TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
well the title definitely caught my attention. I loved both chapters.

Geet is so adorable and innocent!

And the mystery begins ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part
doctors know that she is geet but calling her akriti
maan is angry man
thare is huge mystery
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
ye kya ho raha hai
i mean geet and aakriti confusion
i think they know she is geet but pretending that she is aakriti
what is going on
ye ghapla kya hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



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Though many of my dear readers have guessed it close to the right thing

Shoba di & swarnakanak ...BANG ON (ALMOST-because iss me vhi twist hai😆)

Part-2

The 3 doctors who attended geet were in their cabin.

Dr John,why did u take her name,we told u her name is not geet,it's Akriti.

Come on man,she is here for nearly one month & for Most of the days we knew from her passport that her name is geet..

Maan barged in the office & held his collar..HER NAME IS NOT GEET,IT's AKRITI ...SAMJHE!

ok ok,let me go,we know,just i didn't get habituated to the new name,sorry.

John,u can leave now, i have something to talk about. The senior doctor said.

ok sir.he left

Take a sit maan.

As he took his seat the old man offered him a glass of water to cool his temper down.

Maan ...are u sure about what u are going to do?

Yes, i can never make a mistake. It's her...my wife Akriti.

Bt maan may be she is not the one,may be she is just

Hamshakal...HUH! what a joke dr uncle!! U are saying i won't recognise my won wife!

FLASHBACK

Maan was in the hospital to collect his dadi's weekly report. Dr Ashutosh's hospital,one who is a close family friend of maan's.

He thought it would be a matter of 30 minutes as he just has to collect the reports,bt after finding out that Dr Ashutosh himself has returned from U.S after his 5 years long trip (due to some research work),he had to go & greet him. So it was very ate when he pushed the button of the elevator to exit...bt...

as the elevator door opened some nurses along with two doctors rushed in with a patient blocking him from going out of the elevator...

Nurse how did this happen? Didn't u check the list of what the patient is allergic to?

The nurses dipped their heads in shame.

Dr Chris continued,it's very easy for u to ignore patients like geet ,hai na..because they are in coma & they can't complain,RIGHT!

Hey Chris,buddy what happend,Chris was maan's best friend & it was rare to see him this angry ...he wasn't talking till now inspite of seeing Chris,because he could see it was an emergency case,or else he was Very eager to catch up with his best friend who was with dr Ashutosh in his research trip.

Bt he had to butt in cause he knew once the otherwise happy - go-lucky Cris gets angry,he can hardly do a thing ,save saving patients.

Hey buddy cool down or else u can't treat her.

These careless nurses gave my patient a med of she is allegic...what were they thinking maan!! Ki coma me hai kya pharak padta hai!! Wo to complain nahi kar sakti!

Bt sir, one of the young nurses said, she is here for 20 days & we have tried to contact the number given in her passport,bt no one is receiving it,so practically she is a patient who is in coma with no realtives,how will she pay the cost,& khamoka she was occupying a bed,pata nahi kabtak coma se bahar ayegi...ya ayegi vi ya nahi,,akhir kabtak...so

So u thought so what if she dies,instead it would be good..hai na. Dr Chris said with a cold tone.

Thank u nurse, u are so intelligent...

the nurse beacame happy,bt maan was shocked, what is this nurse saying!!! bt he was not shocked What Chris said,cause he knew him well...so he knew what will come next.

Ms,Sunita,Chris said with a smile...u are fired & i will make sure that u get no job ANYWHERE...NOW MOVE He barked.

maan moved along with Chris,after the talk he wanted to see at the poor patient .

Bt what he saw shocked him...Akriti! he whispered.

Chris,moved to the OT...

after some time, when he came out..

Wo ladkii kaisi hai,

she is alright maan.

She...she is Akriti...

WHAT!!!

Thought Chris was maan's best friend ,he was unable to come in maan's wedding with Akriti,cause he was on a research tour with Dr Ashutosh.,bt he used to call maan every now & then...yes maan had sent him photos of their weeding,bt due to workload,he missed to see the pics..& when he wa finally a little free...he never bothered to see those pics,cause till then stories Akriti's doings had made him bitter...so though he knew the name of maan's wife, he never saw her.

Present

Akriti...last time when i heard about her ..she was going with her boyfriend on a trip...there was a major landslide in that area & i heard that she died...

Bt now that she is back..he smirked,with her memory gone...I am going to take revenge of every pain she inflicted upon me & my family...

.sorry sir to interupt,bt this is related to my buddy also.Chris said

Dr Ashutosh nodded.

Maan are u sure,dekh aisi galti maat karna ki tujhe pastana pade.

I showed u guys our wedding pic,

bt maan she has passport & there her name was GEET HANDA.

So what money can buy a name easily.

Bt maan look at her,she is so small in figure,do u really think that ,she would be 28 years..

come on! plastic Surgery...

her address?

Noone picked up the phone..Did they?

Chris sighed in defeat...be careful maan,soch samjaz kar

*****

She was looking at everything in awe...ye hamara ghar hai?

Maan flinched at the word hamara..bt nodded nonetheless.

Dadi came at the doorstep with the aarti thali, though she didn't look happy at all.

Geet saw dadi & instinctively covered her head with dupatta, just like how a new bride do.

Though maan & dadi were shocked at this gesture, they didn't say anything..dadi did the aarti...after it was finished , geet AGAIN INSTINCTIVELY bent down to take ashirvad....

she stood up with a cute smile...app dadi ho na..par gussa mat karna,app maan ke dadi ho ya mere?

Hum maan ke dadi hai...

she cutely twisted her lips...hmmp,ye thik nahi hai,Mujhe kuch nahi milega?

Maan smirked thinking...memory loss ho ya na,insaan apni aadat ,fitrat kavi nahi vulta...aa gayi aukat pe.

Ya...he was right ..bt partly..as geet said..

app sara pyaar maan ko kyun degi, Mujhe vi to kuch milna chahiye!! To App maan ke kam, aur mere dadi zyada hai..thik hai? With this she hugged dadi in a bear hug shocking both!

Precap- Geet/Akriti's first day at km..

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Fabulous part
maan thought geet as aktiti and wanted revenge
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
so akriti cheated maan but he is wrong..

without even thinking once about her being someone else

wat will he do.. hope not so dangerous tat he will regret it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
fab part
so maan wanted to take revenge on akriti
i love this geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Now the picture is very much clear so Aakriti Maan's wife, a gold digger who fled with her bf ditching Maan was or is Geet's look alike and now Maan wud be taking revenge fm poor Geet!!!!! 😲

But revenge lete lete toh Maan ko sweety pie Geet se pyaar ho jaayega toh revenge ka kyg hoga 😆

Only one doubt now why didnt Geet's family receive the doc's calls????

Anyways the story's gonna be fun.Gr8 part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
revenge point turn good maan wanted revenge



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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
do i have to pm shobha to know wt she guessed
coz me really curious😆😆😆
bt after reading today's pasrt
i got a little clue
akriti mean after marrying maanu also she with her bf chi chi kamini khi ki
maanu want to take his revenge from his wofe akriti who is actually dead
aww poor geet
bt at least they both will b together haina😆😆
maanu dont want to bl she is not n giving himself clarification abt her identity
finally in home
n lv her cute gesture which is shocking 4 maanu n daddo both
lvd it
waiting 4 more

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