TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic start !! maan is taking an 18 year old girl thinking her to be his bhatkihuwi wife ...and innocent geet is going to bear all his punishments...he seems to be full of revenge...poor geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it!!!!!
loved geet allot
maan wants a revenge from aakiriti ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



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@sweetsampa39 - Why geet's family didn't receive the Doc's calls,that would be told later.

@...RIDDHIMA... -Yes a person's age can be known by her face,if she doesn't do botox,or plastic surgery...Maan being a Billionaire it's not impossible for his wife to do such treatments. & Geet is 18 years ,Akriti-28

@sanam1234u- Would the doctors do tests when maan himself claims that he knows geet,that too with proves (His & Akriti's Marriage photos) & about the test, when maan, The CLAIMED "HUSBAND" HIMSELF doesn't want to do any tests to verify,then why would the Drs do the tests??

@aakritisri1111- Sorry yaar, bt here akriti will be a cunning leech,sorry that i used ur name for SUCH a character,i totally forgot ,& now i can't even change the name,as it will confuse the readers & me!!

Part-3
Maan was in his room,staring at his laptop screen...precisely his wedding pics with Akriti. He was very happy that day...thinking his life would be like a dream with Akriti...yes it was a dream...bt a NIGHTMARE...
OH! How he wished that he had listened to his dadi!! Akriti & maan were in same college. Though he was senior...they instantly clicked,that time he thought he found his soulmate..
The day he took Akriti to meet with his dadi,Dadi rejected her the instant she saw her..i guess dadi IS NEVER WRONG when guessing someone's true nature!
Bt alas! He never could see the reason of dadi's rejection! They were of same status,same habits...then why?!

He had heard rumors about Akriti's being a two timer...more like MULTIPLE TIMER,bt he ignored all those rumors. Whenever he looked at that cute face he tended to forget the world...
Bt within one year of marriage,his dream broke...Akriti,the girl who got whatever she wanted from her childhood,could do ANYTHING to get what she wanted...that's how her TRUE self was.
He had found her in someone else's arms,n*de...
He wanted to divorce her...though her parents had money,bt they abandoned her after knowing her true self,She didn't care..
he had offered her half of the khurana property...
bt she was greedy for the whole property,enjoying without any work...when there was dev & maan to do all the work & earn money...
When he tried to give her divorce on the basis of betrayal,she simply presented herself as a bechari PREGNANT aurat IN THE COURT,whom her in-laws doesn't want cause she will be giving birth to a girl child...
The moment he found out that her pregnancy was fake,she again feigned like a bechari aurat who was beaten by her husband & in -laws till her miscarriage!...
Maan clenched his fist..whenever he remembers that for that woman,his family had to go to JAIL,even if for one night,he was overflowed with vile for that woman...

He thought God has fulfilled his wish by killing Akriti on that natural calamity when she was busy spending her sinful days with one of her time pass. Bt maybe god has something else stored in him,maybe he wants that i take revenge from Akriti for all her doings...all the pains,that's why God has sent her in such a defenseless position,where she doesn't remember about herself...

His thoughts halted,when he heard a voice more precisely,someone singing...he looked at his watch,it was 6:00 pm...someone downstairs was singing..where is Akriti? He didn't bother to find her..must be looking at the jewels,old habits die hard eh,even if u lose ur memory!! he thought & descended downstairs...

He was Shocked & so were his family members- Dadi,his mom,his brother & sister-in-law,all were gathered in hall & SHE was doing the aarti...wearing the simplest blue chiffon saree,only kajal ,Sindoor & mangalsutra to enhance her beauty...she kept singing...(since maan came after sometime so he missed the previous part of the song- PLEASE LISTEN TO THE SONG WHILE READING...It's MANMOHANA From JODHA AKBAAR)

Raas rachiyan brindavan ke gokul ke basi
Radha tumhri daasi
Darshan ko hai pyaasi
Shaam shalone nand lala krishna banwari
Tumri chab hai nyari
Mein to hoon tan man hari
Mein to hoon tan man hari

The naughtyness,the devotion,the love,the childlike blind faith that reflected her eyes..scared him...of his decision...he closed his eyes.

Mann mohanaaa mann mohanaaa
Mann mohanaaa mann mohanaaa
Kanha sunona aaa
Tum bin paun kaise chain
Tarsu tumhiko din rain

Yet he couldn't stop the voice ,the innocence dripping from it,it was burning into his ears,into his heart...

Jeevan ek nadiya hai lehron lehron behti jaye
Ismein mann ki naiyaa doobe kabhi tar jaye
Tum na Khewaiya ho to koi tat kaise paaye
Majdhaare rehlaye
Toh tumri saran aaye
Haan tumri saran aaye

He couldn't stop himself,from going towards her,like she sensed him...she turned towards him with a smile...continuing her song..

Mein hoon tumhari hai tumhara yeh mere jeevan
Tumko hi dekhon mein
Dekhun koi darpan
Bansi ban jaungi in hooton ki ho jangui
In sapno se jalthal
Hai mera maan angan
Hain mera mmm

She bent to touch his feet. Then touched everyone's feet who were there,they weren't reacting ,still standing like statues. Only dadi gave her Ashirvaad...sada khush raho.

