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samiha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

hav unresd my comment at page 30...
& finally THLH pe aur koi res nehi hai...
nw go nd check my comment nd update the nxt part asap varna

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nithi_newlife

@nithi_newlife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

Dark ff's are very difficult to write(acc to me)...Story is really enchanting and yea every update digs the reader's curiosity on the question

OMG!! WHAT NEXT??

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

Fav dialogues:

1."Finally, Reyaansh Singhania get it what he wanted..aaahhh..I love myself so much, well done Reyaansh"<<you must be imagining me as a weird or mad character for loving this line...But still I just love this...coz this perfectly describes his attitude in one line>>

2. if your mom slapped you before, perhaps in childhood, then you only could learn to give respect to woman.<< I believe this thought always...Only a mom can inspire and teach a kid to respect other women in future>>

3. why in this twenty first century, a girl has to go through the fire test what Sita had to do in Ramayan yug, pray for me Granny so that I never give up and leave like a coward!!!" <<I remember quoting this line in my comment too...I always love soaps or stories where female protagonist is shown equal to men. You can even think of me as a er...feminist>>

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

Reyansh, yes I like his wits in getting his revenge fulfilled.

Taani, the way she reciprocated to Rey on their suhaagraat and at the same time decided not to show her anger or disgust to his granny or Rinni. I mean the way she prioritizes people.

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

Taani's family for now. For not supporting her when she needed them the most. And yea its not that I hate them..Its because I don't have any other choice right now.

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

Its a dark ff and the prologue caught my attention. that is how I started this story frankly. then the moment I came to know that Rey was the one who fwded the MMS, my curiosity grew. i wanted to know how far Rey can go... And yea I badly fell for the story at this point. Debu I even remember telling you once tat I started thinking abt it always...In short if you ask me to continue the story aft marriage in my version or how I imagined...I would surely do it!!!😉

<<just kidding...I just love the way the story is going>>

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

the coffee scene of course...my fav too!!

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Romantic...nothing for me...coz you call it romance only when its filled with love which is yet to take place in the story

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Taani's family cursing her after the MMS.

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Taani asking Rey to name the building on Swayam's name.

Taani's POV

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

Dark ff ka asli swaad Aggressiveness ke bina kaise aayega boss??😉

Expecting AGGRESSIVE ROMANCE between Taarey.

Debu,

All these answers or opinions are just mine. Sorry if it was against your thought or values...It was just my way of viewing the story..Sorry if by mistake I had offended you or any other buddy. 😊😊

Love Nithi

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Ishani

@.StarDust.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: crazy2012
First Debu... I am really means really sorry...Aaj kal..Hamari baat bhi nahi hoti hain... Kya karoo.. I am hell busy.. So sorry.. Ok.. Me apna Bhashan yeh questions ke ans dene baad continue karti hun! 😆😆

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?
First of all, when I read the character sketch and then the chapters.. I found characters unique.. I mean..It's really different.. and the attitude of both main characters.. It was really treat to imagine...

About story,
I get little idea about the twists and all.. But, seriously.. When I read this FF is dark one..(That Time, I didn't know the meaning of it..But, still.. I am not that much dumb yarr..😆)I thought to read.. Due to my exams, I could only read your introduction of FF.. After my exams, I visited this story and read this in one go.. and I really loved.. each and every chapter was having something which was encouraging me to read more and increasing my excitment.. Yes.. The credit goes to you and your writing too.. No doubt.. But, story is really different.. Istarted reading this story as "TaaRey FF"..I have read and I am reading so many TR stories which are different from D3 original track.. But, some dialogs and behaviour of character had similarity in some cases.. But, this one... I mean.. If this would not be a "TaaRey FF" Still... I would love to read it..😳😳😳

(I know.. It's getting little bit difficult for you to understand..What I am talking.. But, I can't help Debu.. Please Bear with me..😆)
2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?
Well.. This question is little bit difficult... You know.. I love these type of stories..Intense.. Mystery.. Dark Past.. Unknown side of a person.. In short.. I love to read such type of stories.. and This one is like this..

