaar saccha hai to alag baat hai...haina babaji? Phir to dono kisi vi musibaat ka samna kar sakte hai saath milkar. Mujhko to pyaar hi nahi hua abtak..shayed meri arranged marriage hogi. Arranged ho ya Love marriage,bas pyaar karne wala hona chahiye.

Paisa kam ho,surat acchi na ho, to vhi chalega...lekin sirat acchi honi chahiye,wo mujhe samjhe,mere dil ki baat janne ki kosish kare,bas aur kuch nahi babaji...Are!! app vi na babaji...!!! Kya soch rahe ho,ki main sirf demand hi karti hu..main unhe vi dungi na babaji...dheeer sara pyaar,main unki dil ki baat samajhne ki kosish karungi...thoda wo kare,thoda hum...aise hi to naye rishte mazbut hote hai..haina babaji???

Waise mera ek khwab hai...i want to wake up everymorning in His arms,unke bahon me samakar...mujhe un couples ki tara nahi banna jo life ke ek mod se raat ko WO (me thinking-do i really need to explain what is "WO"! ) karne ke baad ek dusre ko pith (back) dekha kar so jate hai...Hai rabba!! main ye besharmo ki tarha kya likh rahi hu!! Babaji app ye wala part mat padna,ok...NO CHEATING!!

Waise bata sakte ho ki main kaha hu?? Main plane me hu,brij bhai apne pehli salary se mujhe kuch nahi de sake..to unhone kaha tha,ki sabar rak main tereko bada gift dunga...so here i am flying to my mama who lives in Delhi to spend my vacation there...Pehli baar plane main,pehli baar akele...bada maza...

Suddenly the plane started to shook terribly,geet shoved her diary & pen in her bag & clutched the bag close to her,uske papa ne kaha tha.."Jo vi ho,ye jaruri documents wali bag mat gumana"...the attendants tried to make the people calm,saying this problem is momentary...par shayed kismat ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha...the plane CRASHED!

PLEASE READ THE SUMMARY HERE BEFORE GOING TO ANY MISCONCEPTION ABOUT THE PLOT WHILE READING THE PROLOGUE.

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Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on the new story
nice start
geet seems quite innocent
waiting for maan's entry!!!!!!
its gonna be interesting after maan's entry😉
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start... Nice prologue but title is bir confusing
Its geets story is she going to turn bitch??? After this plane crash??
Do cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
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start sorry for commentin on basis of summary and plane crash hmmm interesting start



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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start

ye kya starting me hi plane crash!!!!!!!!!😲😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww
it was something suprb
geet an innocent girl
n the title say BITCH'S STORY
mamla kya hai
jo b ho
dont do any bad plz😆😆
mera maanu ayega😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz na ye bitch wagira hata do na title se plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept
liked it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all lots of congo for the fab new FF.The prologue and d summary gave a nice idea about the story.Its gonna be interesting, super interesting.

A simple girl Geet,losing her memory in a plane crash and suddenly a stranger[most probably Maan,unless U have smthng else in store] claims that she is his wife and takes away.Great.

Waiting for first part.

Thanx for d pm buddy

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