TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 73

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 18
awesome...
poor Geet...
hope he doesnt hurt her now...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...
bechari geet i m really feeling bad for her
maan aisa kyu kar raha hai geet ke sath
i m waiting nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago

TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



If anyone sees similarities IN SCENES or IN THE PLOT ITSELF pls contact me & tell me straightforwardly,i would be happy to change,if there is really similarity.

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Part 19

(I AM SORRY TO THOSE TO WHOM I PROMISED TO UPDATE MY JUNGLE GIRL,I WANT TO, BUT THE "idea" FOR THAT NEXT CHAPter IS not coming in my mind. I write what comes in my heart. Or else i can't write. Today too,this ff's one chapter came in my mind so i didn't delay. SORRY AGAIN )

Maan please..nahi...app hosh me nahi hai.

He laughed..hosh mein!! I am perfectly fine Geet,but YOU are the one who is still lost in her own little fantasy world of romance. Let me have THE PLEASURE TO BREAK IT...he said as he hovered over her with a predatory gleam.

Aa..aap aisa kyun keh rehe hai...maan please.

Aree!!! Why are you so scared,weren't you the one who was saying about running into my arms in that diary? Maan said mocking her.

Her eyes widened & tears made way through her eyes... is it the same person whom she loved?

So GEEt...you LOVEEE ME...hai na? Lets see how much is ur love.

Maan please...maan nahi,app abhi thik se nahi soch rahe hai..please maan aisa maar kijiye

He didn't listen to her...as he mercilessly tore the sleeves of her dress...

Suddenly it all became too quite...her pleading...her cries...all came to hault...

Only endless tears flowed from her eyes,as if she had gone dumb.

Areee!!!!...chup kyun ho gayi geet,aur ro kyun rahi ho?? Didn't you LOVE me?? He said with a cruel smile...

She didn't answer just stared at him endlessly as if she didn't understand what he was saying...didn't understand at all. As if she was just a broken doll thrown in roadside dustbin.

Hmmm,no answer, Koi baat nahi. I am sure that you will scream like a Sl*t when we really get started... He said smirking.

He desceneded his face slowly...bt was pulled away with a jerk & before he could understand,he felt a sharp sting in his cheek.


YOU bas***d!!! Chris screamed in fury.

Chris...tum yaha?!! Maan seemed a little shocked.

THANK GOD THAT DADIMA CALLED ME,OR GOD KNOWS WHAT YOU COULD HAVE DONE! TUM HOSH ME BHI HO YA NAHI!!

****

Call Chris. Meera said.

WHAT? Meera do you know what you are saying? You know that Chris loves Geet,& if he goes now...

...

BUT Chris WOULDN'T DO ANYTHING WROng with geet.

But...Dev & dadi were still reluctant.

Please dadima,dev...you know that maan wouldn't be at home & geet is alone with those scums,we can't go back because the car is damaged...& most of all...YOU KNOW THAT AFTER MAAN,we can trust geet with only chris now.

...

...

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Dev beta,call Chris. Meera is right,this isn't time for us to think about our plan's success.

****

What?? I was just giving her what she wanted! Isme meri kya galti hai! Maan said nonchalantly.

ARE YOU EVEN HEARING YOURSELF! ARE YOU EVEN MY FRIEND MAAN??
She herself wanted me to embrace her...it's all over her diary...Main maan se pyaar karti hu,I want to be in his arms...bla bla bla!
Maan mimicked her words heartlessly.

MAAN!! TUJHE KOI HAQ NAHI KISIKI FEELINGS KA MAJAK UdAne KA!

Meri galti kya hai! maine uski khwahish puri ki to ye meri galti!! Maan said slyly.

Geet scrambled up from the bed,but she couldn't even walk ...she slumped down & fainted.

GEET! Chris was horrified.

Tch!!! What a annoying girl! I thought i would have some fun tonight..& here she fainted... She is so...

Maan couldn't finish his sentence,he again felt sharp sting on his other cheek.

But this time,the only difference was.it didn't stop at that...he was showered with punches.

YOU RASCEL!!! I AM ASHAMED THAT I USED TO CALL YOU MY FRIEND! Chris said as he finally stopped & carried unconscious geet away.

***

Maan!! What did you do!? Dadi barged in his room.

He didn't budge,he kept lying on the bed with one arm over his eyes. Don't disturb dadi,waise bhi,i am having a really bad headache.

Maan beta,jo bhi apne kiya,ya karne ja rahe the...wo nashe mein tha na. Abhi bhi kuch nahi bigda. App Geet se mafi mang lena.

Why the HELL should I apologise dadi?

Ye app kya kehh rahe hai...app ka nasha shayed abhi utra nahi maan.

Maan gave a sarcastic laugh startling dadi.

Maan...!!!!

Ye accha hai,Main uski khwahish bhi puri karu,aur Mai bhi mangu!! Ulta use mujhe thanks bolna chahiye tha.

MAAN! How could you say that,wo bacchi...uski halat dekhi apne!

Finally maan removed his arm from his eyes & looked at dadi.

The coldness in those eyes made dadi cringe.

