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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.



1st of all the chocolate...yuuummmyyy😳..i just ended it and share bhi nahi kiya😳
Haah ..okay nevermind .. Actually you deserved it 👍🏼

This is a great treat to read your comment Aarpi, I just felt so so happy and THANK YOU so very much sweetheart for it and tight wala hug to you for it🤗🤗
It's all your hard work which leads me to comment ,which automatically becomes long 😆😆
gossip karna na girls ki birth right hai ji, uhn dono kare bhi toh kya kare😉😆😆
Haan jee zaroor , our birth right 😆
yea definitely there are some dark secrets which will be revealed soon for sure😉😃
Would be eagerly waiting for those secrets to be revealed.
PS: I love the monkey emos
I love them too .. they are just too cute 😳
PPS: I love you😳
I love you too 😳


Okay now , my special request , I want a taarey scene please ..
If my request makes the story a bit rushed then please don;t consider it .
One of the reason to love this story is that it is not being dragged or rushed , it is just flowing naturally , beautifully.
So please DON'T consider my request if it makes the story rushed .😳



OMG..I toh already told you that you understand every complexities of a relationship so well, and actually does it😳 so Thank You👍🏼
Your req (and others too), is very precious to me, and trust me, I need only 2-3 updates more. After that Rey will come closer to Taani (physically - as this is a matured love story and story of love and lust too, you will find it which is unavoidable and mentally too - by keeping the other vows of marriage)..This is gonna to be a emo pack update for sure coz this will be followed by ecret revelation..
waise I will update the next part today, and One Positive step will be there in conjugal life..you will get to see more TR scenes, but the normal one, but the passionate one will come once the partial secrets are known to All (sply Taani)😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Dii Wow !! That Chapter was a Nice introductory to the Family ! Chachi and Simmi sound Quite Shady but Rinni's Story is Sad, Paralyzed 😭 ... So that She is Rinni ... PreCap Sounds Interesting !



Thanks Neha, this is an amazing comment🤗
I love ya loads❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -3raser-

Debs! I already said this but once again a hearty congo on the new thread! 🤗
Now coming to the update...damn you man! For leaving me anxious each time 😡😆
The beginning had an air of mystery according to me. We got to know Rey's younger sister, Simmi, who like in the show has a little bit of tension with Taani. However, from the conversation I feel that his Chachi isn't too bad...just has her reservations. You know, just like Manorama.

Other than that I would love to know Rey's past completely but I know you will take your dear time so I'm not going to ponder much on that. BUT BUT but...the best part of this update was the beautifully worded description on the different backgrounds both belong to. I found that to be the BEST part of this update. The way you described Rey's house was apt.

And wow! You also got Rinni in here? In the future I hope we somehow get to see the whole gang...that would be way more fun! (I think I'm dreaming too much...forget it's a dark ff)
Anyway...really love that Taani is taking care of Rinni...maybe Rey will see that and feel a bit relieved though I don't trust you...you can make him mad too.

The Precap!!!!

Awesome update...like always 😉!



Thanks Vishi, this is such a beautiful comment to read, 🤗

Kya kare, still living with IPKKND, but definitely would try to give her character lil twists😉😆
you actually caught perfect about Simmi, but who knows she can also help Taani to come closer to him😳😊
Thanks for liking this from this update..and it's a treat to hear such good things from a brilliant writer like you!!!😳🤗
Lastly, you are right again, I am taking their names, LOL, will use the guy's name too so soon😉😆..and yea, I can mad Rey mad too😉😆..kya kare after all he is my most fav character in this story😛

PS: busy lagte ho, tym mile toh scrap kariyo😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cresc6129

Diii wow!!!!! that was a grt start👏... so rini is very important for rey...

But dii aapko nahi lagtha aap muje confuse kar rahe ho?... Rey ke ghar mein sab log iss tarah kyun behave karthe hain?????? Precap !!!!!! seems interesting...



Am I making you more confused???😳 sowwyyy yaar Cu😳
par uske liye stay connected with this update nah😉😆
Love you behena🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: patie

Congo on second thread debs 🤗 i know i am damn late sry ws held up with some work 🤢



Thanks Yaar Annie🤗
theek hai koi baat nahi, late than never😳😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

Yaar you are driving me crazy...awesome update...this plot made me remember ARNAV AND ANJALI...And I was smiling like hell...

They are gonna keep up their second vow...And positive track...
WOW!!!
Excited!!!😊



Thanks Nits..and ha ha ha..let's see if I can make it different or not😉😆😆
This is a superb comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome update
secrets r revealing...
rinni is most important in reys life
update soon



@bold - many more to come😉
This gonna be a full roller coster ride..stay connected😉😆
Waise thanks🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 18 : Mujhse Dosti Karoge?