I loved so many scenes.. In this story!
Taani slapped Rey and.. then Rey was feeling ashamed of his did for the first time..Then, Taani- Rey washroom one.. They both bump to each other... Then, Ooty one.. where.. Taani left his car because of his attitude and then.. she stucked with thos yucckkss wale goons.. and TaaRey hug.. Ohh.. Godd.. I loved that.. After that... Marriage one was also nice.. and the suhagraat.. It was unexpected.. I mean... The way Taani answered him.. It was awesome one..
Then, her meet with Nani maa and all.. That was also nice.. The most I loved it.. was Rinni & Taani , Rey & Rinni scene.. It was really... I dun have words for that...
(Actually, I loved all the scenes.. But these are some of it.. which I really really loved it..😆)
Dialogs:
1. Rey: Aap kya janam se hi aisi hai ya fir mujhe dekh kar hi ho jaati hai? you always come to my way and start poking your nose? What's wrong with you?
2. "What?? you need medical treatment Mr Singhania, you are behaving like a psycho, if your mom slapped you before, perhaps in childhood, then you only could learn to give respect to woman. Waise, what else I can expect from a man like you, who can force a girl to get married to fulfill his dirty passion...Bishakha was right, you are born to ruin every woman's life. You don't deserve love at all" Taani sought at him.
3. Rey places a kiss on her forehead, " Di, why you do so?? please aapne saare dard, saare aansu mujhe de do. Please recover soon, I am missing you"

4. "Nautanki Company!! Girls really know how to play with emotions" Rey thinks but says, "Reyaansh Singhania is now friend of Taani from today." he smiles, "And yes I used to love watching Tom and Jerry in schools, but not now. I love only Action Movies, nothing else" he clears himself
5. " You must have gone mad with those weird love stories and its some imaginary, stupid characters. All Love Stories are boring, illogical with high emotional drama, disgusting! I just can't stand those. How those film makers can make a movie with a hero running through a mustard field. ..Arree sarsson ke khet bhi koi romance karne ka place hai kya!!!"
3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?
Of course Reeyansh Singhania.. Dun Think.. I dun like Taani.. I love her! But, Whatver it is.. We compare characters with D3's Reeyansh Singhania.. and This RS is totally different.. :P He has so many phases to show public.. But, inside he is really good person.. In short, he is complicated and overall.. In this entire story his attitude is totally different.. I really love this character.. well.. He is not that much fav. But.. I like his character..

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?
Umm.. Shivam.. well.. I know, still story is not open yet... But, from few chapters and promo and overall, Rey is treating Shivam.. so.. It is clear That he is not good.. even when he was with Taani in some restaurant.. I couldn't recall the scene exactly.. I felt his behaviour weird.. I don't hate him as the truth and past is in the dark.. But.. I dun like him.

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?
I follow this story because of Concept.. I told you before that if it would not be Taarey.. Still.. I would like to read it.. Secondly, Of course.. Writing style.. It's really awesome. Debu. naa... Tympass nhi! 🥱 Yes for TaaRey too! But.. concept and uniqueness are first! 😛

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?
The cartoon one and Mujhse dosti karoge? I mean.. Overall, Rey's expressions and Taani's one.. It was really funny..😆

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?
Till now, as such u didn't give any romantic scene.. You know..☺️.. Chill.. Abhi.. story aage kaha aayi hain.. let the realize the feeling then romance and all..😆
But..One was really hot.. That Night! I am posting the para:
A soft body collides with a masculine chest. Taani holds Rey tightly, she hugs him - this is the hug of feeling safe. The incident still keeps haunting her. Her breathes becomes countless and Rey can actually feel the warmth of the breathes in this heavy rain. Her heavy breasts keeping moving ups and down with the every single movement of taking in and out of the fresh air. It directly touches his hard bare chest which can be easily visible through his drenched white shirt.

Rey has seen many naked female body till today, these were nothing special to him except some human body parts. These hardly could arise his sensual organs. But today , he feels really special when his well trained and well maintained physic makes contact with her extra ordinary gentle feminine body.

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?
Umm.. Taani's marriage and clauses.. And.. Taani's pov on it.. It was not that much depressing.. 😉

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?
Rinni and Taani..When she kissed her forehead...
Rey and Rinni... He was hyper on hearing her condiotion and his care for her! 😳

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)
Well, I dun have any suggestions.. You are doing a great job.. And.. I don't think u need any suggestions as story is going on track...
Feedback: Null! 🤣 Are.. Itna sab likha.. bass ab..😆

I want to read something more interesting.. it is already interesting.. But, whenever you will give emotional or romantic or umm.. serious scene.. try to give it little bit brief.. I know.. More brief.. I am sounding stupid.. But.. I dun know why, chapts are short.. so.. thoda lamba wala updates chaiya..

sorry if i got rude!

