TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
maan not leaving geet for a minute thinking anyone would tell her the truth
dadi asking him to go to trip
geet getting flashes about past
eargely waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



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Not fair guys!!! i thought u guys will squeal & jump to know that GEET HAS CONFESSED to MAAn &on top of that post confession MAAN ACCIDENTLY WHISPERER "GEET" & Not "AKRITI" while hugging her to intimately!!! But you guys didn't EVEN NOTICE!Now i am SUPER angry &making a golgappa face!You guys always ruin my fun by not catching the chatpata part of the update while reading!

****To all the readers if u haven't noticed this too,dadi said that somewhere along with time,maan had STOPPED trying to make geet Akriti,(by making geet akriti i meant ,copying her style,her all habits etc etc) ..so geet is still geet ,like how she was before😃*****

Part 12

Day 1-
Geet went round & round around her room as she muttered something under her breath..
"jhalli kahiki!!!! Kya Zarurat thi Maan ko Business trip pe Bhejne ki...Kamli!!! le ab miss kar rahi hai na!! Aaya na maza ,apni hi pati ko blackmail karke trip par bhejne ka!!"

"Akriti" Dev called from downstairs
"Aayi veer ji!!"
Suddenly she saw black...she sat on the bed ..."Babaji! Ye kya hoo raha hai?!"
She couldn't see any face,all she could see through her tightly shut eyes is some shadows ...particularly two shadows...one little shadow running to another big one...screaming in happiness..
"Dekho veer ji Main first aayi!! Ab do mera chocoalate"
The big shadow patted the little one's head as it gave it something...saying "pagli kahiki!! Kavi badi nahi hogi tu G...""

"Akriti,Akriti"
She opened her eyes to see dev's concerned face before her.
"Tum thik to ho na"
"M..mujhe kya hua hai!! " She tried to act like nothing happened.
"Dekho jhoot mat bolo,main kabse tumhe bula raha hoon,tum javab (answer) nahi de rahi ho,upar se main room me aaya to dekha tum sar pakar ke ...""

"Are wo!!! " She tried to laugh it off...
"actually main na...ha...main yaad karne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki maine mobile kaha par rakha hai,yaad nahi aa raha tha,isliye ZOR SE soch rahi hu...ha" She nodded her head vigorously to support her lie.
"Tum na Akriti,jhalli ho!! Itna mat socha karo,HAT(HAND) ME mobile leke" he pointed at her hand with his eyes...
"Huh!!" Geet was first perplexed,then after looking to her hand...she laughed nervously...
"main vhi na!!"
Dev laughed.
"Now come down & eat something,sara din maan ke bare mein soch ne ke liye shakti ki vi zarurat hogi"
Geet blushed prettily "veerji app vii na!!"


Day 2-
"Geet,why are you spacing out beta,u are here in dining table bt not eating...u are just nibbling pieces like bird!!"Dadi said.
"Wo dadi maan ka call avi aaya nahi...wo mujhe char bar phone karte hai kam se kam ek ghante ke liye.." she blurted out still staring at space,bt then soon realized her mistake & blushed like a cute strawberry.
"Dekho Akriti,u shouldn't do that" Meera said sternly.
"kya bhabi?"Geet asked confused
"look even though there are enough strawberries in the table,u shouldn't blush like that or i might mistake u as a strawberry & eat u up" Meera said with maintaining a straight face.
Geet blushed more.
Dadi sighed..."Why are u doing this? U know na that i like tomatoes..."she also said with a straight face,...well at least they were trying to do so..bt snickers from suppressed laugh were clearly heard
Yes...all three of them,dev ,meera & Dadi also loved to tease innocent geet to no end...
As if to save her from burning up from blushing,her phone rang...
"M...m...Maan,...M..Maan ka phone aaya hai,main jati hoon"
She left in hurry & all the others burst into laughter...

Day 3-
"Hmp main un logo se baat nahi karungi,har waqt mujhe chidate hai...wo kya sochte hai,ki main chup nahi reh sakti...main unko ...unko...HA..pure EeeK GHANTA(one hour) chup rehke dikhaungi..." She announced like she was going to do the hardest task...
Her Phone rang..
"Maan,app kaise ho"
"har roz hi to phone karta hu baba,then why" though maan said this,he actually loved how he asked about him every day,every time...like she wants to present with him,even when she isn't with him...
"mujhe accha lagta hai...jab app kehte ho ki app thik ho" she said with pink cheeks.
Maan smiled...
"Main thik hoon G...Akriti"
She smiled.
"Akriti," Maan took a sharp breath
"I miss you too maan"..
"HUH!! where did this too come from?I don't miss you"
"Jhoot,you are missing me"Geet said with pouting.
"Nope,not missing"
"To phir roze char bar kyun phone kartein hai??"
"Nah ito tum rone bait jaogi na..."
"HaWWW"
"Kya Haw!! I should do that,looking at how u can bak bak 24*7"
"Main ...main.."
"Kya main main??"Maan said with a big grin,he didn't know hy ,bt he was a mood for teasing geet today,may be it was the beautiful gifts that he was buying for her...
Pehle thoda sata to lu...phir mana lunga,maan thought with a grin.