"what the f**king hell man!!!! How is Di now? and Why didn't you just inform me about this mess, Khan Chacha?" Rey asks Khan after keeping his first step into the house. The gatekeeper has already informed him everything since morning. He is anxious, annoyed and tired at the same time.

"Rey Baba, we have tried a lot to reach you, but your phone was switched off, so we could not inform you" Khanc tries to explains his situation but without effect.

"Please don't shout, she is resting now!!" a firm female voice informs him in an orderly manner. Rey gets surprised and turns back, "Dr Desai is treating her now. Don't worry, she will be alright soon!" Taani says

"You just stay out of here!!!" he ignores her presence and rushes to Rinni's room when he sees that Dr Desai comes out with Manorama. "Mr Singhania, she is much better now" the doctor assures him. "I have given her a sleeping injection. She needs to calm down her nerves. You know this panic attack often caused due to the anxiety and frustration disorder. Try to make her feel safe and secured, she needs your love and attention more than any medicine"

"Thank You Dr Desai, I will be careful from next time. But why
this happened suddenly?"

"Mr Singhania, you know her condition better nah, this can happen without alerting you before. And I am thankful to your wife, she has called me at the right time. From her only, I came to know that your house physician who is treating Rinni now, is out of town now. I told her over the phone to give a medicine so that we could control the emergency situation until I come here. Don't worry, she will be normal again" Dr Desai says it and leaves the house after taking his fees.

Rey goes to see his sister, Rinni. She is sleeping peacefully. It seems that no one can bother her for anything, billkull jheel ki taraah santh - without knowing anything about external sorrow, hate, pain,happiness anything. Rey places a kiss on her forehead, " Di, why you do so?? please aapne saare dard, saare aansu mujhe de do. Please recover soon, I am missing you"

Taani comes with the tray of juice and medicines, but she restricts herself on the edge of the room. She doesn't want to interfere this most beautiful relationship now, she doesn't know if Reyaansh Singhania knows to cry or not, but his voice definitely is trembling in emotion or moisture!!!

-three days later in the night-

"Sorry and Thank You!" she hears this suddenly after entering into bed room and her eyes become big and wide by receiving those two most unexpected words from her husband. It makes her mum for a moment, actually it is quite obvious at this moment !!! After all she can expects these from anyone but certainly not from his husband.

"Was it for me?" she wants to confirm it again

"Of course yes, I don't see anyone else other than you here" he now feels irritated. He hardly uses these words in his practical life, but when he is saying those "Thank You" and "Sorry" to that girl and she is cautiously making him feel embarrassed, it makes him annoyed.

"May I know why suddenly wind starts blowing from the opposite direction" Taani asks him with a frown face

"Strange these women!!! I simply told her sorry and thank you for my misbehavior and see her response. I will never understand them in my entire life and specially this girl, Taani..uuurrghhh" he thinks but controls his anger. After all he is in a good mood today as her Di has answered him positively by nodding her head.

" I must not have yelled at you, you understand nah what I am trying to say...about that day incident. And Thank You for calling Dr Desai for Di. She is much better now" he explains with a bit hesitation

"I wont let you go by one Sorry only, I will punish you for sure" Taani replies with a smirked.If this would have been any other day, Rey could have replied her back in his own manner, but today Rey is
indeed very happy today, so he understands that Taani is trying to tease him. " So, you want to punish me?"

Taani sits on the bed and switches on the television set. "Aapko nah mujh se friendship karni hogi. Can we be friends? waise, I have made my best friend here already and you know she listens all my gossips, nagging without any complain. She is my sweetheart"

Rey tries to understand Taani's expression, but can't as she is very much busy in watching Tom and Jerry on Cartoon Network. How can she be so normal, he is astonished. He knows that Taani is talking about Rinni Di. She is really taking care of her sister for the maximum hours of a day, as he remains busy with office works.

"Hummm.."he replies back

"What does it mean by Hummm? Is it Yes or No? And you can also enjoy Tom and Jerry with me properly, okay, main nah kaatti nahi hoo!"

"It means Okay, I am ready"

"That's like a good boy!!! so mujhese dosti karoge?" she extends her hand for shaking it. "Khadoos kahika! theek tarah se haasna bhi nahi sakta. He is saying like cracking any deal", she thinks but keeps giving her cute smile so that Rey can't read her mind

"Nautanki Company!! Girls really know how to play with emotions" Rey thinks but says, "Reyaansh Singhania is now friend of Taani from today." he smiles, "And yes I used to love watching Tom and Jerry in schools, but not now. I love only Action Movies, nothing else" he clears himself

"But I like romantic movies and fairy tales. You know, in my childhood days I used to believe one day my Prince Charming would come riding in white horse and would marry me" she pauses for a while. Then after she herself breaks the silence "And there is no age limit of enjoying Tom and Jerry, Micky Mouse, Donald Duck and of course Cinderella and Rapunzel's story."

