TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting to see wt maan does now...
Loved the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏



so chris loves geet😲



what will happen now?😕




did maaneet misunderstood geet?😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god Chris loves geet 😲 this cant be
and now maan will doubt geet oh god 😭😭 kya twist hein
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12 n13
nice update
geet actually didt get her memory bt saw the documents related to geet...
n this dhruv
now more misunderstanding ...
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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



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NOTE :-
@valli22- ,As Chris was Maan's best friend,maan had told him of his decision,which he had taken after marriage,that is to LIVE HIS DREAM LIFE WITH AKRITI...ofcourse that was using geet as akriti...bt Kehte hai na,pyaar kab ho jaye pata nahi chalta...with maan same thing happened. Though MAAN started with the intention of using geet as replacement of akriti,at last he feel for GEET herself..bt as Chris had stopped coming to Km or meeting anyone,he doesn't know about this development & still thinks that maan is using Geet.
TO EVERYONE- Geet NOW knows About Akriti
Part 14
Maan cut the call & banged the phone on the table....
Ye nahi ho sakta,not again...Ye
He suddenly thought of something & redialed the number.
Oh maan,i knew that though you cut my call rudely,u will call me back.

You BA**** how do you know about Geet??
Dhruv laughed,did you forget that with me being ur ex best friend,ur late wife's lover ,i am also ur cousin??
Maan gritted his teeth.
yeah you didn't invite me,& i felt really bad about that you know...
Maan was silent,actually trying to control his anger cause he still had some questions to ask.
Anyway,my dear sis called me to inform me about that duplicate,since thanks to you,i have been driven out of my house.
When did you see geet??

Oh,She was damn sexy all wet,...u know.
WHERE DID YOU SEE HER??
Chill dude,it's not that i went to see her,i was just driving my car, returning home,bt your wife & Chris were hugging such passionately in the rain on the road openly,so what could i do!! I just couldn't help bt notice them.
YOU ARE MAKING UP THINGS.
Oh NO!!! If i was making up things then i couldn't have given you such accurate details!! Such as...how he carried her romantically to the car in princess sty...
Maan threw the phone across the room seething in anger,then started to pack his things in hurriedly...

****
Chris drove geet to home since refused to come with any other member of the house.
To her Chris was the person who had deceived her the LEAST & had almost no reason for deceiving her more.
So all the members could so nothing accept to be home & prepare to welcome Geet & think ways to ask forgiveness & make her happy.
The whole drive with geet was silent...she didn't spoke a word,so in contrast with her bubbly self. She just stared outside the window with a blank expression.

What will you do now? What have you decided?? that was the question Chris couldn't help but ask her...
She abruptly looked at him...that is when he saw something in her eyes...an expression of a trapped bird...
She didn't say anything,just looked at him for sometime & then looked down at her joined hands on her lap...

Chris stopped the car infront of the main door.
Geet didn't even realize it,she was so occupied with her thoughts...
Chris looked at her for sometimes,now the feeling he had for her,he felt as if they were multiplied,he wanted to badly to protect this petite girl infront of him who was sitting their with sagged burdened shoulder...

Geet...he called her.
Tumhara ghar aa gaya.
In an instant,her expression changed,...her emotions were so tensed that she couldn't even open the door of the car.
Chris went out of the car & opened the door for her...

As she was going to enter,Chris held her hand.
Geet..., He came infront of her.
I know that you are confused now...i know that you think it's unforgivable what they did...
Bt believe me Geet,after he discovered that you were not his wife,he did everything he could to find your parents,to contact them...he even thought to make you remember everything...bt medically it was very risky & unpredictable. So i advised him not to do so ...Then he decided to marry you for your sake...

Geet just stood their listening without saying anything,without any expression.

Geet,even if you can't forgive maan,think about dadi & others...they always saw you as their family...not as akriti.

Geet was still silent.
Chris sighed, I am not taking maan's side or something...just think carefully...&...if you ever need anything,don't hesitate to call me anytime...ok.
He hugged her...not to prove anything or take advantage...just too comfort her,just to sooth her,a warm hug,as a friend...yes ,he loved geet,bt he knew,it was not the time... He advised her to think carefully because he believed in sincerity in every relation,friendship..or love...

SO DHRUV WAS RIGHT . Maan said with venom in his tone
Chris turned back immediately...Geet's face was hidden from maan's view.So he couldn't see her...couldn't see the eyes in tears which were blank till now...
Maan's it's not what you think.

Maan was in rage,not in his right mind...his rage blinded him ,so he blabbered all he could...
Oh Yes,IT IS EXACTLY what i think...7 days...Only 7 days Akriti!!!! DO You need a man Next to you So much that you don't care who it is!

MAAN THINK BEFORE whAT YOU SAY.

I AM SAYING WHAT I SHOULD SAY TO AKRITI or should I SAY GEET!!. I Thought i was wrong,that though u look exactly like Akriti,u are maybe not like her. But I WAS WRoNG..U Are cheaper than her...First openly on road..Then You have the guts to Be lovey dovey IN FRONT OF MY HOUSE?

