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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

wish they showed something like this in the show...but alaasss...its only for creative people like u to imagine and pen it down on IF so that people like us can read, imagine, and njoy it...

Do update soooner and plz PM me with ur update...I have added u to the buddy list...

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hanan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

loved it very nice plzzz update soon

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Nidaanwar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awesome,Fantastic and just don't have words to say and pm me when update I loved it I wish this happens in the show also

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-Everglow-

@-Everglow-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

wow...its awesome...i love it...finally after ages they got married...both the updates are lovely do pm me...

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_Kannika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

hey guys... loved all your comments!! here goes,

part 3

asad and zoya reach bhopal...

in the khan mansion:

the bell rings, tanveer, najma and dilshad were having their lunch... najma goes and attends the door... and gets shocked

najma: (screems) zoyaaa... bhaijaan zoya...ye sab kya hai...

by then tanveer and dilshad come running... tanveer as usual shocked to hear zoya's name and runs curiously, which was well observed by asad,...both get a shock and dilshad huggs zoya..

dilshad: asad ye sab kya hai...

asad: ammi wo...

dilshad: kuch toh kaho asad... ye sab kaise hua...

tanveer shocked to see zoya...

tanveer:(thinking) ya allah ye zoya toh baar baar bach hi jaati hai..

everyone were shocked to see zoya in that condition... her head was fully bandaged with blood stains on it and she had her arm hurt... looked like she had a fracture and her leg hurt which was bandaged... asad was holding her,,, zoya looked surprised... asad helps zoya settle on the couch in the living room...

dilshad: asad... kuch toh kaho...

tanveer:(thinking) ya allah... aaj main toh gayi... iss zoya ne bol diya hoga sab kuch... ab main kya karun(sweating and tensed)

najma: bhaijaan... zoya ko kya hua... kaise hua ye sab...

asad: najma.. pehle paani leke aao... jaldi...

najma brings water and offers zoya

asad: inhe aaram ki zaroorat hai... main inhe kamre main lejata hoon...

he says so he and najma take zoya to her room and make her sleep and both come to the living area...

tanveer:(thinking) ye jammy kuch bol kyun nahi raha hai... lagta hai zoya ne kuch nahi bola... jammy ko dekh kar aisa nahi lag raha ki unhe mujhpe shak hogaya... ya phir agar zoya ne bataya hai aur asad as usual us par yakeen nahi kiya... ya allah jaammy kych toh boliye... dar se mar jaa rahi hoon...

dilshad: ab toh bolo asad... khamosh kyun ho...

asad hugs dilshad with sadness...

dilshad: asad... mujhe dara rahe ho... bolo zoya ko kya hua...

najma: bhaijaan kahiye na... please

asad: ammi main nahi jaanta ki main khush ho jau ya phir gham pau... wo zoya ko...

dilshad: zoya ko kya?? (worried)

asad: ammi... zoya ka yaadgash chali gayi ammi...

he huggs dilshad...

najma: kya... toh phir wo sab bhool gayi bhaijaan...isiliye wo itni khamosh thi... wo... wo hume bhool chuki hai na bhaijaan??(crying)

tanveer:(smiling) (to herself) accha hua... haha... main bach gayi... lekin ye jammy ab iss zoya ko chodegne nahi!!

asad: nahi najma... sirf pichle 2 mahine ki yaad bhool gayi... yaad hai ammi... wo akram ne unhe kidnap kiya tha aur unhe sar par chot laga tha... aur unke dimaag ka haal theek nahi tha,,, wo druggs ke wajah se... aur abhi bhi unke sar par gehri chot aayi hai toh unka dimaag ka haal ussi waqt pe chala gaya hai...aur unhe lagta hai ki ye chot jo abhi aaya wo akram ke wajah se hai...

dilshad: asad... ye sab kaise hua hai...

najma: bhaijaan kya zoya ko yeh pata hai... ki unka memory loss hua hai??

asad: haan najma... doctor ne unhe bataya... unko jyada stress nahi dena chahiye lekin unhe sab kuch bataye... lekin main nahi chata ki unko sab kuch bataye jo humare beech hua... ab jab unhe kuch yaad nahi hai toh ye accha hai... maine inhe dhoka diya... inka bharosa thoda hai... agar ye unhe pata chala toh wo zindagi bhar in yaadon ke baare main sochkar pareshan hongi...
iss liye maine soch liya ki inhe ab neyork jana chahiye aur inke nayi zindagi ki shuruat karni chahiye... accha hua inhe kuch yaad nahi... kam se kam ye wohi hasti khushi zoya rahegi...jo pehle hua karti thi...

dilshad:(crying) huggs asad(najma joins and tanveer smiles) asad... dont worry... atleast zoya toh ye sab bhool gayi... wo poori zindagi khushi se phir se shuruat karegi... hai na... lekin wo tumhe aur hume pehchati hai na... wo aate hi itni khamoosh thi...

asad: haan ammi... pehchanti hai... aur inke aapi se main kal baat karunga... unhe thode din yaha aaram karne ke baad wo new york jaayegi...

both dilshad and najma get emotional...

dilshad: lekin asad... uss akram ke haadse ke baad hi zoya ko uske abbu ke baare main pata chala na...toh wo newyork nahi jayegi jab tak uske abbu ka talaash nahi karegi..

asad: ammi unhe ye to pata hai ki unka yaad chalagaya... wo mujhe pooch rahi thi ki in do mahine main kya hua... lekin maine kuch bataya nahi... unhe thode din baad hum batayenge ki unke abbu nhi rahe... tab wo newyork chali jayegi... unka toh India main rukhne ka yehi toh maksat tha na...i want her to move on in life... her new life

dilshad: haan asad... lekin asad.. ye haadsa kaise hua??

