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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi All Wonderful people,

How are you guys? I hope everyone is enjoying the life with little salt and much sugar of various feeling..If not, then forget about all worries and start celebrating every moment of it.."aakhir kya pata, Kaal Ho Na Ho"😊.

Today, I am so happy because I am starting this second thread of my first ever story on my all time favorite couple, the magical TaaRey❤️. When I started writing this, I knew very less people over here, but today, I am thankful to this story, I have got many true friends who always supported me no matter how boring I am😳. So, from this side, this story is like my kid😳😆

Achha now, who I am (aab tak toh jaan hi liya😃). But those, who don't know me, I would like to give my self introduction first. My name is Debu,B.Com, MBA in finance and I am a big TaaRey fan(silly of me, of course you know it😳). I am a job holder and my passion is for reading and writing as well.

Now, what's with this FF??All who read my work know very well that this is an entirely different plot from the drama Dill-Dosti-Dance which we get to watch on TV har roz. Here, Rey is a gray shaded character who is a business tycoon but an arrogant, stubborn, egoistic person and most importantly he is having a dark past. On the contrary, Taani is sober, middle class girl still have strong will power and a great urge to do well for all including her family.

So, this is passionate love story - dark one. Now, many of you perhaps don't know the meaning of the work "Dark". In any dark story, one of the protagonist (here, Rey) suffers from lots of pain and in this process he/she hurts the other protagonist/partner (here, Taani). Though, he/she loves the other person so deeply, still he/she also shows entire anger,frustration on her/him. Thus, THLH is a dark one. And one of the other aspect of THLH is that it is for matured age group at certain places due to the language or situation shown in the story because this is a story of love-lust-passion etc.So, person below that age group can read it at their own risk (I think, D3 viewers are mentally matured enough😉). Remember, this is a fiction work, so touch with reality is very rare.

Now most important for any Writer, I always encourage to be an active reader (as I also follow the same rule personally😊). As this is a different story (though every writer thinks the same😛😳), and has reached the most complex part of the story, it takes two-three hours to update one chapter. So, please please do LIKE and COMMENT too, whoever are liking it. Those readers will get my regular PMs whose Comments I will find here. So, it's not only important to be in my friend list but also be an active reader...

Here is something for all of you (readers, non readers and silent readers too😉),because I am so happy today...🥳

The sweets called Rasogolla, a famous Bengali sweet for all of my sweetest readers specially from my side

Thank You for all your love, support, appreciation, it helps me to grow in every where, without whom I can't even move one step, without whom I can't give words to my imagination, without whom this story can't complete one thread...

"Once
God wrote a story
that shook the heaven to the very core.
Love was the only language used;
You and I were the only characters."

This beautiful VM is made by Superb Talented Girl, my Friend Sadaf. I am Thankful from my heart
pls leave your comment

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

"Thank You" is a small word for showing my gratification towards "You".🤗 Yes, You are one of the among those readers without whom this story can't be at this stage. The small plant which I seeded few months before, has now become a large tree and this is all because of you You are always with me in every ups and downs of my life. Sometimes, I felt so happy by seeing Likes and reading Comments, I have shared with you to double my happiness. Sometimes, I felt low, sad for getting less response, you motivated me, supported me to continue writing this story. You are the person who started reading this FF and eventually become my best buddy.

"You are the most beautiful flower of the garden of my friendship, remain the same forever"

Thanks to all for your valuable times which you have spend in reading this, Thanks all for the comments you made here, Thanks all for being there with me always like a true reader/friend/guide. Keep loving ME and THLH like this.😊

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thread One

My Acknowledgement - Above Post

Story So Far - Below Post

Chapter 17 : Page 10 : She is most Special

Chapter 18 : Page 20 : Mujhse Dosti Karoge?

Chapter 19(A) : Page 29 : Happy Birthday To You

Feedback : Page 36 : Few Questions

Chapter 19 (B) : Page 43 : Happy Birthday To You

Chapter 20 : Page 54 : Tera Hone Laga Hoo

Chapter 21 : Page 64 : When Taani meets Vaishnabi

Chapter 22 : Page 74 : Taani wants Something from Rey

Chapter 23 : Page 85 : I Trust Him!!!