Maan Stop it before you regret.

Yes I AM REGrettING that i kept a girl like THIS in my House...That i thought that she will be different...WHAT I DIDN't ENDURE!!! Ye Sab Natak karna...Now it was completely Maan's rage talking,not him...

I was Right at the first time...ALL GIRLS WITH THAT FACE ARE SAME...SHAMELESS SL"TS . Now I don't even fell bad for THAT NIGHT
Geet ran into the house ...
Geet ..Geet...Suniye..Beta.. Dadi,Dev & Meera called her..bt she didn't stop...

They were coming out of the house hearing all the screaming,no,actually they could hear all the rubbish of maan loud & clear .
Dadi ,apne isse dhakke mar kar bahar kyun nikal diya,humse innocent hone ka natak karti rahi,pata nahi kabse,I KNOW...IT WAS ALL HEr PLAN,SHE mUST HAVE plottED EVERYTHING TO COME TO THIS HOUSE....Now maan had lost all rationality,so he was saying things without thinking...
Aisi GHATIYA LADKI KO ...

**SLAP***
No,it was not dadi this time...it was Chris,the person who never raised his hand in his lifetime,this shock was enough to silence maan.
Do you know what you are saying? What plotting,the person who ever planned anything was YOU,the person who brought her here was YOU,the person WHO SNATCHED HER PEHCHAN was YOU!! & You DARE to say that it was HER pLOTTING!!!!.

& Let me tell you one more thing,the hug wasn't like what you think. DAMN IT!! i was just trying to reassure her!!

Huh!! What is there to reassure? Don't make up things.
MAAAN! Now it was dadi...
Apko pata bhi hai ki in kuch dino mein kya hua? Geet came across the papers,she ran away from here & she was fighting between life & death ,she just came back from hospital & now THIS IS HOW YOU WELCOME HER !!!!

Maan was flashbarged ...he tried to laugh it off..no..aisa nahi ho sakta...applog geet ko bachane ke liye jhoot bol rahe hai...Dhruv called me...he saw you two in rain hugging...Maan mumbled.

Oh,so that's why you came back! & here i was thinking it was because geet didn't call you even once for a few days,so you were worried about her...Bt guess i was wrong,u came to prove your doubt right...didn't you..YOU DON"T CARE ABOUT whAR HAppens TO HER AS LONG AS YOUR DOUBTS ARE pRoveN & YOU HAVE REVENGE!!!! I am feeling so ashamed of you! Dev said disgusted.

& she was not hugging me damn it!! That was the day she came across the documents & ran from home,I found her & she fainted in my arms! Ekbar puch (ask) to liya hota geet par itna ghatiya inzaam lagane se pehle!

Now when all doubts were cleared & maan's mind clear from the fog called rage,realization dawned upon him...

Oh no! What he did...!!! Not only she knew her past...he attacked her again & again with his cruel words in her vulnerable state...when she needed him the most.

Oh geet,my sweet geet...please...ekbar...ekbar mujhe....He tried to run to her & ask forgiveness...

Chris held his hand...they were standing with their backs to each other,no actually they didn't want to face each other now...

Maan,what you think...is not totally wrong. I love Geet.

Maan stayed silent...

I am not like Dhruv. I am declaring it to you...She doesn't know about this...Bt if you make her unhappy,i will not hesitate to snatch her from you.
He left his hand & maan didn't waste anymore time to run to Geet.


*****
His heart stopped at once once he came before the room...it was dark...bt from the faint light from outside,one could easily see the shadows of mess there...

Akriti..

He tried to enter the room...

DUR RAHIYE MUJHSE,MERE PASS MAT AANA,MERA NAAM AKRITI NAHI ,GEET HAI ..GEET GEEET GEEET GEET GEEET GEET GEEET .
She screamed as she threw whatever she could around her
He stopped in his track...she was standing on the other side of the bed...more likely,trapped between that small space between wall & bed...similar to her soul...

Lean,weak figure,wrappaed in a white thin cloth...Her hairs all tangled & messed up,her heart shattering screams...aisa lagta hai jaise junnon sawar ho uspe...

Geet ,I am sorry. Mujhe maaf kar do...maine tumhe galat samjha...main...tum mujhe jo saza dena chaho de do.

She started to laugh...she started to laugh like a maniac,first just standing up..then she started to laugh so hard that her body crumbled down on the floor,as she continued to laugh more patting the bed beside her loudly...

Geet....He tried to take a step forward..he could not see her like this...never...

She abruptly stood up,with a knife in her hand,pointing at herself...pass mat aiye mere...PASS MAT AIYE!! She screamed.

Maan hurridly took a few steps back...this was the moment he feared most,kuch kar de apne apko...

She again started to laugh...Mr MAAN SING KHURANA...saza chahiye apko...she said innocently...

Tum jo saza dena chaho mujhe...

Pehle ye to decide kijiye ki kiss baat ki saza du?

Maan stayed silent...

Mujh par abhi jhoota inzaaam lagane ka? Mujh se niche is tarah baat karne ka? MUjhse itne din pyaar ka natak karne ka? Mujhe...