This broke maan's trace,he didn't want her to be happy! he wanted her to cry...like his family did.

applog mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?? maine kuch galti ki kya?? Wo mujhe yaad nahi na,shayed koi galti hui hai..isiliye...i am sorry..her eyes burned with tears.

Suprising everyone,dadi pulled her into a tight hug & kissed on top of her head...nahi beta koi galti nahi hui,apka bhajan itna accha tha ki hum san avi usme kho gaye hai..

She sniffed cutely...sacchi?

ha.

To main khana banane jati hu...she didn't wait for reply...she promptly gave everyone prasad & dragged nakul to kitchen with her continuing her cute bakbak.

****

dadima apne aisa kyun kiya?? She doesn't deserve it..dev said.

Meera,dev's wife also supported his as well as maan's mom. Maan was excluded from this talk as dadi wanted to talk with him SEPARATELY.

Meera,dev, Siya(mAAn's mom)...hume lagta hai ki she is not Akriti.

WHAT?

Dadi explained the situations to them...

Agar maan ko lagta hai ki wo akriti hai,to sahi hoga..akhir pati hai uska. Siya said.

Beti humne ajtak kisiko pehchanne mein galti nahi ki hai..maybe she is not Akriti.

Bt mom..

Jab humne Akriti ko apni bahu banane se inkaar kiya tha tab tum logone nahi suni...u just thought,this old woman is blabbering..

They hung their head...yes that was true...

Hum applogo se request karte hai ki unse kuch mat kahiye...if my guess is right,now she is the most pitiful girl ,na naam,na pehchaan,sirf kisi aur ki galtio ka shikar.

Par mom aisa kaise ho sakta hai..it's not necessary that u will be right always, i am not going to soften my heart towards THAT girl & take ANOTHER CHANCE...

Dadi, hum kuch nahi kahenge...bt if she does anything to harm my family AGAIN,i will not forgive her.

Aur ma...meera is pregnant now..waise vi 2 months mein wo apne maike jane wali thi,hum use thoda pehle bhej denge.Sirf uske family London se wapas aa jaye

Ok...dadi had to agree to this,cause knowing what Akriti had inflicted on them,theor fear & hatred were justified...& she wasn't sure herself.

******

Geet/Akriti served everyone on the table..bt everyone except dadi were incredulous...what if it is poisoned!

RUKIYE DADI...! maan screamed.

dadi's hand stopped in midway from taking her first bite.

U know our family rules na,jo banayega,use pehle khana hoga.

Par ye to maine banaya hai,koi baharwale ne nahi. Geet/Akriti said innocently.

I am sorry Akriti,par kya kare,tumhare bhulne se to barso purani riwaz to hum nahi todenge na..maan spat rudely

Dadi hung her head...there was no such tradition in their house...despite of their talk..maan was ADAMANT that she IS Akriti,& neither he abandoned his plan for revenge ...he was just too blind to see the innocence in geet that was absent in Akriti. .bt somewhere in her heart,dadi too had the fear...fear of her being WRONG for the first time...what if i AM wrong & This girl IS Akriti...what if i am just being deceived by her feigned innocence?

It wasn't their fault..it was the pains inflicted upon them made them so incredulous,so doubtful.

So Akriti,taste all the dishes...maan smirked as i he got her doing something wrong.

Bt geet not understanding anything,tasted everything...as everyone looked at her expecting to get some odd reaction from her- yes they did think that maybe she has mixed something...

after the tasting meera was going to eat...bt dev stopped her.

Don't eat meera,what if she has already eaten the anti -poison meds? he whispered.

bt Nakul heard them...he was the oldest & most faithful servant of the family.

Aj babyji ko maine helf kiya hai..main hamesha unke saath hi tha kitchen mein...he announced,sensing everyone's reluctance to eat the food. Hearing this everyone got relaxed,nakul ke rehte hue,she can't mix anything bad...


Precap- Disaster...



Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesome update
everyone is suspecting geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
awesome part.. is Geet/ & Akriti r diff. i think..

thnx for pm..waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome update
all suspecting geet
dadi you are right
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
how will maan take this yaar

i know he will go to any extent to take his revenge and geet will be lost in all this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
bechari toh gayi
maan ne toh thaan li hain its his wife
when it clearly isnt her
dammit this is bad real bad
that akriti is gonna make things worse for her right
khud toh gayi yahan geet ko marne ke liye chod gayi
man maan could do juts about anyhting for his revenge
and this time too dadi is right it isnt who they think it is
its our poor little geet who doenst even know that this isnt her family of hubby
and what that hubby is gonna do to her
man that akriti was just too greedy no wonder they all hate her
parr isme gete ki kya galti
what disaster shall happen one wonder
what else shall we see then
cant wait for more
thank god for nakul or they would continue with this
poor geet she dont even know what happening to her soon
cheers for pm
but what will happen when they do know she is geet and not akriti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Aww...poor geet she landed in a devils den!!!
Everyone hates her...:(
Where the hell is geet's family!!!
Grr... Everyone though geet poisoned food!!!
After eating them they still didn't believe
I must say akriti is a bitch...
But where is she?? Sach mein Mara kya??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
omg...
m scared...really scared

wat is maan planning to do??????????????
😭😭😭😭

waiting for the next part...😕😕😕😕

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