Chapter 24 : Page 93 : Realization of LOVE

Chapter 25 : Page 104 : Tu Bas De De Mera Sath

Chapter 26 : Page 113 : Taani Chali Maayka

Chapter 27 : Page 122 : Rey's Starry Gift in a Past Dark Night

Chapter 28 : Page 132 : Past Becomes Cleared

Chapter 29 : Page 138 : Diwaali Ki Raat, Kayamaat Ki Raat

(FINAL THREAD) THREAD THREE

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-Characters List-

1. Reyaansh Singhania - 25 years old business tycoon

2. Taani Sekhawat - 22 years old girl

3. Shivam Rajpoot - 23 years old established business man

4. Vaishnabi Rajpoot - Rey, Rinni and Shivam's mother and mid fifty lady

5. Gayetri Singhania - Rey's grand mother

6. Rinni Singhania - Rey's elder sister of 30 years

7. Simmi Singhania - Rey's cousin sister age of 19 (uncle's daughter)

8. Piyu - Taani's sister, a teenage girl

9. Khan Chacha - oldest servant of Singhania Mansion

10. Aasi - Reyaansh's friend and a world famous model

11. Aman Suxsena- Reyaan's personal executive

12. Manorama Chachi - Rey's aunty and Simmi's mother

Others are Taani's elder brother Swayam, Reyaash's father Rajeev Singhania, Mami and Mama ji with their two daughters (kids), Taani-Swayam & Piyu's Grand Maa, Bishakha, Dr Desai etc

Note: characters are to be added and removed as per requirement

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

She is simple yet beautiful, middle class yet rich at heart. But he is arrogant, rude and a complex man with lots of negativity. She lived for her family, but he lived without his family. Taani, the female protagonist of this FF, found herself in a jobless situation in one fine morning. But, somehow, she managed to get a job in a respectable position in Shivam's company , the main competitor of Rey and his group, with the help of her friend Bishakha. Rey is a business tycoon who thought girl as his toys of orgasm. Rey and Taani's first meeting was not in a favorable position. Taani taught some lessons to Rey when his car could damage a roadside vegetable shop. That was the time when Taani wanted to learn him some manners to handle properly human being.

Taani came to know that her unmarried friend Bishakha got pregnant with Rey's child. She threatened Rey to put behind the bar for this. Rey landed with an unpleasant and dirty offer for Taani and got a slap from her, in response. Rey decided to take the revenge of it, as no one had dared to do this fault. After that Rey missed some important deals and prestigious clients in his professional front due to Taani's intelligent presentation and efficient client handling capability.

After that came the night (kayamat ki raat) when both of then again met in a rainy night when coming back from the conference. Rey rescued Taani from the goons and helped her to reach her home safely, when her car broke down in the middle of the way. They came closer for the first time - the nature and the circumstance contributed as one of the main catalyst. But some unknown person captured the entire event and circulated it in the e-market as MMS which was a small video representation of Taani and Reyaansh's affair. Taani's family blamed her for all of the mess, Shivam accused her and as a result, she lost this job too.

Ten Rey came with an open offer. He told her to enter into a "fair deal". He proposed her for marriage but with a signature in a blank divorce paper and offered her a good post at his office for the rest of her life. Taani had no other left with her, she accepted it. And finally, they got married. On the day of marriage, Taani came to know that the entire MMS issue was created by none other than Mr Reyaansh Singhania, who always want to win a deal, Taani in this case.

When Taani came to Singhania mansion, no one bothered to welcome her with the rituals. Both of them spend their first night at different places and he left her on the very next morning. Rey's granny informed Taani that Rey was not that rude before and it was only because he was having a dark past which had turned him a emotional less creature.

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Author's Note - So, this is the synopsis of this FF so far. Now, you will want to ask me if Rey ever starts loving Taani. My answer is of course yes, he has a soft heart, abhi heereko tarash na baaki hai. But, please be patience, try to enjoy their roller coaster ride of conjugal life. The next question may come, what is Rey's past. This is something so important by that Rey is still deeply influenced, he can't deny it, still can't accept it too. So, let's get ready to land into the TaaRey land with me...

