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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

You are an Outstanding writer di
I really love your writing style..
This story is really different from the others..
A very unique concept...
precap is awesome di
The Unique concept along with your writing style is keeping me attached to this amazing story of yours..
Really Really loved it...

update asap



That is a really beautiful comment Apu🤗
All the best for your exam👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

i thought as you call me Ms Intelligent...i should top in this exam 😆, and for topping a student needs to prepare thoroughly...so following that rule, i have read the whole story i.e. 19 chaps and my analysis wale replies after every chap all over again so that took time... And TaDaa...by re-reading (A/N - Hats Off to you for these two👏👏)i have solved almost all the mysteries of this ff, you said i was holding the right nerve but now i have cut that nerve (A/N - now khatre ki ghanti for me😉😆, you can loose your interesting from reading this story😛)

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?
well i feel this is one of the best ff's (A/N - I am honored, I don't need anything now, feeling really very happy that you find it really worthy..amazing!😳!) This is one of the those ff which brings a 100watt smile (A/N - and your comment always brings that smile on my face too😃😃😃) on my face whenever i see a new update. Coming to the characters...Rey and Taani have been characterized as total opposite characters, but yet they have some similarities...One is the love for their family... opposite is that Taani shows it but Rey doesn't...and similarity is both don't get even half of it in return, and the little bit they get in return is from their grandmothers...the second similarity is Determination, both are very strong and determined, both of them want to win every time and make the situation favorable for them-self...but the opposite is that Taani always does what is right but Rey doesn't care if he is doing the right thing or a wrong thing, he just wants to win at any cost. And I Love both grannies for loving their grandchildren unconditionally, and i feel bad for Rinni, hope she recovers soon. Won't say anything in particular about the other characters...but yes i would like to mention, they are like salt and pepper which make the story spicier...i like to read their small bits in the update

A/N - I am really glad that finally these can be felt/understood by at least one of u ppl. When I started writing this I knew that the concept is little mature for D3follwers as they are mainly teenagers or young guys. But now I think few of u actually understand the protagonist and this story and the motive behind their acts. Still, my work is not finish. I will be successful when everyone will be convinced enough and understand TR. And I wanna sply mention your last part, actually want 2add one more thing, both of them are lonely from heart though are surrounded by the crowd. Now, I have already written in prologue that Taani doesn't knw the feeling of love and Rey doesn't believe in it - so both of them somewhat has built a strong wall around them from this Devine feeling - directly or indirectly, knowingly or unknowingly..

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?
I answered this question for you at the end of last thread(A/N - ookay, agree, I will wait till then😉)
4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?
None...i believe the real villain is not revealed yet. (A/N -you are right Ms Intelligent. I guess from next update u will hate Rey's mom. or u wanna take last update to tell this?😉) I was suspicious about Shivam but now after re-reading i have given a clean-chit to him, because in past he was too young to give any pain to Rey and Rinni, (A/N - you sure toh?😆 let's see, here comes my double twists, oopsss wont say much now😉😆)he may be involved in making Rey-Rinni's life miserable but his involvement was indirect.

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?
i don't have any other option so i'll go with that 'Ghazab Ki Raat' when Taani and Rey came close for the first time on that rainy night. But that was not romance for me because i believe romance happens only after two individuals fall in love with each other..(A/N - the two most wonderful readers of my story have given this same ans and after reading this I have also started thinking ..ohh yea!! you are right. Pehle, I didn't think like this too).

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)
Well i am looking forward to the revelation of all the secrets...i wanna know i am right to what extent. i am also looking forward to see how slowly and gradually Taani and Rey fall in love with each other by fulfilling those 7 vows...and also in my term, how they slowly climb different steps on that ladder leading to love, basically pyar tak pohanchne ki kuch stages hoti (A/N - agree with you!! I also believe the same😳)hain, i wanna see them experience all those stages before realizing that they love each other (A/N - now I am afraid, if your expectation clashes with my imagination or way of thinking it..umm, let's see😳)and then obviously their love confession. Besides this i also want to see how Taani as a true partner helps Rey in overcoming his painful past.
i know i'll get to read all this and it will be beyond my expectations as usual...so really looking forward to read the upcoming updates 😃
A/N - what I can say more than a 😃THANK YOU!!!🤗



Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Edited by Favouriteofall - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
U r amazing as usual debu
Reserved will u res later
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Posted: 12 years ago
Author's Note :

I would like to show my gratitude to all of my readers including silent readers. Writing of this Dark FF is not an easy task for me being the first ever FF of my life. I am particularly thankful to them who helped me to analyze and understand my work by filling those questions.