Debu.. Tu examiner se kamm nhi hain.. samjhi... itne saare question.. anyway!! Terese baat ho ti hi nhi hain aaj kal.. :'(.. As soon as, I will get free.. I will catch u! Tab tak bhagne ki practise kar... hahaa.. are.. I am gonna catch u na..🤣
Love you! Take care!! <3 🤗

Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: geshiga54
loved bhai behan relationship between Rey and Rinni hope to see more Taarey moments but still kinda miss the old Taani but now i could c a stronger Taani at the same time. i know im confusing but i basically wanna say how nicely u describe n put life into ur story n characters. cant wait for ur next update thank u soo much for the pm!!!!!!!!1

@bold - trust me, I really wanna know about this. What do you mean by Old Taani? Is Taani changed after marriage?? Please share what you are thinking..Pls share with me.

Thanks a lot dear sply for the last portion coz it means a lot to me😳😊

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: paruls
Loved the bond between taani - rinni & rinni-rey. Its really sweet of Taani to think about changing rinni's surroundings. So how much of the conversation did Rey hear?Aww Three of them having breakfast together , was that Rey's way of spending more time with taani and rinni.
And about the tea, Rey seems to like irritating Taani or is basically looking for an excuse to interact with her. 😆😆

Its all right if Taani wants to give this marriage a chance, but hope u don't show her as an abla nari.

About the note you wrote in the end, I think everyone was just surprised and happy because it was rey's first turning point .

Awesome Update !!👏👏

@bold - this is actually the tricky one, i guess, coz I even don't know anything now. Perhaps this can be related with future track, but need to think😉😆😆

yes, they are spending time together - now what his thinking behind it - wither he can't directly offer Taani to have breakfast with him as this can hurt his male ego or he just want to spend time with Rinni, do no hi possible, I better leave the thinking part on you!!!😆😆

@2nd bold - I wanna know something here, don't hesitate pls, upto what extent she can go to not labeled herself as Ablaa Naari..I really want reader's view, what my readers think..pls dnt take this otherwise😳

Thanks You yaar🤗
Thanks so much dear, hope I will justify your expectation. I am also bit scared as ds is my first and (ek laauta) FF and wo bhi dark one😳

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Hash

@-Dreaming...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

di, remember aaj WEDNESDAY hai!!!!

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey
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unres
nehi nehi shocked mat ho ye teri misti hi hai jo itni jaldi unres karne chali ayi hai
bas bas ab aur kitna khusi se nache gi
comment bhi parle yar

A/N - Aaaj main khushi se pagal ho gayee hoo..kya karu, tera comment mill gaya...mera jahan mill gaya😉
Chapter 19 (A) : Happy Birthday To You
par meri bday to jan ko hai
ok ok nw serious...😳😳😳
ab kya kare tu ye ajib ajib sub title dega to mujh masum si jan ka kya kasur!!!😆😆😆
title park mujhe pehle ye laga sayed humare dark personality upppsss humare nehi meri rey ka bday hoga 😉😉😉
phir laga tu kamini itni achi to ho nehi saqti so phir soacha kamse kam taani ka to hoga hi!!!!! koi nehi chalo agar taani ka bday hua phir bhi kuch interesting twist & turns milenge 😳😳😳
bt after reading the update
khoda pahar nikla chuha...
thnk god atleast tune khan chacha ka bday to nehi bola - OMG Khan Chacha's bday celebration🤣🤣, waise no bad!!!😉

phir hui meri pc i mean stry me taani ki pc k entry...😆😆😆
aur kya entry mara yar!!! - teri himmat kaise huyee aapne jiju ko PC bolne ki😡😡😡, aapne sapne ko lagam de😡

"No, wrong, it's Blue and reverse in my case" says Rey from the door.
so my pc lyks pink!!!!😳😳😳 - my comment😡
ab rey shower kark kaunsi shirt pehen k aya ye bhi likhna jaruri tha kya!!!!! ab sare readers meri rey par dore dalenge😡😡😡 - Rey ko merese chhinna mushkil hi nahi na mumkeen hai, so U be aware from my gussa, aur sare readers nahi, sirf U😡😡
ye lo thoda praise kiya nehi phirse tune meri rey ko MR. reyansh singhania bana dia!!!!!!😲😲😲
par i really luvd the way rey called rinni jaan nd his luv & affection fr her was clearly visible in his behaviour...❤️❤️❤️
chalo kahi to the reyansh singhania rey bane...
nw its tym 4 my fav part 😉😉😉
obvio the tea wala part 😆😆😆
he teased taani in such a cute way 😳😳😳