Geet...

Are..thak gaye..abhi to list puri bhi nahi hui hai...puri list to sunn lijiye,phir appko decide bhi to karna padega...

He didn't want to...he didn't want to hear all these...with each of his crimes told by geet...his heart felt more heavy,he felt suffocated...

To main kaha thi...ha,mujhse Jhoot bol kar yaha lane ka, mujhse meri pehchan puri tarha chinn neka (snatching), ya phir uss rat(night) ke ...

BAS KARO GEET ....Bas karo,maan closed his ears..

Agar apko suunne mein itni taklif ho rahi hai, to main kaha jaun??

Geet,main kuch bhi karne ke kiye taiyar hu,main tumhare parents ko...

Pehle mere parents ko dhund nahi paye,lekin ab wo mil jayenge!! OO,ab samjhi,jo badlaapp Akriti se nahi le paye,wo mujhse,yanii Akriti ke sakal wali ladki se lena ho gaya...to ab meri zarurat kaha...

Nahi aisa nahi hai, main tumhare liye tumhare parents ko kuch bhi karke...i will find them.

KYA KARENGE APP UNKO DHUNDKE?? KYA KAHUNGI MAIN UNKO MILKAR?? KII UNKI BETI,ITNE DIN EK PARAYE MARD Ke SAATH ek CHAD KENICHE REH RAHI HAI!!! KI UNKI BETI KOI RISHTE KE BINA,bin bihaye(without marrying) EK LADKE KE SAATH...

GEET!! I MARRIED YOU,WHAT HAPPEND TO YOU is MY FAULT.I AM READY TO TAKE THE RESPONSibility.THAT"S WHY I MARRiED YOU ...

Oh,so you are saying you married me...So tell me Mr Khurana, Pavitra Agni ko sakshi manakar apne, GEET HANDA se shadi ki?GEET HANDA ke saath Sath(7) Phere liye?GEET HANDA ke saath kasme khayi???

Maan couldn't now even look at her...no...he didn't ,GEET HANDA nahi, AKRITI ke saath usne kasme khayi thi...

NAHI NA,YOU DIDN"T MARRY ME MR>KHURANA...YOU MARRIED AKRITI...AGAIN.

Maan couldn't answer that...he didn't even know hat to say after this,how to ask for her forgiveness...how to say that he is willing to do anything ,he was willing to take all responsibility if SHE wanted...Bt he couldn't...he just stood there numb.

Geet looked at him with tears streaming down her cheeks...

Main apko maaf karne ke liya taiyar hoon...

Maan looked up startled.

Main sab bhul jane ke liye taiyar hoon...

Maan looked at her with hope...

Sirf mujhe ek baat apne dil par haat rakh ke sach sach batana...

Kuch vi Geet.

Kya apne kavi Mujhse...GEET se pyaar kiya?? Kya apne kavi GEET ko GEET ke tarha dekha???

All his hopes shattered...he couldn't answer...

Geet crumbled down on the floor again...bt this time crying...

Please leave me alone....she said sobbing...

Maan went out of the room,each step,as heavy as metal...how could he lie even now!! He didn't even once think love her as GEET,he always tried to make her as Akriti..then how could he lie...he didn't even have any rights on her,cause the marriage itself was a lie now...

WHat an irony it was,here was geet who was willing to forget & forgive everything with his one YES cause her love for him was much bigger than anything...& here was Maan,he couldn't say yes because he couldn't understand his own heart & was still living in the lie that he loved Akriti,when the truth was he loved Geet...

Precap-Itne Pass ho,phir bhi Kitne dur...


🥳🥳HAPPY DIWALI🥳🥳

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
really
he didnt just do it again man
as if it wasnt bad the first time around
now he has broken her even more
chris was just trying to help her as a friend
but you thought somehting was going on between them
thats just pathetic maan
how could you
the truth is you married her as you felt guilty
but then you fell for geet but still dont know
and now you have dared to accuse her of all crap
what do we do with him
at this rate she might just do something to herself
but i think she is stronger than that
good that he was slapped
do teen aur laga dene chahiye the
and now he has once again ruined his life and hers too
HAPPY DIWALI
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...⭐️...i was shocked when Maan believed Dhruv's words...😲...he thought that Geet is cheating him...😔...but even though Chris is good...but still i dont like him interfering in maaneet's life...😳...Geet is totally heart broken...💔...its true only that Maan has always seen Geet as Akriti and not as Geet Handa...he doesn't know only that he loves Geet...❤️ ❤️...very well written...👏...waiting maaneet to unite...😃...pls continue soon...thank u for pm...😊...HAPPY DIWALI to u too...🥳
Edited by JayeetaGurtian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved chris more in this part...he is really nice...now maaneet will suffer...I hope they sort it out together & maan realises his love for her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...

maan and geet are really in a mess...

hope maan realizes his love for geet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat big mistake Maan did..

He truly came only to prove dhruv's words.. and at last he did..

and Chris.. he was right... why should he be away when he loves geet so much but cant see him near her.. after all its maaneet na..

and Maan wat will he answer geet when he knows tat she is right

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