What she does & how she is,mujhe usse koi pharak nahi parta. & She is not a little kid. I can't be ready with her every mood swings... "I love maan,I want to be in his arms" likhke apni diary full karti hai,but when i touch her,i become the Culprit!!! I am sure that she did this kind of drama with her boyfriends too...DISGUSTING S**T.

MAAN!!!

Maan didn't look at her anymore & again covered his eyes with his arm.

Now go dadi,go be at the princess's beck & call ,or she will start crying at that too & again blame me. He said in a monotonous voice.


Dadi couldn't even fathom what to say to him anymore...to tell the truth,she couldn't even recognize her own grandchild.

She couldn't even dream in her worst nightmare what she heard now & after coming back at night...

***

Sab hum logo ki galti hai dadi. We wanted to make them together without even caring about geet,without even noticing that Maan is not that same maan anymore..that he has changed...for worst.

Think kaha apne dev...from now on,we would never try to bring them together. We will support Geet...help her to start a new life,uske baad...

Jise geet pasand kare...we would accept him, Meera finished dadi's unfinished words solemnly while stroking sleeping geet's head.

* ****

Sun streamed through the white curtains & fell on him. But Maan didn't bother to move. He was still lying in the same position,with his one arm covering his eyes...

EXCEPT...

Ha ha ha ha...He was laughing like mad now...

Now i am worst now. Haina Geet? Accha hai...

...

Accha hai...ki you hate me now...

Accha hai...ki...

His voice cracked...tears streamed down his cheeks.

I am Sorry Geet

Main kya karta Geet. Party main...jab maine tumhari batein suni...to mujhe ehsaas hua,you will never move on from me & start your new life. Mujhe ehsaas hua ,kaise i eclipsed your life,your mind your heart.

I realized,you will never make place in your heart as long as you love me.

But you love me like crazy geet...You wouldn't have forgotten me,you never would have let another man enter your life.


Kya karta main geet,sivai tumhare dil mein mere liye nafrat paida karne ke siva???

...I... never wanted to give you pain.

But i realized,that only my infected pain will cure you. Only then you will forget me & find someone who deserves you Geet.


I was NOT DRUNK GEET. I just wanted to make you hate me. I NEVER intended to take away your dignity Geet. Thank God Chris came...or I didn't know how i could have continued that farce of mine...OR you would have understood soon that i wasn't saying all that from my heart,you would have realized that i never intended to break you.

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...THank GOD!!Now you will move on from a monster like me & find the man who will love you...

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THank GOD!!...

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DAMN IT!!! I SHOULD BE HAPPY FOR YOU!!! PHIR...

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ye aansu kyun...


(Precap given below the answers)

@sohni_kudi_111- SORRY yaar,bt ur guess is not correct. They did call Chris.

@sdlife19- BANG ON DI!! You did it! Your suspicion is CORRECT. He was doing that purposefully.

@preeti.1- I am sorry Preeti,bt by now i guess you have understood that precap was not ANYONE's saying,BUt what geet actually ought to think after this incident about maan.

@chavvi16- Dadi & troop left geet as it was part of plan -bringing maan & geet together. You know..jealousy,boys,drink,maan-geet alone...But as their plans failed cause of maan's unexpected meeting at night ,they had to call chris (Their car broke-see previous chapter)

@sanghita0000- Maan didn't do anything seeing rahul forcing her because of two reasons,one was geet herself managed,two her unexpected confession showing her intense love for him. By the way,i love the fact that you remembered the details. But you got the rest of the answer in this update,didn't you. Ur guess was half correct. Maan KNOWINGLY pushed Geet,bt not PERtiCularly to CHRIS.

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6- After reading this update,now you can understand that i am not runing his character,instead making you guys fall for this character all over again...HAINA???😉

I WANTED TO ANSwER YOU ALL,BUT ALL THE OTHER qUESTIONS Are EITHER SIMILAR OR YOU WILL FIND THE ANSWER FROM THE UPDATE.😃

PRECAP- CAN SHE REALLY...or ...her life will end?

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was right

Maan was all doing it for her sake.. his love or say his guilt has brought him to such an extent tat he only wants her to move on and be happy with someone even if it means he ruins himself..

but Wat did he not think tat will she really move on... will she end her life.. will she believe even after she saw the monster maan wanted to portray himself in the form of ruining her..

will she.. a big question right now and m waiting for the answer...


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Posted: 11 years ago
My god. ...y didn't this cross my mind! now everyone will think bad of him, I think geet wilk somehow realize d reality hopefully!
Anyways, waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan misbehaving with geet
only for her sake to hate him n move on
in this he lost even his family
noone trust him now
but will she be able to throw him out of her heartwhere she is encraved him
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Posted: 11 years ago
datz nice
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh no...Maan did all this just coz of Geet...🤔...but now Geet will be more heartbroken or she will forgive him...😕...but y Maan doesn't want Geet to love him......I hope he realizes it soon that they are made for each other...👏...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Us din ka wait rahega jab geet maan k chupe pyar ko samje gi..😕
Waiting for the next! !
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Posted: 11 years ago
painful upeate,how i wish they r 2gether,bt seems their sorrow ,guilt didnt let them do that,waiting 4 next

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