asad: pata nahi ammi... inhe maine hospital main dekha tha... main waha mere dost dr shetty hai na... unse milne gaya tha... iktefaak se maine zoya ko waha dekha toh inka ye haal tha... waha toh koi log unhe hospital le aaye the... unhone kaha ki wo cliff se gir gayi thi... pata nahi kaise... toh dr shetty ne kaha ki inhe partial amnesia hua hai...

tanveer: (thinking) chalo accha hua... ab wo chali jayegi... humesha ke liye aur jammy mere shauhar banenge...

tanveer: toh jammy wo hume toh bhool gayi hogi na...

asad was soo furious but was controlling his anger... just for the sake of zoya's safety..

asad: haan... wo jaanti bhi nahi hogi tumhe... aur ammi... unhe maine yehi bataya ki wo ajmer bas darga dekhne gayi... aap unhe kuch aur mat batayiye aur unke saath normally behave kijiye jaise pehle hua karte the, unhe pata nahi chalna chahiye ki humara nikah hone wala tha... theek hai... najma... tum bhi yaad rakhna... thode dino ke baad hum batayenge inn do mahine main wo apne abbu ke talaash main thi aur abhi abhi pata chala ki wo nahi rahe isiliye wo ajmer durga gayi thi...

dilshad: ye theek rahega...

najma: main zoya se milkar aati hoon...

asad: najma... unhe aaram ki zaroorat hai... baad main milna... main bhi thoda aaram karta hoon...

he goes off to his room... meanwhile in zoya's room.. someone sneaks into zoya's room through the window... and goes and stands behind zoya...zoya turns and was about to scream... her mouth was covered...

asad: main hoon...aapka shauhar... begam sahiba..

zoya: aapne dara hi diya mr khan...

asad: pehle darwaaza bandh kijiye... (zoya locks the door)

zoya: waise mr khan aap bhi chupe rustam nikle... kya acting kiya aapne... MA..

asad: MA??

zoya: mashallah!!! waise app yaha kyun aaye??

asad: kyun?? nahi aa sakta??

zoya: aapke manners kaha gaye... pehle toh bina knock kiye kise ke kamre main ja nahi rahe the ab toh ab... allah miya... kitki se chor ki tarah aagaye...

asad: haan(moves closer to zoya and pulls her against him) meri biwi hai... apni hi biwi ke kamre main aaya hoon... ismain manners ki kya zaroorat hai... ab aisa situation hai... toh tumse milne chor ki tarah hi aana hoga...

both stare at each other(mitwa playing)

zoya: (breaks the silence)main sab dekh rahi thi chup chup ke... kya acting kiya aapne.. aur mujhe aap milna chate the isiliye najma ko mujhse milne nahi diya na mr kha?? (smirking)

asad: wo... actually..

zoya: allah miya... whats wrong with you mr khan... ab toh propasal bhi hogaya hai... aur nikah bhi... ab please wo aur actually nahi... huh... sun sun ke thak gayi hoon...

asad: par mujhe sunna hai...

zoya: kya???? (confused)

asad: tumhare dil ka raaz...

zoya blushes and tries to get herself free from asad... but he grips her not letting her go...

zoya: not so easy mr asad ahmed khan!!

asad: accha... (releasing her)theek hai... main bhi dekhta hoon kitne dino tak chup rahogi...(stands with arms crossed)

zoya: ohho phir se akdu ahmed khan ke mode pe chale gaye... mr gussa ahmed khan!!! huh

asad: kya kaha... gussa ahmed khan??

zoya: ji haan... (smiles)

asad: theek hai phir(turns and faces the other side)

zoya: allah miya ye toh sach main gussa hogaye...(thinks)

zoya hugs asad from behind, asad smiles at this gesture and turns and hugs her tight,...

zoya: mr khan...

asad: hmm...

zoya: phuphi aur najma kitna tensed hai... mujhe lagta hai unhe toh sab kuch batana hoga ki ye sab drama hai... im feeling guilty mr khan...

asad: nahi zoya... we cant take risks... agar tanvee ko thoda bhi shak hagaya... poora phan fail ho jayega...

zoya: aur mr khan... aap muje zoya nahi bulayenge... i mean sab ke saamne... thode din ke liye main ms faruki hongi... sirf sab ke saamne...

asad: haan aur main ASAD... jab sirf hum dono hai!!

zoya: haan?? (confused)

asad: call me asad...

zoya: okay...(shying)

asad: now!!

zoya: yes mr asad ahmed khan!! urf akdu..

asad: zoyaaa,,,,???? ASAD!!!

zoya: asad... khush!!

asad: nahi... phir se...

zoya: (shying) asad...

both get lost in each other... they sit in the room for sometime and later asad goes off to his room...while zoya rests for some time...

end of part 3!! hope you guys liked it and please... do comment... i want to read your views...😊
thanks for reading!!
Part 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87992460

Edited by zoyaaakhan - 12 years ago

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Niharikapriya10

@Niharikapriya10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

res..ll unres after a while😃

unres

its just awesome❤️

the way u r leading the story... fab👏

continue n pm me😃

Edited by niharikapriya1 - 12 years ago

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

RES

Mashallah! Sach mein Asad chupa rastam nikla! Kya acting ki! hahaha Aww they're so cute! Continue soon! Waiting anxiously for Zoya to tell him she loves him.

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Read all 3 parts in a go...

Damn.. I just returned from a break and such an awesome story!!! ❤️

Waiting for the next!

Please keep PMing me as usual! :)

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

I loved it! Looking forward to cute AsYa romantic moments.

BTW, you mentioned Zoya got partial pneumonia ( toh dr shetty ne kaha ki inhe partial pnemonia hua hai.). Did you mean amnesia?