4 this cute & naughty part...

precap sounds damn interesting yar 😲😲😲
so me just cant wait 4 the update as u promised u vl update at Wednesday & luk wednesday is here...
so i want my update asap varna - ❤️❤️ ye kali potka le k monkey is my most fav😳

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Chapter 19 (B) : Happy Birthday To You

Taani's eyes catch a person at the entrance in entirely white Kurta and Payjama, Shivam is walking towards her. She can not move her steps for a while as Shivam is really unexpected here. Taani's eye-brows become close automatically, she keeps looking at him.

"This is our first meeting after your marriage. Ummm...How are you... Taani?" he asks her, looking at her eyes

"Yes, but why you are here?" her surprising question falls on Shivam

"Why not Taani? This is God's place and I think, everyone is allowed to come here" Shivam replies. But what he wanted to say is that he can come this temple as per his wish unlike that Reyaansh mansion what is restricted for special person always. "By the way, you really look good with bindi and mangalsootra"

Taani is wearing a white base saree with red border. Her bright red bindi and sindoor completes her look as a married woman. She gives him an embarrased smiles, "No, I didn't want to mean that. I am little surprised to see you here." She pauses for a moment and continues, " Thank You, Shivam!! My marriage was done under some unfavorable condition..."

"I know it, Taani. I know that Mr Reyaansh Singhania has forcefully done this just to fulfill his wish. Why don't you just leave him. I know that he is treating you like an animal. You should go to the cop to complain against him. I will help you" he gives the unwanted consultation

"What Shivam? You know what are you talking about? Look at me, I am just three months married girl and you are.." her line gets interrupted in the middle. Shivam is becoming aggressive now to convince her. He comes forward towards her to hold her hand.

"No Taani, don't take me wrong, please. I know him, that's why I am telling you. And besides, I love you Taani. Your tears will not be wasted anymore. I will give you each and every happiness in this world what you deserve. I want to marry you." Shivam tells her by taking her right hand in his hand

" Shivam, you are talking about Love, Happiness. Do you ever know the meaning of these? Do you remember how you have terminated me from your company just on the basis of that fake MMS? You did not believe me then though I told you many times." She takes out her hand from his tight grip, "Whom you did not able to Trust, you are claiming that you love her. You don't ever try to come to me. I have no feeling for you, aur nah hi kabhi tha". She clarifies all her points to him with the last line.

"Taani, I know , you are angry on me. But listen to me with..."

"Now That's Enough!!" a firm, manly voice come to break the conversation. Both of them turn their head to look at the man. " Enough Mr Shivam Rajoot. How many times I have to say you to stay away from me and my family" he holds the collar part of Shivam's kurta. They did not notice when he has come there. Actually when it crosses five minutes, in fact fifteen minutes, Rey has come for searching Taani and catches them here. Taani feels happy that Reyaansh counts her in the family, her eye sparks in joy.

"Leave him Babuya, this is the holy place. Please don't fight here for God's sake" a female voice speaks. Now this is the time to become surprise for Taani and Rey together by seeing a lady behind them. She is a middle aged lady in a Golden - Maroon saree. Time can not leave its mark on her shinning fair complexion. A beautiful smile is always crept on her face. But most surprisingly, Taani finds her eyes are quite similar with someone who is known to her very much.

"Aaaggghhh Mrs Vaishnabi Rajpoot, I am just thinking about you.You never leave a single chance to support your greedy son. And my name is Reyaansh for you, you must remember that " Rey tells her in his typical tone what Taani had noticed when she first met with Rey. But today at this point of time, she is standing totally clueless. She doesn't know anything about this lady. So many questions gather to her mind together - Who is She? What is the relation of this lady with Reyaansh? And most importantly how come she knows about Reyaan's pet name if she is the mother of Shivam?

"Bade Bhaiya, please behave yourself. She is your mother" Shivam wants to control the situation. But his line acts as thunder strike on Taani

"You shut up your mouth...Son of a B****Y B***H" Rey answers back him

"Bhaiya, I am just respecting you because of mamma and that doesn't mean you have the right to insult us. Don't take undue advantage of my manner. I warn you" Shivam yells. Vaishnabi pats his shoulder and he controls his anger, "I was always against to come here mamma, but you insisted to wish her, mamma"

Taani tries to understand the entire situation which is happening in front of her eyes just like any old Hindi movie where two brothers unknowing about their blood relation are fighting against each other. The one difference is here no director can stop them by saying "CUT". Reyaansh's face has been turned into tomato red and it can't be understood if it is due to the Sun heat or the reflection of his anger. I guess, this is not enough because the nurse has brought Rinni's wheel chair which adds the remaining specie in the family drama.

