TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey sweety,
Noticed ur fact in previous part but didnt mentioned it.Sorry for that.Ab mu mein jo golgappa hai kha jaao usse.

The part was fabulous.Geet's cute part was outstandin.And do Maan lovhing Geet as Geet only is also superb.But but but as now Geet remembered everything m feeling bad for Maaneet.Now Geet will hate Maan for r***ng her.

Eagerly waiting to know what happens next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb!! actualy the story of title pulled me to peepin!! read all the parts nice concept!! cont soon waiting!!:D:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all 12 parts together really different story 👏 loved it❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
she remembers...she knows...

cant wait what happens next...
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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



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For the readers who asked if geet got back the full memory...NO ,she didn't...she remembered JUST A PIECE of her past which happens to be her name. It happens,right?? A person remembers only a little part of her/his memory at a time. He/she remembers one by one when he/she sees something {or incident} related to that memory. So in this case geet remembers her name & that she is NOONE in this house...NOTHING MORE..NOTHING LESS.


Part 13

I hope u remember chris's character,if not,then check this link.I won't post the pic cause my pic was previously deleted & it's from TELEGRAPH...so please do check

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/science/6126492/Being-smart-really-is-sexy.html

Chris was totally exhausted by the time he came back home from hospital. It was really a busy day for him.

The old maid asked...

Baba,app change kar lijiye main abhi khana lagati hoon.

He brushed it off...

Nahi...maine kha liya tha.He pressed the bridge of his nose with two fingers

Apko headache ho raha hai to main ...

Nahi mausi,main thodi der akele rehna chahta hoon.Ap soo jaiye.

He went away from there without talking further.

The maid looked at him...

25 saal se yaha kam kar rahi hoon...kavi baba ko aise nahi dekha...pata nahi kya hua hain in dino!!

*****

Geet....he took her name like it was a breath to him,one call...so intense,so passionate..

The room was dark ,silent...only with the faint sound of the rain which clashed on the window glasses...only light was the occasional lightning...

Chris clutched the dupatta in his hand like it was some priceless possession...it was...to him .

He closed his eyes inhaling deeply in it ,as he remember the occasion.

****

Uff,babaji kitna kaam hai!! ye rangoli bhi banani hai...aur bhabi mere hatoon mein mehendi lagane wali thi,taki mujhe kaam na karna pare...par main bhi smart hoon,ha. Main waha se bhaag ayi.

Kisse baat kar rahi ho ??

She looked back to see Chris standing there smiling.

Are CHRIS!!! Kaise ho??she asked smiling,then frowned ....Has kyun rahe ho?

Geet considered him as her friend,so she was really at ease with him.

Main ...nahi to,i am not smiling. May be u are seeing things. Hmm...i should prescribe u some more meds.

Agar aisa kiya na...to dekhna...main tumse baat nahi karungi,she tried to "threaten " him with her bog adorable eyes.

Impossible! Tum aur baat kiya bina!!!

Maan hai na..main unse baat kar kungi.

his smile faltered a bit,bt then again he was normal.

Waise bhi u eat my friend's head all day,now if u talk to him more,i think soon i have to admit him in mental ward.

Hawww!! Subh Subh bolna chahiye Chris,Mazak main bhi aisa mat bolna...Tumhe kaisa lagega agar main tum jisse pyaar karte ho,uske barein mein aisa kahu?

...

He went silent.He couldn't even think what he would do if something happens to this precious little woman infront of him.


Geet started to do her rangoli as Chris continued to look at her standing beside her...

He looked at her as she did the rangoli with all her heart.

She wiped the sweat in her head with the back of her hand...the little mehendi on the back of her hand smudged on her forehead,cheek & neck as she trailed her hand down to wipe the sweat.

Hey ...u ...u... there is mehendi on your face.

He never called her Akriti,he didn't even want to pretend that she was Akriti...She was GEET.To him ...he fell in love with her the first time he saw her...no...her eyes actually...mirrors to her innocent pure heart.

Huh!? Oh! actually meera bhabi tried to put some mehendi ,so that i won't have to work,thodi si hat mein lag gayi thi. She tried to wipe the mehendi with her dupatta,then she remembered,it was gifted by maan today.

