TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story Th2 UPDATED PART 24 @ 24/19th july

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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story


Thank you my dear readers for reading & loving my story & thanks to you guys...Now It is the 2nd THREAD !!!So Cheers to you Guys !!!!🥳 (Though i will appreciate more if you also be a little bit less lazy & start commenting for real instead of those one words!!!😭)






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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story



Prologue-
My dear babaji...Oops!! sorry sorry,diary pe likhte waqt to sab MY DEAR DIARY likhte hai na,par meri koi galti nai hai babaji, app ki galti hai...are!! aise ghur kya rahe hai?? Apki galti hi to hai! Main to saradin apse bate karti rehti hu,apni manki sari bate SIRF apse share karti hu,to phir meri diary kaun padega,diary thodi apne apko padega,app hi to padoge..to phir galti kiski hui,ha..bolo,bolo?

Accha chodo,ye 1st january hai na..har bar ki tarha iss baar vi main apne bare mein thoda likhti hu. Mera naam GEET HANDA hai,just gave the 2nd biggest exam of my life,now CHUTTI!!!! Main ek middle class family se hu,are babaji,Gussa kyun karte ho?? middle class hu mujhe isse koi shikwa nahi,main bohut khush hu...Meri choti si ,pyari si family mein..Mere papa Mohinder Handa,mamma Rano Handa,aur mera Khadus,par pyaar karne wala bhai Brij ...pata hai,ek aur naya member vi add hone wali hain,wo na, mere brij bhai ki shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai,bhabi mujhe bohut pasand hai,bas bhabi ki padai khatam ho jaye...

Ek secret batati hu,mera na, aj tak koi boyfriend nahi hai...actually pehle mere sab friends ko proudly batati thi,par wo mujh par haste hai,isiliye ye apka aur mera secret,ok babaji?

Waise ek baat batau..mujhe ye accha nahi lagta,timepass karne ke liye,ya propose kiya hai -dil tut jayega bechare ka ye soch kar jab log dating karte hai...kya faida? Baad me khud ro,usko rulao,aur dono gharwalo ka vi dil todo. Ha agar pyaar saccha hai to alag baat hai...haina babaji? Phir to dono kisi vi musibaat ka samna kar sakte hai saath milkar. Mujhko to pyaar hi nahi hua abtak..shayed meri arranged marriage hogi. Arranged ho ya Love marriage,bas pyaar karne wala hona chahiye.

Paisa kam ho,surat acchi na ho, to vhi chalega...lekin sirat acchi honi chahiye,wo mujhe samjhe,mere dil ki baat janne ki kosish kare,bas aur kuch nahi babaji...Are!! app vi na babaji...!!! Kya soch rahe ho,ki main sirf demand hi karti hu..main unhe vi dungi na babaji...dheeer sara pyaar,main unki dil ki baat samajhne ki kosish karungi...thoda wo kare,thoda hum...aise hi to naye rishte mazbut hote hai..haina babaji???

Waise mera ek khwab hai...i want to wake up everymorning in His arms,unke bahon me samakar...mujhe un couples ki tara nahi banna jo life ke ek mod se raat ko WO (me thinking-do i really need to explain what is "WO"! ) karne ke baad ek dusre ko pith (back) dekha kar so jate hai...Hai rabba!! main ye besharmo ki tarha kya likh rahi hu!! Babaji app ye wala part mat padna,ok...NO CHEATING!!

Waise bata sakte ho ki main kaha hu?? Main plane me hu,brij bhai apne pehli salary se mujhe kuch nahi de sake..to unhone kaha tha,ki sabar rak main tereko bada gift dunga...so here i am flying to my mama who lives in Delhi to spend my vacation there...Pehli baar plane main,pehli baar akele...bada maza...

Suddenly the plane started to shook terribly,geet shoved her diary & pen in her bag & clutched the bag close to her,uske papa ne kaha tha.."Jo vi ho,ye jaruri documents wali bag mat gumana"...the attendants tried to make the people calm,saying this problem is momentary...par shayed kismat ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha...the plane CRASHED!


PLEASE READ THE SUMMARY HERE BEFORE GOING TO ANY MISCONCEPTION ABOUT THE PLOT WHILE READING THE PROLOGUE.


