TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
maan was wrong 2 assume geet as akriti but after finding out d truth, he was really guilty, n somewhere along d line he has fallen in love with geet! both r dying 4 each other but wonder who will relent first!

great part n waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hay...waiting...He also love her like anything..sad he himself dont know...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update 👏 felt very sad for Geet 😭😭
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Part 18

(why maan doesn't understand his love for geet)

Kaisa lagta hai kisiko itna pyaar karna ki hum apne apko bhulne lage? Kaise lagta hai jab uss pal ko yaad karke apka tan jale,jise pal se apko nafrat honi chahiye thi? Kaisa lagta hai jab app jisse pyaar karte ho ,usse agar nazarien mil jaye,to aisa lagta hai ki khud pe koi bas nahi rahega... koi mujhse pucho..koi mujhse pucho kaisa lagta hai...jab app apne pyaar ko chuna chate ho,par chu nahi sakte,kyun ki app jante ho ...yeh galt hai,bout galat...to phir kyun? Ye sahi lagta hai? Kyun lagta hai ki isse jyada paak aur kuch nahi?...

Geet closed her diary. She wanted to cry every moment for him...to him. For this intense love she felt every moment for him,she couldn't handle it anymore. But it only increased more..every day,every moment,every second...tormenting her,tearing her soul apart.

Her diary became her pain holder,where she would write all her agony. With whom she could share without the fear of being judged...It stopped her from going senile.

Geet,are you there? You should get ready. Your friends would be here any moment.

To tell the truth,she wasn't excited at all. They were not her friends,they were just classmates with whom she talked because she had to. because or else dadi,meera & dev suspect again that she was not emotionally stable.

How could she tell them that she was NOT. How could she tell them that she was crazy. Because she loved that man insanely & still loved him more & more when she should hate him.

No,she couldn't tell anyone..she wouldn't tell anyone.

So though she preferred to stay in her room quietly...she had to go & be social,for the sake of making them believe that she was ok...

Geet today we will make you most beautiful . Tum bas dekhna.

Geet smiled,though she thought...kiske liye main sajun... wo to mujhe nahi dekhenge...aur agar dekhenge bhi,to mujh me Akriti ko dhundenge.

Wo geet beta, we are sorry,that we can not be here tonight. we have to go . Actually one of Meera's relative invited us & we have to go. Though we hate to leave you alon in the party..bt ur friends will be there. Sorry beta.

Koi baat nahi dadi.

Geet all the preparations have been done, you don't have to do a thing..just enjoy.

ok.

*****

***

Dev call maan if he has come back from office,or it would be a problem. Geet will be alone. Dadi said

Dadi I was telling from the start that this plan is not good. Though she pretends that she has tons of friends,we know better,don't we?? We are just leaving geet alone with a bunch of idiots until maan comes.

& I hope bhaiji comes soon...geet waha un logo ke beech akeli hogi.

Don't worry,I asked maan today before planning this,he said he will come back soon today. Still ,actually I am worried about her too.

Why didn't you tell maan that geet is alone at home?

Dev do you really think he will be back at home with this...

No one answered,since they knew,he would instead busy himself in office all night so he doesn't have to come back home...alone with geet.

Ha maan,where are you?

Dadi I am a little stuck.

WHAT,kitni der hoga? You know na that ALL OF US are going to my friend's daughter's wedding?

Maan laughed a little,

Dadi why are you panicking so much? It's just an empty house! What's there to lose?

Dadi now desperately wanted to tell him..bt she couldn't.

What should she say...Dev snatched the phone

Maan,please,go home soon,forget about the project. We are just worried cause there is a large amount of liquid cash at home..

Bt there is security.

Maan please.

That's crazy! I have a very important meeting today with Mr mehra, You know that it's the biggest project of the company till now,I can't leave now. But I will go home as soon as I can,ok ? Now bye. He cut the phone

Dev was at lose...he looked at the phone dumfounded. At the same time,the car stopped.

What happened Nakul?

Bhabi gadi me problem ho gaya...nakul said after inspecting the engine.

Kitne der lagegi? Dadi asked anxiously.

Dadi kam se kam 2 ghante to lagenge

What should we do? We can't go back cause of this damn car. Geet is alone...

...

...

...

Call Chris. Meera said.

WHAT? Meera do you know what you are saying? You know that Chris loves Geet,& if he goes now...

...

...

****

Wow ,this girl was so rich i didn't know yaar!!

Yeah! Do you think that she is single? I mean she must be in need of a boyfriend . Dekhna,always alone & always chup chap. She is not bad looking actually ...naybe a little plain...Don't you think she is waiting for someone like me...Rahul looked at her sitting at the corner quietly in her own party while the others were enjoying without even noticing her.

Yeah,she will be astonished that someone as plain looking as her can have a boyfriend like me.

Hey,Geet...congrats!! You are amazing to be the topper of the college!

Thank you.

So, will you dance with me?

No thanks.

