TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 61

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
geet sahi hai bilkul jo maan ne kiya wo galat tha
par geet bhulne ko tayiyar hai par maan srf apne pyar confess kar le
par maan stupid use abhi tk apni feeling realize nai ho rahi
i m waiting nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
mujhe toh story pehle se hi clear thi
ab aur bhi zyada ho gyi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...I have so many updates to catch up, but can do it 2morrow
Me sorry for being late
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the note but i didnt judge geet neither maan both are right at their place...

and have total faith on you...\

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Shilalipi,
Thanks for your note. Actually I have read all the parts in one go n loved the ff very much
so nothing to forget about it but I was confused that why suddenly Maan denied Geet,
though he loves her very much now n never wanted to separate her even for a minute as
working from house, neglecting the tour(off course there was a fear too), pampering her
like a child. It is true that you have mentioned in part 10 but afterwards many times he was
about to call her Gee... n lastly offcourse it's very disgusting for me also if i find my beloved
use to love me thinking me as some other person but sorry the ques. is that, I could not relate
it in that way in the story n actually I was surprised to read Maan's denial, so what can I say I
think I failed to understand it properly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago

TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



If anyone sees similarities IN SCENES or IN THE PLOT ITSELF pls contact me & tell me straightforwardly,i would be happy to change,if there is really similarity.

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Part 16

(I am very happy to see that you guys have come to love this ff so much. But to those readers who didn't want me to discontinue this ff,,,i NEVER said that i would discontinue it. I said i will not update until u understand the plot clearly. Because if u misunderstand the plot,then gradually with each update you will get more & more confused & misunderstand the story & it's progress,so then what will the meaning of my updating if you understand my story to be a wrong one?? Don't worry,if you misunderstand or don't understand or confused,just ask me,i will answer u again & again,bt won't leave my story like this-

Answers to all your questions till part 15-page 106 )


Geet sat there in the dark room silently. No,...it was as if it was her heart that went silent,not understanding what to do...what to feel anymore...

Only light in the room was that of the moon...just like that night..except there was no clouds to hide the moon's mocking smile...winds flowed in embracing with the white curtains of the room,dancing with them...gently...softly...with love...

A sound from outside broke her trance. She remembered she has to unpack her things. She opened the suitcase,only to find herself in tears...

Maan ki tasvir (pic)...

She crumbled down on the floor clutching the photo with her. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she cried & screamed looking at the picture.

Kyun maan KYUN!!!! KYA BIGADA THA MAINE APKA? MAIN TO APKO PEHCHANTI BHI NAHI THI! AP KYUN MUJHE LAYE APNI ZINDEGI MEIN? KYUN MUJHSE ITNA BADA DHOKA DIYA??...

KYUn....her voice died down to whispers...Kyun mujhe wo pyaar diya jo mera hai hi nahi? Kyun ?? Kyun???

Her voice hardly audible as she lied down on the cold floor...

Kyun mujhe aise apni bahoon mein liya ki main kavi bhool nahi sakti? Kyun mujhe apse pyaar karne diya?? Kyun...mujhe itna...bebas kardiya... ki main ... apne apse bhagne lagi...uss Geet se bhagne lagi jo apse pyaar karti hai...apne jaan se bhi jyada...


She looked at his picture..telling it the things she could not say to him...

Kaise main rehti apke saath...ye jante hue bhi ki app kavi mujhse...geet se pyaar nahi kar sakte...kaise main dekh sakti this apko ...kisi aur se pyaar karte hue,har pal...har lamha

Kaise main dekh sakti apko kisi aur ke bahoon mein ..jab bhi app mujhe gale lagate hai...

How could i see you touch ..kiss...making love...to... someone else...everytime you touch me,kiss me,make love to me?


I can wait for your love for eternity maan...bt main kaise ye sahu ki jab bhi ap mujhe apni bahoon mein lete hai,to ap kisi aur ke baren mein sochte hai? Kaise ji sakti iss baat ke saath ki jab bhi app mujhe pyaar se dekhenge wo pyaar,wo mohabbat kisi aur ke liye hogi??...she cried & cried...remembering everytime they embraced ,everytime he touched her,kissed her...


Kya unme kavi Geet nahi thi?? Kya wo pyaar ,wo hugs,wo kisses ...sab akriti ke liye thi...she cried herself to sleep...


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Same night 2:30 am ...Maan found himself going towards the east side...

Main sirf ye dekhne ja raha hu ...ki wo thik hai ki nahi...afterall it was my fault.

He reasoned with himself...this must be it...or else why i would be worried for her? It's not that i can use her as Akriti anymore..!!

He reached entered her room ever so stealthily... ever so cautious not to wake her up.

There she was...in the dark room,contrasting it..with wearing the simple white dress he had gifted to her,so befitting her image..pure & honest...& now tattered

She was there sleeping defenselessly on the cold floor,with dried tears in her cheeks,on the photo frame.

The sight of her torn his heart in pieces...so fragile,so vulnerable...& noe he has broken her into numerous pieces...

He grabbed the glass of water & dipped his handkerchief in it,wetting it & wiped her face ever so gently ,as if even that harmless piece of cotton could scratch her...

He lifted her & placed her gently on the bed & spread the quilt over her. She whimpered...he didn't even think,his hands just flew to her head,stroking her deep sleep...

He didn't even notice when it was close to dawn...4:30 am...the whole time...his hands didn't even stopped for once,didn't break contact with her head...looking at her...the time passed just like that...


But it was time for him to go...his head bent down to kiss her forehead...bt he stopped just before the touch..his warm breath falling on her,still soothing her aching heart in deep sleep...

He hesitated ...then he knew...he didn't have the right to...

I am sorry...Geet...he whispered & went from there as silently as he came...


*****

Dadi sat in her room with meera & dev...

The whole night they couldn't sleep...they didn't sleep. They knew Geet would cry herself to sleep & they knew...that maan would go to her...they were waiting in this room beside geet,for him to go to her..

They silently from the ajar door,as maan left Geet's room...

Kya ye kavi apni dil ki baat nahi samjhenge? Meera asked.

Kya hum kuch nahi kar sakte? Dev asked helplessly.

Ab hum Geet ke saath dene ke aur uska dard batne ke siva...kuch nahi kar sakte...dadi said sadly...


Precap- Banke mala prem ki tere tan pe jhar jhar jaun.(sorry for the short update,bt if you can understand the flavour...u will see that this update couldn't be stretched more)

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it di... well maan has a long way to go before he realizes the love in his heart is for geet,,,, it was always for geet,,, Akriti was never there never existed in his heart... awww poor geet... she regrets falling in luv with him when he never saw as geet... gEET JUST LOOK BEYOND HIS MIND TRICKS AND MEANINGLESS WORDS you will find yourself everywhere in him...
really loved how u r taking the story forward,,,,...
oh oh cupids on the wayyy...
I think they should first try to make Geet see through Maan's idiotic mouth and words the hidden love... She still loves him...She still has the hope however small it might be... he loves her...
And Maan ...ufff boys are useless... 😆 gosh when he will just stop reasoning and listen to his heart 😛
Waiting for their love to bloom again..
lovely following this story since start but commented 1st time today...just lovelllyyy n beautifulll...
Keep updating
love
Anu
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotioanal update.. te way geet crying holding my maan pic and te way her each words shows how much she have been hurt was lovely emotional.. te way my maan going to outhouse to see his geet and te way he crying to see his geet and te way he sleeping with her and te way he left thinking he does't have any right was lovely emotional..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update...

maan caring geet was amazing..

problem is he is not read to accept that he loves geet...

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