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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Im loving the way the story is moving!!! its simply awessome!

Gr8 job yaar!🤗

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nice story. Just read in one go.

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Wow! I loved it.❤️ Please continue soon...😳

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This chapter is really good n the way ur story is going its jst awesome

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Beautiful, continue pl! loved it

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hey tis is really great...totally luv it...superb...

read it all in one go...yippie asad n zoya got married...

please continue soon n do pm me...

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came across this story and read the 3 parts in one go

do cntinue soon

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Kya likha hain, MA! 😉 Thanks for the PM dear!

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Part 4

dinner time at khan mansion!!!

at the dining table:

dilshad: najma, jaake dekho zoya uthi ki nahi... main soup banaleti hoon uskeliye aur haan asad ko bhi bulalena

najma: theek hai ammi...

zoya's room

zoya was resting foe awhile... najma wakes her up...

najma: how are you feeling zoya?

zoya: main theek hoon tamatar...

najma: theek hai... main aapke liye soup lekar aati hoon...

zoya: nahi najma...ill come...

najma: nahi... ammi ne kaha aapko aaram ki zaroorat hai... aap please yaha baitiye... main aati hoon...

At the dining table

asad comes and sits in his usual place, tanveer also comes,, asad controls his anger seeing her..

dilshad: asad, zoya ka medicine prescriptions aur medicines do... dinner ka waqt hogaya... usse medicines dena hoga...

asad gets tensed, he din think of this, he had to lie to his ammi

asad: ammi wo, docter ne dinner ke baad ke liye medicine prescribe kiya, toh main baad main unhe dedunga...

dilshad thinks that asad wanted to spend time with her as she will go away from them and decides to give him the opportunity to take care of her.

dilshad: theek hai asad, main zoya ke liye soup lekar jaati hoon,... waise asad tum khud usske liye soup lekar jao...jao asad

asad gets happy to meet his wifey... but tanveer boils with anger

tanveer: khala... jammy ko dinner karne dijiye na... main zoya ke liye soup lekar jaati hoon...

dilshad: tanveer tum iss ghar ki mehmaan ho, mehmaan jaise raho,, yaha kya hoga aur kya nahi ye hum tey karenge... tum jao asad

asad gets furious at tanveer so does dilshad from the day of the so called suhagraat fiasco...

tanveer: (to herself) aap hume mehmaan kehrahe hai khala... aur zoya ko toh itna laad kar rahi hai... ye sab yaad rakungi aur dikhaungi ki aakhir mehmaan kaun hai...

zoya's room

zoya sits on the bed moving uncomfortably coz of those fake bandages...trying to fix them

asad: sirf thode hi din ke liye...

zoya: finally aagaye aap...

asad: kyun intezaar kar rahi thi?? huh(smirks)

zoya: ji nahi...

asad: aapke liye soup laya hoon... waise iska swaad accha nahi hai... lekin iss drame ke liye karna hi padhega...

asad sits next to her on the bed...

zoya: mr khan mujhe nahi peena hai...

just then dilshad enters the room...

dilshad: tumhe ye peena hi hoga...

zoya: lekin phupi..

dilshad: lekin vekin kuch nahi...

dilshad takes the soup from asad and feeds her... and tells zoya that she always used to make asad and najma drink this soup when they were ill and how asad also hated the taste of it,...zoya somehow finishes half of it,, dilshad then realises that asad needs some time to spent with zoya and leaves the soup bowl to asad...

dilshad: asad make sure ki zoya poora khatam kare haan...

asad: ji ammi...

as soon as dilshad leaves asad takes the spoon and drinks the soup...

zoya: mr khan aap kyun pee rahe hai.. aapko toh accha nahi lagta hai na..

asad: tumhe bhi toh accha nahi lagta...

both stare at each other(mitwa moment)

dilshad comes again to check on zoya...

dilshad: arre wah... meri pyaari zoya... poora soup khatam kiya(zoya looks at asad and smiles) chalo asad ab tum apna dinner karo... chalo...

asad: ammi main baad main karunga... mujhe bhook nahi hai...

dilshad: aise kaise bhook nahi... chalo asad

and pulls him out and makes sure he had his dinner... after dinner everyone retire to their respective rooms... after awhile asad goes to zoya's room through the window...

zoya: yes mr chor ahmed khan!! phirse aagaye aap...

asad: ji... koi pareshaani hai... agar main aaun toh...

zoya: aapka ghar hai... kahi pe bhi aayenge aur jayenge... main kaise sawaal kar sakti hoon...

asad: accha... let me tell you begam sahiba... ye aapka bhi ghar hai...

zoya: jaanti hoon...

asad: (confused) toh aisa kyun bola...

zoya: aise hi... aapke mooh se sunne ke liye...

asad: accha... waise ye tumhare liye...

zoya : (jumps)... pizza!!!!... mr khan aapko pata hai... mujhe pizza khake poore ek mahine hue...

asad remembers and gets emotional thinking how much she went through thiss one month

zoya: mr khan... im sorry... main aapko ye yaad nahi dilana chati thi.. wo main bas...

asad: ssshhh... tumhe sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai... chaliye aapka pizza khayiye...

zoya eats the pizza and asad admires her...

zoya: mr khan aap bhi kayiye...

asad: nahi main ye tumhare liye laaya hoon...

zoya forcefully feeds him the pizza,,... and start her non stop chatting and shayris... asad really missed this side of her and totally gets lost in her... meanwhile someone knocks the door,, asad and zoya get up with a shock, and both panick,, zoya pushes the pizza under her bed and asad hides in the washroom...

zoya opens the door

dilshad: zoya... darwaza bandh kyun kiya... agar tumhe kuch chaiye hota toh aur,,, maine kaha tha na bed se nahi utarna hai... chalo baitjao...

she makes zoya sit on the bed... and just then najma enters the room...

dilshad: zoya, main soch rahi thi ki main tumhare paas sojau... lekin najma toh zid pakad gayi ki usse tumhare saath sona hai...aur najma.. khyaaal rakhna ok

najma: of course ammi...(she huggs zoya) pata hai zoya... i missed you soo much...

zoya smiles, asad is listening to everything... asad panics as to how to get out of the washroom if najma stays over in the room

zoya: phupi... aap takleef kyun utharahe hai... im fine.. main sojaungi...

najma: nahi zoya... its ok... i want to sleep here... kitna din hogaya... baatein karke aapse..

dilshad: batein watein kuch nahi... zoya ko aaram karne do ha... good night... haan zoya asad ne medicine diya na..

zoya: (confused) medines... (she suddenly realises and says yes)

dilshad leaves najma and zoya... zoya and asad are tensed at their situations,...

That it!!! end of part 4... :-)
please do leave your comments... :-) it inspires me to write better!!😉
Part 5:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88014275

Edited by zoyaaakhan - 12 years ago

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