TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely story dear... but why is maan not believing... oh god 😭😭😭 poor geet 😭😭😭

precap is interesting, will maan realize that she is virgin then what will he do 😭😭

waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update dear :)

superb :)

hope now maan regrets his doings..
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Posted: 12 years ago
how come maan prove she is Akriti by making love to her?she might be some one else wife she may not be virgin that cannot prove she is Akriti or not secondly if they want to take dna test how they will be defrentiate as if she is not Akriti and Akriti died in real sense than from where they get Akritis Dna sample to match with geet's dna sample?
in this story i think she is not Akriti and after some time she will regain her memry back and will forget what happen here and than real story start i assume this plot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ff eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
POOr geet...feeling very sad n sorry fr her...
Maan is so going to regret...
Loved the update...
Waiting fr next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope Maan will realise his mistake before doing something really bad with geet n then regret it later
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Posted: 12 years ago

TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



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Many of u have asked that how maan can come to the conclusion by making love that if the girl is virgin she is not akriti,cause there is high possibility of the girl's being involved with her lover,before she lost her memory.I didn't answer that cause that would have been a spoiler of my next chapter. So here goes the next chapter,I hope all ur questions will be answered with this chapter & even if u have questions,don't be shy to ask me. I am actually feeling really happy that u guys are reading my ff so sincerely.

Part-5

He smirked in his mind,Now so called "MS. GEET HANDA...let me see how much a VIRGIN u are as u claim in ur diary,he thought

Yes,he saw all the so called documents in that small bag of hers, her passport, her id card, her ticket, her boarding pass, & her diary...she was found with a bag clutched to her ...in the middle of the road

He snickered in his mind thinking about those documents paise se kya kuch nahi kharida ja sakta to ye documents kya hai...

He read her diary too ,he wanted to laugh out loud reading that diary,Awww,miss "I AM SO INNOCENT!" In the diary's first page,she had written "Heart of a Virgin Girl (By body & Soul)"

Let me see how much a "Virgin" are u!!

It says that when a human is hurt he becomes so much blinded by rage & revenge that he can't think rationally .It must be true,cause not even for once,did maan think what he will do if the girl is NOT akriti ,bas man liya...

Maan slided the pallu,she fisted her little hands in an unknown fear,little did she know,it was the fear of her virgin body,her virgin mind,which never experienced even a little bit intimacy...

The room was dark with the curtains ,bt the outside ironically was gleaming with moonlight,revealing the nature,bt with its beauty,bt with its cruelty ,the moonlight was clear enough to show the white owl eyeing on its prey...

One by one,he slid all the clothing off her ,not noticing her trembling,her paleness...

M..mm..maan,m..mm mujhe darr lag raha hai..

Shh...there is nothing to fear..we have done this thousands of times.

The owl spread it's wings ,ready to catch it's prey,the black clouds slowly started to cover the moon..

Maan please ...

Her words didn't reach in his deaf ears..yes he was deaf with revenge..

He positioned himself infront of her...

Maan...she couldn't even deny him strongly,to her,it was her husband,.& he had EVERY rights on her.

With one strong thrust he was in her..as she cried out in unbearable pain..

The owl descended upon it's prey,the moon was covered with black clouds,as if nature covered the light to hide it's cruelty...

One only could hear the last cries of helplessness of the prey,in that deep black darkness..

Maan please,rukiye...maaa...mujhe..maaan...dard...she was crying...

He didn't stop,after a while,moon was again visible.

As the light streamed through the window,maan saw her ,she was not still.

He stopped,HUH!! Sleeping!!! Ab sabke saath sote sote itna bore ho ke so gayi!!..he was disgusted ,he wore his cloths & left the room.

****

The next morning maan left for office,geet /akriti was still sleeping..

There was none in km as dadi had some urgent work & dev was out to meet his dear wifey in her mayka.

He came at 6 pm,bt as soon as he stepped in,nakul came running to him.

Maan baba,babyji ko kuch hua hai.

Now what happened,what new drama she is doing now?

Wo maan baba babyji subha se apne kamre se nahar nahi aayi,humne pukara vi kitni baar,leking koi darwaja hi nahi khol raha hai.

What's new nakul u know her ,she always sleeps till late.

Nahi maan baba,wo Akriti memsahib thi..lekin ye WO NAHI HAIN..ye babyji hai,aur babyji,hamesha sabke pehle jag jati hai.