" You must have gone mad with those weird love stories and its some imaginary, stupid characters. All Love Stories are boring, illogical with high emotional drama, disgusting! I just can't stand those. How those film makers can make a movie with a hero running through a mustard field. ..Arree sarsson ke khet bhi koi romance karne ka place hai kya!!!"

"Mr Singhania, you can call me mad or anything. But please don't say stupid to my favorite love stories..."


Milke bhi, hum na mile, tum se na jaane kyun. meelon ke, hai faasle, tum se na jaane kyun. anjaane, hai silsile, tum se na jaane kyun. sapne hai, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo ooo..

Nigahon mein dekho meri, jo hai bas gayaaa..
Woh hai milta tumse hubahuu..
Ooo, jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajaaa..
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo...
Tum paas ho ke bhi, tum aas ho ke bhiii, ehsaas ho kee bhi, apne nahi...


This is a beautiful night. Everyone falls asleep except two separate individual who have just made their first step together, perhaps a little one still holding each others hand in sharing their exciting life stories. This is indeed a wonderful night with small small sharing of likings and disliking. They have fought on some silly topics like Action Movie versus Romantic Sagas. Again they have rolled in laughter too on some stupid incidents how Tom can make Jerry fool or vice verse. Days are passing normally except they now don't share that bitter experience of relationship. Few days later the granny has come to tell them something.


Pre Cap - Taani goes to meet her family and her grand mom - she discovers Piyu with someone - Taani finds out a first clue about Rey's dark past what makes her little worried.

*****

W/N - So, at last end of all anxiety, Taani and Reyaansh are now friends, Rey said Sorry and Thank You even, but look at the days he has taken. After 2-3 updates they will come a bit closer by God's grace (mentally and physically too😉)..Guys, please do Like and Comment, these are much needed. Because these are my source of inspiration. Most probably you will be getting updates on weekend basis from now a days. I want to end it soonish w/o dragging it more, but few twists and turns are yet to come. Next update will focus on partial dark fact of Reyaan'sh life, Piyu & Simmi will be playing a smaller role in helping TR to be together, but wont say if -vely or +vely😉. PR are yet to be done.

PS: The title of this FF taken from the movie "Ajaab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani" of Ranbeer Kapoor and Katrina Kaif. I will use other songs from this movie too with the sequence.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ka1JNhprlag[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipppieee!!!!!!!
me first
i think u hadnot pm anybody yet
but i got it🥳
coming to the update
when i read the title i thought that
taani and rinni r gng to be friends😊
but
aapne to kuch aur hi kr diya😆
rey and taani= friends very very very both surprising😊 and shocking😕
di
rey ne sach much sorry bola hai😲
mujhe abhi bhi is baat pr trust nahi hai😆
but
bad rey starting mai usne taani ko ignore kiya😡
but happy to knw that he luves rinni so much😊
and this line

That's like a good boy!!! so mujhese dosti karoge?" she extends her hand for shaking it. "Khadoos kahika! theek tarah se haasna bhi nahi janta. He is saying like like cracking any deal", she thinks but keeps giving her cute smile so that Rey can't understand any of her reaction

🤣 agar rey ko pta chal gaya to taani is definitely gone
and seriously out of all the things TOM AND JERRY
🤣
vaise i also like cartoons but...🤣
and this line 😡

" You must have gone mad with those weird love stories and its some imaginary, stupid characters. All Love Stories are boring, illogical with high emotional drama, disgusting. I just can't stand those. How those film makers can make a movie with a hero running through a mustard field. ..Arree sarsson ka khet bhi koi romance karne ka place hai kya!!!"


di aap na taarey ka romance buffaloes ke bich krana phir rey ko pta chalega romance kya hota hai😆🤣 (di sachme mat kra dena)


most imp. thing
taarey were talking about movies and cartoons whole night
so CUTE😳
and the precap
was little scary
what is piyu upto???
and what's about rey???
khi uske parents se related kuch hai...kya ????
Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res unres...
😲😲😲
i never thought that i l ever gve such a comment to ur ff update...
it ws so cute...
rey n cute, how can it b possible?
am i dreaming?
i really need sm tym nw...
thank u so much for ths update...
i ws smiling lyk an idiot thrgh out reading...
the rey who i hated d most made me smile today...
Edited by vijichandran - 12 years ago

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