TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR NEW FF
so geet sharing her thoughts with diary..
plane crashed
whats in her bag..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...
is geet going to be bhatakti atma???
add me in your pm list..
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



Thank you for appreciating & reviewing my new ff,bt as i am noticing...some of my dear readers complained about the title,asking to remove the "b**ch" part from it. Well, i am really sorry that i can't do that as it is not the plot or scene ,it is the TITLE itself...now u must think what's on a title, to tell u the truth,i got the title in my mind 1st then the plot just seeded from it. So changing the title means asking to cut the root for me. BUT I ASSURE U GUYS,IT'S NOT FOR GEET (well not partly i guess😆 socho,socho..) ,SHE WON'T TURN INTO A B**ch😊. JUST TRUST ME...

Part-1
I opened my eyes with great difficulty,where am i! OH!! this headache! It's killing me.I looked here & there & seeing all the nurses,i concluded that i am in a hospital.
What am i doing here ? i thought as i sat upright.
Mamma papa kaha...my train of thought stopped as i discovered that i can't remember my parent's name,their face...fear corrupted me,so i even have any parents..what's happening!!!! Wh..who am i??
AAA!!!!
i screamed in fear ,what would happen to me!would someone come for me! i wanted to hide myself,i can't seem to remember who i am ...

GEET scrambled out of the bed & fell on the floor tangling herself in the bedsheet . The fear, the agony of losing ur own existence was traumatic for her. She must have hit the emergency button in the process as the siren continued to ring loudly.
Doctors came rushing to the room,as well as a handsome man of 30 in formals (If anyone wants to know geet's age,it's 18)

But geet could only see the feet which were entering the room. She cringed more.
Patient kaha hai?! they were perplexed..bt hearing a soft sound of sobbing they turned to that direction- only to discover the VERY frightened girl on the floor scrunching herself more covered with the bedsheet...the doctors pitied on her. She must have found out about her amnesia ...they thought
Only the other man's face tightened.

Akriti..one of the doctors called her.

Akriti..they called her once more. Now the girl looked at them.

Yes, that's right , no need to be frightened...so what if u don't remember urself,we know who u are..
sacchi?
ha. Now get up..see ur HUSBAND is here to take u home.She got up & looked at the man standing beside the doctors with a stern face.
Now sit down & tell us how u are feeling..one of the doctors assured her & made her sit on the bed.
They started to ask her questions & she answered them all the while looking at THAT man who was sitting opposite to her.
Ok now GE...errr, i mean AKRITI, u talk with ur husband & feel comfortable.we have to work & we will return soon with the results,ok? The youngest doctor said as the other two doctors & THAT MAN glared at him.

There was a pin drop silence in that room...after almost ten minutes of silence,she looked up & found the man staring out the window...
She cutely tugged at his shirt,suniye
The man looked at her with a poker face.
Wo ap gussa mat kijiye,lekin...wo,wo...she fidgeted with the bedsheet.
Jo bolna hai sidhe sidhe bolo.his voice was deep & masculine.
wo,apka naam kya hai? she asked cutely.
MAAN.
App sach me mere pati ho?
Ha.
wo,main,i..matlab,mujhe ye puchna tha ki, meri umar kitni hai?
28.
accha?wo mai ..mere parents??
Tumhara mere parivaar ke sivai koi nahi hai..he said rather rudely.
Her eyes burned with tears. Ho sakta hai ki uski koi parents na ho,lekin to be reminded of this NEWLY,hurt her..it really hurt her a lot.
Hamare shadi (she shied while saying the word shadi) ko kitne saal hua hai?
4...all the while Maan was looking at her every expression intently,as if judging something.
Wo,main,hum, humare...she was going all red while asking the question....k..k..kitne bacche..
None,he cut her question in middle.
App gussa ho mujhse kya?
Maan closed his eyes to control the RAGE boiling inside him.
Nahi, i am like this only.
Matlab app aise hi khadus ho!! she very cutely laughed ..for the first time after the accident...
Maan looked at her innocent laughing form... main koi galti to nahi kar raha hu na??NAHI ...it HAS TO BE HER!!...he thought

PRECAP- Geet or AKRITI GOING MAAN"S HOUSE


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Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its clear that sm huge controversy is going on.The doctors know that she is Geet but as per Maan's will they are calling her Akriti.Maan formed a false story of her marriage,age,family everything.Hmmm too much suspicious.

Then,why is Maan angry,why is unsure that if Geet is the correct girl????

Well you've created too much curiosity buddy.

Update fast so that we keep on discovering new secrets and mysteries.

Gr8 first part.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part
maan said geet as his wife akriti kyun ab waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsem update maan angry why maan telling her wrong age and geet scared and cute maan angry young man
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is tat its a double role typpe

i mean geet maan ki wife akriti ek jaise deekhte ho and his wife is dead and he sees geet and feels she is his wife
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
honestly lv the title
bt as knowing u trust u 😉
wt maaneet mean to us we know ourselves well😆😆
first part
geet has amnesia
n all know her name is geet bt still calling her akriti
may b bcoz of maanu
bt y maanu doing so
n married 4 saal uff
lv the way she asked her q n khadoos wow 😆😆😆
is that like akriti her hamshkal or something
jo b ho very very interesting
waiting 4 more
lvd it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why maan teling geet lie waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update

but maan ye geet ko wrong details kyun bta rha hai uske baare me???

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