Chris,can u bring that dupatta? She asked him pointing at the sofa where there were washed cloths waiting to be folded.

Chris just moved without any word...he didn't know how to handle this overflowing emotion to touch her,from the moment he saw her hand sliding on her face.

It was the first time in his life,that he had such strong emotion for someone,it was his first time...TRULY falling in love

He handed her the dupatta & watched her cleaning her face & her neck...

Tch! Ab ye dupatta to use nahi kar sakti...Bt she really didn't want to throw it,cause even it was pretty old...it was from HER MAAN~!!!!

nahi,agar ramu kaka kuch kar sakte hai to...

AKRITI...it was dev calling her form inside.

AKRITI COME HERE,JALDI!!

She looked at the dupatta & then looked inside..if it was late then the dupatta will be ruined totally.

Chris smiled,as she looked so confused what to do first.

I will give ramu kaka this dupatta...

Par

GO!! he pushed her inside as he literally snatched the dupatta form her.

She went inside..bt then turned back with a sweet smile...Thank you Chris.

It's ok...NOW GO!!

She went inside running.

The dupatta actually never was handed to ramu kaka. How could he..it was the only remembrance of geet...it was price less to him. Because now he couldn't meet her. he wouldn't meet her...

He didn't need to feel guilt of loving his best friend's wife...cause she never was...to him,Maan was just using her...Still he couldn't shake of this feeling of guilt ,& at the same time he couldn't stop loving her more & more...& with each meeting with her,he loved her more & more. That is why he decided to stop visiting her...he decided to stop visiting KM.

****

Dadi,meera & dev came back...bt the mansion was dreadfully silent.

Akriti...Akriti...

No reply was there...Dadi dreaded for the worst. May be Geet fainted,maybe something bad happend to her,cause she was still recovering from her head injuries.

Akriti,Akriti....They searched every room,bt she wasn't there.

dadi,kaha ja saktii hai wo,humne sab room dekh liya! Meera panicked.

Nahi..abhi ek room baki hai...

They looked at the study room.

...

It was in mess...everywhere there were documents & pages scattered...

Dev picked up one piece & was horrified...he dropped it & immediately ran screaming...I AM GOING TO FIND GEET,PLEASE CALL CHRiS If she has GONE TO HOSPITAl.

Dadi didn't understand what happend,bt it was clear when he picked up the document...

She knows the TRUTH!!!

*****

Chris was wondering about geet,when he got a call form dadi.

Ha dadi app kaise...

BETA KYA APP HOSPITAL MEI HAIN?? KYA GEET WAHA GAYI HAI??PLEASE MUJHE BATANA...

No..WAIT,Why are you asking that? Then realization hit him...

WHAT HAPPENED TO GEET!!!??

Chris beta,geet came across her documents & passport which maan hid. We were outside for only 2 hours,bt in the meantime ..i don't know how she came across the papers & when we came back she was not here.

HOW CAN YOU LEAVE HER ALONE WHEN YOU KNOW HOW FRAGILE HER CONDITION IS?? He screamed frustrated & worried.

Forget it. I will search for her & inform you if i see her.

*****

He was searching madly wherever he could . Bt it was difficult due to the heavy rain...

kaha ho tum geet!!

Suddenly his eyes fell on something,the headlight of his car flashed on a white figure beside the big garbage tank.

He stopped his car & ran there hoping for the worst.

There was a girl with white dress sitting there with bent knees ,hiding her face in her knees.

Geet...

She looked up...

Chris...So u know my name!!!!.she smiled awfully,it was like she was some mental patient. His heart tugged painfully looking at her.

She stood up wobbling...

She came closer to him with the same smile...then suddenly the smile vanished as she started to slap him...one after another...

pata tha na tumhe,sab pata tha na??? PHIR KYUN IS JHOOT MEIn sAATh diYA?? DOST KEHTE THE NA?? PHIR KYUN NAHI ROKA UNKO??? KYUN NAHI ROKA mujhKO??? KYUN NAHI ROKA??? KYUN??? KYUN MUJHE ISS JHOOT MEin JINE DIYA??? KYUN MUJHE NAHI ROKA UNHE PYAAR KARNE SE?? KYUN KYUN????