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radhika

@radhu-taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

me first

2nd thread party party 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

yepieee big hugs to u 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

all the best

update

hearty wishes to u sweet heart

u know this my 2nd edit i made it for u ppl(i have told u b4)... i jst wanna to share it in ur page 😛 😃

enjy ur 2nd thread 😃 😃

i'm addicted to ur wonderful writing...

always keep smiling 😃 😃

love ya my sweet heart

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

n ya need some taarey romance also

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all...I am really very SORRY for taking such a long time to unres

i hope you are not angry with me

now coming to the point without any adieu!!!

I am really happy as this is one of my fav TR stories 😃

It pakka deserved to have more than one thread. I won't wish this ff to have many more threads as i know your stories are very well planned and you do not extend them just for the sake of it (i really like this quality of your's 👍🏼) but haan i wish at least hat-rick complete ho, and i am sure i'll get to comment on THLH 3 and that too soon because the 2nd thread gets completed in a much less time as compared to the 1st thread 😉

you asked me Why I like this story?

the answer is I don't like this story

Coz I LOVE IT 😃

R.E.A.S.O.N.S:

the first reason is YOU ...yes you Miss. Debu

I ❤️ your writing style, your writing is meaningful and thought-provoking for me.

Your writing clearly tells how much effort you put in to write the stories for us. This place is very tempting...it makes you wanna write yourself and a lot of people fall for it but you don't write just for the sake of it, you are talented, you were meant to write, you have perfectly etched characters, your stories are written beautifully and i'd like to mention one more important quality of your's...i have never seen inconsistency in your writing, your stories are well-planned and organised,i can very well connect to all your stories as they have a pinch of reality in them, and also you are not one of those writers who make the readers beg them for updates, despite being a job holder, you update all your stories in a reasonable amount of time...So in short

I& This Place is lucky to have a writer like you 😃

& the second reason Why I loveTHLH is its Story & Story-telling

well after reading 400-500 stories in this FanFiction forum i won't say that this concept is entirely new to me, but still this story very different from the rest...you have added little things here and there giving it a touch of reality, as mentioned earlier your writing is meaningful, in the starting the concept seemed a bit common but as the story unfolded before my eyes i have realized that this story despite having a common concept stands apart in a league of its own, the way you have executed this story is mind-blowing, the way you have carried the suspense all along increasing the curiosity andinterest of the readers with each passing update is commendable. And i also love this story because its not rushed (i can't thank you enough for this 🤗) The pace of this story is perfect for me. Its making this story all the more meaningful and unique. Till now you have revealed only one secret is this ff...that MMS wala secret, that was one mind-boggling twist, it added a lot of flavor to this story. I am sure the other revelation will also justify this story perfectly...after all you are the one writing it Debu 😉

I feel till now the story has reached "Intermission" So i am super excited for the journey of the second half...Lets see what twists and turns await us in the married life of Taani & Rey and how they slowly and gradually become TaaRey in a complete sense with the fulfillment of 7 vows of marriage 😊

in the end i just wanna say I ❤️ YOU DEBU & THLH 🤗

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samiha

@samiha_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

he he he finaly mai apni valuable comment unres karne a hi gayee
1st of all i want to wish myself
Congratulations Graphic #47

as teri hajaro mood swings , ff continue nehi karungi wala dhamki & uski bad mera tujhe samjhana , meri emotional blackmail & agar usse bhi kam nehi chala to all tht stupid stuffs k bad finally hum 2nd thread pe pohch hi gayee😃 so pehla congrts to mujhe hi jata hai...😆
bas bas ab itne gusse se mat dekh tera bhi kuch credit hai as tu stry ko likh rahi hai so mai tera credit khane nehi wali hu...😡
ye le ye tere liye
Congratulations Graphic #23

waise hi puri tym vau kha k hi tera pet vara hua hota hai so maine soacha cake ko mere liye hi chor deti hu...😉😉😉
ab tune treat pe meri fav rosogolla de hi diya hai so misti ki taraf se bhi meri nephew ki 2nd thread start hone k khusi me tere liye kuch hai...😉😉😉 so here u go

sare akele akele mat khana kuch mere liye bhi bacha k rakh samjhi...😡

bara wala mera hai & chotu wala tera...😆

beautiful hai na i knw so red 1 is 4 u & baki aur kisk liye mere liye yaar...😳

ok nw on a serious note just wanted 2 say

Be Yourself