Now you too don't start with this rubbish nakul..that she is not akriti..

Nakul understood,there was no point arguing with him,yes ,even he could see his blind feeling of revenge..

Accha maan baba,par meri khatir app please ek baar check kar lijiye.

Maan looked at nakul irritated,bt nonetheless,he went to see her.

Frankly,he didn't even want to go to that room,his mouth was bitter with those old memories,& the new ones,yesterday her falling asleep in the middle of it,only reminded him of Akriti's sleeping with many men...

He was a little shocked when he saw her on the bed exactly like he had left her yesterday night,he went near & called her,Akriti...he called her several times,bt still no answer.

He touched her,only to retreat his hands immediately,she was BURNING!!

He called cris immediately informing about geet/akriti ,& cris instructed him to bring her to hospital.

When he was making her wear cloths,his heart stopped looking at the trails of dried blood around her V****a...he tried to shove away the feeling & picked her up after dressing her..

Bt before leaving his eyes,he reluctantly turned around ,his eyes wanted to find a proof which will shove away the fear slowly creeping in his heart,bt maybe his luck was not with him...spots of blood were clear in the bright white sheet...

This can't be true,right??..wait..haven't I heard somewhere that even non virgin women sometimes ...

He drove to hospital...

***

Maan can u tell me what happened?

Chris, Wo I did it with her last night ,she slept in the middle & now she has a high fever

Maan are u mad!! First u took her on ur assumption,then..Ok let me check her..lie her down here.

He was surprised when maan didn't argued back about that girl's being akriti.He was going to check her,bt maan stopped him...

Hey..

What?

Wo ... I heard somewhere that even non virgin women sometimes ...matlab while doing that..u know..like the first timers...

Ya,in some conditions..bt why are u asking...wait..don't tell me..Chris's eyes went wide in realization.

Let me make some tests...& DON'T U DARE U SAY NO.

****

Chris threw the report infront of him in utmost disgust..

NOW MR MAAN SING KHURANA,IS UR REVENGE COMPLETE YET YA AUR VI KUCH BAKI HAI?

Wh..why are u saying this??

I WARNED U AGAIN & AGAIN ...don't be so sure..ATLEAST LET ME MAKE SOME TEST...

What happened,batayega vi??

Read the reports urself Mr KHURANA,I hope u won't deny the reports atleast like, u had denied about her passport & other documents...

Maan looked at him with a blank face,the horror growing bigger in him by the minute.

Don't worry Mr KHURANA,Unlike others,Dr,CHRIS CAN NOT BE BRIBED...SO THE REPORTS AREN'T FAKE..Chris greeted through his teeth,trying to control himself from beating maan.

Maan,with trembling hands he read the documents only to look up at Chris with disbelief..

Yes Mr Khurana,Akriti Khurana...Uh uh...GEET HANDA is a VIRGIN...Sorry,sorry, my mistake WAS a Virgin...

What happened maan, won't u take revenge,oh let me tell u one more thing,last night..she didn't dose off,she just fainted, & today she has a high fever because her fragile body could not take the pressure ,all thanks to you mr maan sing Khurana..

*****

He returned to mansion ,he was walking slowly,like his legs were not moving,like he was physically carrying the burden of his deeds,.dadi came to him almost running ...

Maan,I had told u that girl is not akriti..

He looked up at once,how did dadi know?

Is baar I have proofs maan, maine DNA test karne ko diya tha.

Par samples? He could only utter that much

Yaad hai,nakul ki wife hamesha Akriti ke gire hue hair collect karti thi,ye keh kar ki "suna hai dayan ki shakti uske balloon me hoti hai,shayed ye baal aise main agar collect karu to is dayan ka shayad ..." yaad hai?? Humne usi ko as a sample use kiya,muskil tha,isiliye report ane mein itni der ho gayi..

I told u she is not Akriti...she is

I know dadima...he whispered,with tears gathered in his eyes.

I know...

Precap- What will maan do?

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan trying for revenge but broke her innocence geet faint maan taking her to hospital chrisi blASTING on maan dadi also showing proofs maan guilty hope he will now give her respect and love



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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor geet
Feeling really bad for her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is so shit yaar,..
so sad update...
Felling bad fr geet...
continue soon..

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