"App na...App na...sab mujhe chidate hai...Main app se baat nahi karungi."
"Impossoble,tum aur without chapar-chapar!! Sun will rise from north!!"
"Main apse sacchi main baat nahi karungi"
"Kitni der? One hour will be max, i am sure!!"
"Main..main...Ha,jabtak app wapas nahi aate main apse baat nahi karungi...cheating karke phone mat karna,apko pata hai ki main apka phone cut nahi kar sakti..."She said with a pouting face.
Maan was sure that she would call till evening...so he smirked...
"thik hai...jab tum call karogi to tum har jaogi"
"...""
"I am sure though that u will call me after few minutes itself,after all,u are the BAK_BAK PRINCESS" he teased her more.

"PHONE MAT KARNA""She screamed...
"Are ,are suno to..."..."call cut gaya..i think she is super pissed off...ye GEET vhi na....Maan blurted out her name unconsciously,not even noticing that he took her REAL NAME...

******
It was evening...bt the atmosphere was dark...very dark...& very silent... it was waiting for an impending devastating storm...
Geet looked at the phone from corner of her eyes..her hand crawled slowly towards it,then retreated ...it happened several times until geet became fed up..
"Akriti tu bhi na...patience,patience,dev ,meera & dadi will return within two hours"she told herself..
The clouds rumbled with great sounds making geet flinch.
"Main maan ko phone karti hu,darr lag raha hai..." She Took the phone in her hand,bt stopped midway.
"nahi,tu to strong hai na...hai na babaji.."she looked up with a crying face.
The clouds rumbled again...
Geet stood up..
"Main ..main maan ke study saaf karti hoon,waise bhi maan kisiko jane nahi dete waha...ab tak to dirty ho gaya hoga"
She went happily to clean maan's room.
****
"Uff maan vhi na,sare chiz idhar udar rakh ke chale gaye,kisiko to aane nahi dete,kamse kam saaf karne ke liye mujhe to bol sakte the na..."Then again,she was hardly given any work to do,everyone in that house treated her like their little princess...

She was arranging the books in the big shelf. Suddenly some books fell...
"uff Akriti...tu bhi na...jhalli hai,tu arrange kar rahi hai ya bigad rahi hai!!"
She bent down to collect the books ,bt stopped when shew saw a book open with a button middle in it...
The first thing that came in her mind was..
"Dexter's LABRAToRY!!!!"
She smiled naughtily..."agar yaha koi hidden room hai,to maan should have some secrets,jab aayenge to unhe main chidaungi(i will tease him)"
She pressed the button ,& there was a noise,the small wall mirror behind her opened with another switch on display.
She went & pressed the switch...now the large book shelf moved & revealed a dark room...
She excitedly went into the room,bt was disappointed when she saw nothing but a almirah in the room...
She opened the almirah to reveal a small suitcase & a pink bag...
"Lagta hai ye maan ki bachpaan ka saman hai...PINK BAG!! Ab Maza aayega,hamesha mujhe satate the na...ab meri bari...". She opened the suitcase first only to reaveal some girl cloths...
"ye...ye kiska hai..."Her smile was gone
"Kahi maan...kisi se...nahi...mere maan kavi aisa nahi kar sakte"
She opened the bag to confirm her belief ...that maan wouldn't cheat on her..that her maan only loves HER...
She opened the pink bag to see a passport & some documents...
With her shaky hands...she opened the passport only to see herself looking at her...
it was her passport...NO...her eyes went to the name part...it was GEET HANDA's passport...

Geet Handa...

Geet Handa...

Geet Handa...

Geet Handa...

Geet Handa...
She rummaged through all the documents...her head was hurting...it was hurting so much!
She fainted...
****
"ye Geet call kyun nahi kar rahi hai??" Maan thought to himself...
It was now his unconscious habit..when he was alone ,he would call her GEET WITHOUT KNOWING or NOTICING HIMSELF...bt when he was with Geet or the family members,he would call her Akriti...it was as if his brain subconsciously trained his mouth to do like this...in fear of losing her...so every time he took geet's name,he was unknown of it himself!!!
"Maybe she is too pissed off & won't really call me for the rest of my trip!! Oh mAN!!! Oh well,main use jake mana lunga..".he said with a smile looking at the pouring rain outside the glass window...
*****
Geet woke up ...
"I...I...I am Geet Handa!"it was the first words she spoke after gaining consciousness...
No she,didn't remember anything at all...EXCEPT...the fact that SHE WAS GEET HANDA...not AKRITI...
The realization it self evoked many memories in her...recent memories...which she thought as happy memories..now was haunting her as nightmare...

"Main tumhara Pati Hoon"

nahi...

"Tumhara Naam AKRITI HAI"

Nahi...

"Will you marry me Akriti"

Nahi...

"Aj se Maan Sing Khurana...aur Akriti ap Pati-Patni hue"

"NAHIII"she screamed a agonized scream...

From the memories of marriage... she remembered...

...That night...

She screamed on top of her lungs as she ran from the room...from the house...alone...in the rain...

Precap- When everything goes WRONG

Any similarity in scenes is not intentional

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice dear😊
maan gona to broke
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update dear :)

superb :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ko sab jad aa geya hope maan geet ko sambal sake now waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no...feeling really bad for maan...pata nahi ab kya hoga???...plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg

she remembered tat she is geet handa and now she ran away with the realization tat she was not aakriti

wat will happen to now tat she ran away
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...superb update...👏 now what will happen to maan...❓ he will be heart broken...💔
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
loved maaneet cute nok jhok on phone ans all teasing geet
so finally she got her memory back , she is going to hate maan for that night😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis was devastating but inevitable
Maan will b shattered n might blame dadi n all

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