Rahul's face fell,there wasn't a single girl in the college who didn't throw herself on him for his looks & this girl DARES to reject HIM!!!

I WILL SHOW HER,he thought

Don't be a spoilsport geet,it's your party. Come on,lets enjoy.

Mujhe nahi dance karna please.

Ok,then lets have a drink together.

ok.

There were no hard drinks in the party,bt some of them didn't felt the scarcity of it,cause they had already brought that with them...

Rahul mixed the liquor in geet's drink when she wasn't noticing & then served it to her.

****

Damn ,this Mehra!!! He had to cancel the appointment at the last minute!! Maan thought angrily..

Actually his anger was more because of he had to stay at home alone...jaha ke har kone mein uski hasi gunjti thi...jaha par ab uski siskiya gunjti hai...har roj...har rat...

He hated it...why this whole damn mansion was making him remember about her every moment? It made him remember her laughs ,cries, accusations...& what every wrongs he had done to her.

Maan Sing Khurana,jo kabhi galti nahi karta...commited SINS..one after another,till he broke a pure soul into pieces...

He laughed painfully, chugging down the liquor in his hand.

...

What's that sound ?

He followed the sound & it took him to the east wing..where she lived.

What he saw,made his blood boil.

Geet was dancing with another boy very closely.

Mujhe nahi pata tha ki app itne accha dance karte ho...he heard her say

No one could see him cause he looking down from the dark second floor. His grip in his glass tightened.

Pata hai...I like you.

Thanks babe. I like you too.

There was a small crack in the glass from the force.

Accha!!apne to kabhi nahi kaha...Nahi..nahi..wo wala like nahi.

I love you. she said

The glass in maan's hand shattered in pieces. He saw red Before he knew,his body was going towards them to separate them...

Suddenly he saw geet look up at the boy with a shocked look & push him.

YOU ARE nOt MAAN.

Maan's eyes widened.

What's with that babe, a minute ago you were clinging in my arm...rahul said smugly

M..maine kisi aur ko samjha tha. Geet said swaying a little.

Come on..don't be like that...I know you like me. He tried to get close o her again.

DON'T...She snapped & screamed.

DON'T TOUCH ME. DO YOU UNDERSTAND..DON'T TOUCH ME...JUST...DON'T...MAAN KE SIVA KISIKO MUJHE CHUNA KA HAQ NAHI HAI..SAMJHE TUM...KISIKO NAHI...

...

Maan stood dumbfounded...then he retreated from there..without a word.

Rahul looked here & there feeling embarrassed as all of them were looking at them now.

You will pay for this,he said in a low voice & went out from there.

...

...

PARTY IS OVER,Please go home....she said in a tired voice...

*****

Geet collected the last bit of confetti & dumped them into the bin.

She wanted to go to bed now..she was feeling really weird after that drink Rahul gave her.

Empty house...empty corridor...these were things i was afraid of before...now i don't feel afraid anymore from these...she thought ironically while passing the corridor.

She was going to Maan's room.

She did this every time when Maan wasn't at home & everyone was asleep.

She used to slip in his room silently & lie on his bed,taking in as much as his smell ,his essence as she could...till dawn...

& today no one was in the house...she could be in his room for more time... Suddenly something...or someone pushed her to the nearest pillar.

It was maan...Her eyes widened at the realization.

Little miss Geet alone in the house..eh!

Maan...Geet said with trembling voice.

He looked...drunk...very drunk.

What do you want ? He said roughly,very close to her.

Main..mujhe kuch nahi chahiye. She whispered

Really,you don't want anything! Then what are you doing here?

She remained silent...what could she have said?

You think I don't know about ur your little adventures in my room while I am not here?...Huh..tell me MISS GEET?? He asked n cruel mockery.

Main...main...tears spilled from her eyes...

...why was he being so cruel?

Ok,then let me fulfill ur wish MISS Geet...He again smiled mocking her & opened the door of his room only to roughly shove her in Bed...

Maan please..nahi...app hosh me nahi hai.

He laughed..hosh mein!! I am perfectly fine Geet,but YOU are the one who is still lost in her own little fantasy world of romance. Let me have THE PLEASURE TO BREAK IT...he said as he hovered over her with a predatory gleam.

Precap- Don't want to see you.DOn't want to love you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
my god...y did u stop at such a point! maan heard geet right then y is he doing this?

n geet is drunk to right?
wat is rahul going 2 do?? geet is in danger!
thank god they did not call chris!
hope maan does not misbehave with geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update...
Is maan going to break geets heart and their love?

Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet behind maan rahul trying to close to geet but geet slapped him and his threat and maan drunk geet danger
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...👍🏼...Geet gave a good reply to that Rahul...😡...but oh no......what is Maan trying to do...😲...is he again going to break her heart...😕...i hope no...🤔...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat the hell Maan is doing..

how could he when he has already broken her to such an extent and now again

how ill he undo or is he doing it purposely
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
rahul got a good reply from geet...
what is maan doing?!!1
hope he doesnt hurt geet again...

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