Now why I have opened this separate post - to clear you something. Remember... In Chapter 17, I have written in Pre-cap that they will be fulfilling their second vow of marriage? Now what is this second vow?

"the groom requests the bride to be his strength so that he can provide security and protect the family with courage. The bride agrees to abide by, while demanding eternal love and undivided attention "

Here I have shown something reverse. Taani protected Rey's Di Rinni, she herself called doctor and took care of Rinni in time of need because she knows that Rey is her husband's sister and thus, like her sister too. And as she can't demand that Divine love (for the time being), she demanded his friendship and attention by this way!!! hope I am clear with it and it's convincing enough😊..When priest reads those vows, both of them, together take the oath applicable for both families too.

With Love
Debu

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PS: See below for update😉
Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jst hating this vaishnabi character..!!
Can't wait to knw what thiS son and mother have in store for us..!!
Loved the way taani celebrated rinni b'day..!!
And wnt to see more of taarey..!!
Very very well written di..!!
Eagerly waiting for the nxt uPdate..!!
Edited by dildostidance09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res -.- lemme read it first 😆
okay , yes , this was really needed , as I was a bit confused about it too but then thought that you might have postponed it 😆
And what update it coming ? *refreshes the page*😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
res😆
unres😳
Chapter 20: Tera Hone Laga Hoo
(for 15+ readers)😲😲
(in mind)but mai toh is year Dec. mai 15 ki hoyungi😭
nw to u: di, maine aapko btaya tha na ki mai 16 ki hu
so, i'm gng 2 read, so...again
res/unres
"A kiss may ruin a human life." -Oscar Wilde
but iska is update se kya relation
aap taarey ke saath kya krne vaale ho😭
tatally confused😕 nw coming to the update
ohhh...😭😭
rey's past is so harsh 😭
nd granny's words were so sady😭 sady😭
but i don't think vaishnabi itni buri hogi😊
afterall agar vo buri hoti toh rey aur rinni ke close aati hi kyu
uski marriage ho gyi jo ki vo chahti thi toh use un dono se kya kaam
so, i thought ki uske decision ka bhi koi reason hoga
aap zaroor koi twist daaloge😉
but its totally my p.o.v.😊😊
nw coming to the main purpose
rey sudhar rha hai😳
firse taani ko sorry bol hi diya aur apni mistake bhi maan li😃😃
ummm...return gift😉
thik hai krayo krayo jitna wait krana hai kra lo😭😭😡

"You are late. Sorry, wo mujhe bhuk laga tha, I have started eating." Reyaansh says by seeing Taani.

but rey ne taani ke saath pehle kabhi dinner kiya hi nahi aur na hi esa koi promise kiya toh vo sorry kyu bol rha hai????😕
and after that😳
kuch bhi comment krne ki jarurat nahi hai😳😳
samazdaar ko ishara kafi hota hai😳😉😆
Precap - One month leap, Taani meets Vaishnabi. They keeps their sixth vow
together.
Ohk...accha precap hai but inki marriage ko already 3 months hoge and ab ek aur month means 6 months complete hone mai only 2 months reh gye😕
but inhe sirf 2 months mai love kaise hoga. Inn lazy lovers ki toh kiss hi 3 months baad huyi hai😆😆 toh love 2 months mai kese hoga??nd 1 more que. pehle realize kise hoga abt their feelings??😳😳

aapne humse 10 que. puche toh. aapko bhi toh return gift milna chahiye so...jaldi jaldi sb que. ka ans. do😳😳😆
Edited by wow-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
phirse 2nd place😆😆😆
vl read after iftari...😉😉😉
Edited by samiha_taarey - 12 years ago

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