She screamed her heart out in the rain drenched,as chris stood there ,taking all her slaps,all her anger...he now understood...IT WAS TOO LATE...

Chris caught her as she fainted & called dadi.

*****

Her life was i danger,for two days..she didn't even wake up...

Chris forbid Dadi & the others form informing maan cause his agitation & tension would only worsen the case,& also maybe they then also would have to handle maan along with geet.But MOST OF ALL they were not sure how geet will be after she wakes up,how much will she remember,she might forget this incident like she did about that night...so they HAD TO wait before informing maan...

Bt when she woke up,it was like it was not geet..not her with the cold eyes,stony heart...

She didn't show any emotion when she came to know that dadi ,dev & meera were very anxious about her. She didn't just answered what was asked to her,& that's it...

The only question she herself asked was how did she come in the hospital in the first place & how maan came to know about her & why he did this??

Chris was there to answer her questions...he told her all he knew,nothing more,nothing less...Cause he was a man of fair dealings. he couldn't even think about taking advantage of a situation like this for his own good.

He told her that how there was a plane accident & how she was the only survivor ...that cause of this she was admitted in the BEST hospital in the town. How they tried to contact her parents,bt they failed & lastly,how maan came across her...

Apparently,she didn't lose her memory like last time. She remembers what she knew before fainting...that is SHE WAS GEET,unrelated to Khurana family...& the recent memories.

***

DAY 7(1 am):-

Maan looked at the phone for countless time...

Come on geet,kitna gussa karogi!! Ghar jakar use mana na muskil hoga...Maybe i should call her.

He was going to call her,bt his phone rang. he took it without seeing who it was...

Hey Geet...uh..Akriti... itna gussa karogi?? His mouth slipped.

Oh ho!! So that duplicate's name is geet!! he heard a familiar voice.

Who is it? Though he knew,still he wanted ti defy it.

U forgot me so fast ?? Koi baat nahi,yaad dila deta hoon.. I am ur dear friend Dhruv,jiske saath tumhare wife ka chakkar tha...he laughed.

What do you want??Maan bit out.

Just warning you,Dhruv laughed again...

I think every girl with that face has the same character...

GEET IS NOT LIKE THAT!.

Oh ho,watch out,maybe this one is even more sharp than the previous one...ab dekho na,tum yaha..wo kaha!!! He laughed.

Kya matlab hai tumhara??

She is now with Chris,now,think...itni raat ko ...akele Chris ke saath...Not so innocent like you think,huh!!

Maan cut the call & banged the phone on the table...

Precap- Misunderstanding continues...Geet makes her decision


One more thing..don't bash me for this episode...This IS an MG FF & so u can pretty much be sure that it would end up with maan-geet being together...Bt this was needed. The only way to show in fullest how much maan loves geet ,is to show another lover of her who loves geet VERY intensely. I hope u understand..It's pretty much like until there is a strong power at the opposite to fight...one's true potential or power can never be shown in it's fullest

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i truly enjoy reading this ff!!!! wonder wat turn will maaneet relationship take??!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan dont do it again
please dont just trust her will you
first of all you lied to her
she didnt so dont even think about it
ahhh so chris loves her
well he loves geet as does maan
but what now
how can she be with maan when he lied to her
when he married her as akriti and not geet
and this dhruv did he have to do this
crap man this is just gonna make things worse
so she remembers who she is now
but it still dont explain about her family
where are those people i wonder
unless they think she is dead
so they havent come looking for he
maan you love geet and so does chris but that dont mean she is cheating you
when you have been cheating her
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
chris hid his feelings for maan
but he knew maan is insanely love with her
he cant think it as using her
he married geet too
mu...no...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's it...actually I was waiting for such twist...perfect timming...geet's memory is back...chris love is revealed to us & maan is doubting geet...all of this will complicate things but it will be entertaining to read...but what is dhruv's motive after akriti's death...is he here to avenge maan or someone is using dhruv to create misunderstandings???...may be akriti is not dead...well that will be a shock to us...lets c...plz update soon...btw till now liked chris's character a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Somewhere i had this idea tat chris would fall in love with geet

but now it is will geet hate maan and go with chris will he take this chance to take her away

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