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Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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congrats on the new thread!!!!!!
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Congrats on new thread
Wonder what happens now

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TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story


ANY SIMILARITY in SCENE IS NOT INTENDED. IF YOU SEE ANY SIMILARITY PLEASE TELL ME FIRST BEFORE INTERPRETING IT AS COPYING.
Thank you my dear readers for reading & loving my story & thanks to you guys...Now It is the 2nd THREAD !!!So Cheers to you Guys !!!!🥳(Though i will appreciate more if you also be a little bit less lazy & start commenting for real instead of those one words!!!😭)

Part 21

Hmmmp!!! Kya samajhte hai apne apko... MAIN MAAN SING KHURANA THE GREAT HOON,AUR YE HAI GEET ,ISKO INTRODUCE KARANE KI ZARURAT NAHI!! YE CHARITY CASE HAI!!!! ARRRGHHH!!!! She muttered while packing/stuffing her bag .

MAIN APPKO DIKHAYUNGI MR I AM SO GREAT KHURANA!!! I WILL PROVE IT TO YOU THAT NEITHER I AM CHARITY CASE NOR I AM BECHARI!!!!.

Geet beta,why are you packing your cloths?
Dadi mujhe yaha nahi rehna. Maine bohut socha. Aur soch soch ke ye laga ki mujhe uss ...uss DUSHT DANAV ke samne apne apko prove karna hai,ki main bechari nahi hoon.

Dadi was somewhat happy that the fiery geet was back,even for a little bit,though she noticed this change from the day she had visited the ****land,she couldn't fathom what could possibly have given Geet that energy & spirit to fight back at THAT place,that too in such a short time!!

Ha..wo to acchi baat hai,lekin app pack kyun kar rahi hai apne kapre.
Kyun ki main hostle ja rahi hoon. Mujhe nahi dekhna uss Dusht Danav ka chera roz roz.Kitna kuch sunaya usne mujhe.

App ko ye sab karne ki zarurat nahi.
Kyun??

Because noone an enter in your area without my or your permission.

Nahi dadi,uss dusht danav ka koi bharosa nahi. wo to hai.. APNE MARZI KE MALIK!!! Jaha chahenge ghus jayenge . Bilkul behaya besharam.

Yaha iss ghar mein aisa kaun hai beta jo iss dadi ki baat nahi manega??!!!

Hai na dadi. Dusht danav!

Dusht danav??

Ha , apne mazi ke malik, Mr. I AM SO GREAT MAAN SING KHURANA!!! Wo kisiki sunege kya!!!?? She huffed in more anger.

Dadi tried to suppress her laugh with her stubborn pota's new name..

Khrus ,akdru,saru,idiot,arrogant,kabhi apne galti nahi mante...she seethed more in her cute anger.

Dadi smiled more. Though she was initially shocked with maan's behavior with geet & was very displeased,after she came out of that shock ,her old eyes & experienced mind said that there is a lot more what their eyes were seeing... So instead of taking any action against maan,she chose to sit back & watch & wait for the right time.

But beta...if you move out,then he will think he won.

Kyun? Geet being geet,couldn't see the mischievous tone of dadi. So she started to think hard as in How maan will win if she moves out.

Dekhiye beta,he insulted you infront of his so called beautiful girlfriend,haina?

DADI,WO BILKUL BHI ACCHI NAHI HAI DIKHNE MEIN!!! She screamed scrunching her nose.

Maine dekha tha na dadi...chi chi babaji ,use sundar kehte hai!!! Khadus ki aanken kharab ho gayi hai. Pata hai aisi aisi dubli hai,jaise saloon se khana nahi khaya hai. Haddiyan (bones) to sari dikh rahi thi,to cloth se cover kya kiya!!! Aise crow jaisi legs hai,bandariya jaisi sakal...

Accha!!!! Dadi pretended to be astonished,while enjoying this baby-woman's jealous talk.

Are dadi appko pata nahi hai!! Main batati hoon,aise tote (parrot ) jaisi naak hai. Pata hai SURPANAKHA ,nahi nahi,CHUDAIL bhi darr jaye use dekh kar. Lips ke place par kisine PHULGOBI laga diye,dant to ekdam muli ki tarha... Baal nahi chidiya ka ghosla hai,aur ...aur...

Geet ,Geet!! Hum samaj gaye. Hum maan se baat karenge. Warna koi aise ladki ko girlfriend banata hai?? Lagta hai uski eyes sach mein kharab ho gayi hai. DADI frantically tried to stop her as or else she will go on forever.

Ha dadi,isiliye main ja rahi hoon. Mujhe nahi dekh na wo Mr DUSHT DANAV & Ms. Chudail ka PERFECT MATCH ,she mimicked sarcastically,unknowingly saying what was in her heart.

Are beta agar aisi baat hai to apko aur bhi yaha rehna chahiye.

Accha? Kyun?

Wo ...wo...HA,he told you that you are a nobody . Now if you live in his house,where HIS ENTRY is not allowed,then uski shanti chali jayegi na...

Par...

Koi par war nahi . Aur agar apko jana hai to jayiye...par maan will say that you ran away without paying your debt.

Accha? Geet started to really pressure her brain...in her mind,she could almost see maan wearing a crown with all red light on him as he is laughing on her.

NAHI!!!
...
...
Dadi maine soch liya hai. Mr i am perfect ne mujhe charity case kaha hai na...i will make him take back his words...

That's My Geet!!!

*************

Things are often easier said than done.
After the party night it was the first day she was going to college. Not that she missed any class,luckily,it was college vacation too.
So the first thing came in her mind after she woke up was...

Today is your new day geet. Bilkul rona maat aur baat baat mein sabse help ke liye mat jana. Warna wo hai na...wo to tana marne ke liye baithe hi huye hai. Ek baat batao babji,mujhe tana marne ke liye unhe paise milte hai kya??!! She kept thinking all these while getting ready.

But neither she nor anyone else did realize that all these tornadoes in her life,could cripple her emotionally,mentally sneakily...

Geet realized this after she entered her class. Ofcourse that rahul thing was a big drama,so everyone staring at her was normal...but she found it unable to even speak a single word with anyone,not even a smile could break past through her tight barrier which she built unknowingly.

HEY!! I am just on time!!! It's a revolution!!! A girl who just came in like a tornado said as she huffed from lack of air.

All the student in subsequent benches laughed,as geet kept on seeing them.
Hey buddy!! Why are you so lost!! The girl patted her back.
Hi! I am pinki. Nice to meet you. I know you because you know..your party & that drama. But you know...to tell you the truth...you are a DUFFER!!!!

Geet's eyes widened.
Abb aise kya dekh rahi hai? Ab aur kya bolu tujhe? Tune sare class ko bula liya party mein,jaha tu personally kisiko bhi nahi janti!!! My bro says that i am the most stupid girl in world. Par tujhe dekhne ke baad he will change his mind!! I mean COME ON!!!! I mean it was not like you wanted to enjoy the party with more people!! You just sat in the corner while the others wasted your money!!!

Tumne mujhe notice kiya?? Geet said surprised.
Ae le!! Teri party hai aur tujhe na dekhu!!!! Pagal hai kya?!!!
Nahi i mean..no one really ...

Ok ok,jane de. Chal ,Let's be friends.
Friends?
Ha,chal start...HI!! I am PINKI.
Finally a little smile escaped her lips... I am geet. Nice to meet you.
******

Though the first week of college life went well with her only friend Pinki (this should be called her first college life as the previous semester,she just collected the noted from teachers & studied ) at the start of the second week,she was welcomed in the college with a not so pleasant surprise.

At college premises there were flyers allover. Curiously,she picked one up...

It was HER...with three pics added side to side, one with maan,one with chris,another with dev.

" CLEVER PLAYER...OR wh**e"... was that flyer's heading.

Precap- I know,it's not what i exactly wrote on precap,but it's the pre-motion of that. SO next part i promise you will be as good as to read it three times MORE...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update

but sudden change in geet.. somewhere scared tat this change will take everything from her again and she will be lost...

and now this college.. wat will she do.. though she built this unknown hard wall but how will she take this
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Awesome update
geet starting a new life
loved geet description about maan's so called gf😆
geet found a new friend in pinky
update next part soon!!!
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Hamesa yehi kartiho tum!!!😒
I wait for something n get something else!!
Good 2 c geet back in form!😃
The ending was a bit scary...phir bhi waiting as trust u with the story😊
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teri kisne kiya yeh
geet dont you dare break donw
you have had it with these idiots
samjhte kya hain sab apne aap ko
jo dekho inke saath khelta hai aur chod deta
one because of his guilt
other due to her being married
no more must she stand for herself
but will she be able to i wonder
wow she was jealous of that GF of maan's
and we know why though she need not
seems dadi knew more about whats maan doing than maan knows about
but this latest stunt is gonna take its toll on her
there is only so much she can take right
seems people are hell bent on making her life miserable
what more will she have to see and hear
her a player please dont be ridiculous
but all seem to be playing with her
thank god she has a friend
but now this new stunt god knows how she will react#
cheers for pm
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awesome part
loved it
baap re geet kya kya names di hain maan singh khuran ko

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