"Happy Birthday Beti. Bhagwaan kare, meri umar bhi tujhe laag jaye" Vaishnabi touches the forehead of Rinni who sits with emotionless face without knowing the present situation. Taani's eyes become rolled and she instructs the nurse to wait for them at the parking zone.

"No, we don't need anything from you - neither sympathy nor blessing, Anymore! Just stay away from Di with all of your emotional drama what you have got an expertise. Let's go Taani" Rey holds the extension of the chair to move it

"You are his wife, nah?" Vaishnabi tells Taani by holding her check or asks her - Taani doesn't understand. So prefers to keep mum with a blank glare. "You are beautiful. I can't find a better match than you for my Babuya. After all it's a mother's duty to make her kids happy"

" I am surprised, happy too!! How beautifully you can act in every situation, umm.. as per requirement. Well Done, you deserve an applause from me", Rey starts clapping. These words have forced Rey to stay back."You know what... these lines seems cliche, fake to me from your mouth. Now Mrs Vaishnabi Rajpoot is going to teach me the lessons of Values, Morality and Principles...huuhhh" he smiles. There was not a happiness in it, instead it was a sarcastic smile which he sometimes uses when talking with Taani.

Taani is playing nothing but the role of a silent spectator here. "Taani, will you want to be at home with me or you prefer to come home alone?" he asks. Taani understands that it is not his question rather he orders her. So she obeys the instruction of her husband as a good wife.

"Is she your mother Mr Singhania?" Taani shows her curiosity after coming to the near of their car

"NO" he screams, "She can't be my mother, NEVER" Rey tells her with giving extra importance in the two specific words NO and NEVER

"But, she was claiming herself as your mother and Shivam was also..."

"I treat you as my friend that does not mean you have got all the right to interfere into my personal life" Rey wants to remind her limit, "Taani, I want you to erase this moment from your memory forever and we must not talk about this matter further. This is good for both of us" He goes to the front seat to drive the car.

Taani now realizes her fault (her fault? perhaps!! who knows) . By the effect of that sudden moment and for this beautiful day, she partially forgets what Reyaansh thinks of her. Besides, out of the girl's natural curiosity, she has asked that question. Now Reyaansh's few words bring her back into reality. True, it's difficult to determine the scope of a friend's rights against a wife's right. Still she can't control herself to think about Rey and his mother.

When they come back home, it is a late already. They have taken their food on their way back home because Rinni has to take some urgent medicine before evening. Rey and Taani enter into the hall room and Rey becomes surprised to see the decorated room with the balloons and colorful papers all over.

"What is this? Who has done this?" he asks

"I have done this Mr Singhania. Granny gave me this permission. I want to make this day more special. Just a moment please" Taani goes to kitchen and brings a huge chocolate cake with her.

"Di, please come here" she takes Rinni's chair at the middle of the room, "In our family, we make Kheer every year for the birthday boy or girl. And today is your day Di" . She takes a spoon full of kheer and feds Rinni with her soft hand. "And now, cake cutting time. Everyone, please come here and join me to wish Di on this special occasion"

Rey sees that many small children from "Rinni Orphanage - A Charitable Trust by RS Industries" have come to celebrate the party. The entire family members including their servants except Chacha and Chachi ji who went for the holiday tour are singing together that universal song of Birthday to wish Rinni. Rey becomes happy to see this because though he always do some special worshiping of God on this day, but never thought of celebrating her birthday in this grand way. Why only Rey, no one from this family before. Taani and Rey, both by forgetting all of their bitter memory just happened sometimes before, join together to wish her for her speedy recovery and successful future and make her happy. And Rinni, the birthday girl can feel it of course. She tries to move her hands and legs to let us know her presence. Her faded face is now shinning with happiness.

Taani goes up stairs to granny's room to offer her a piece of cake. Her hand is occupied with the plate but her mind is also not empty. Because she knows that granny is the only person who can answer her all questions which is really important her to know.

"May I come in, Granny?" she asks her permission

"Yeas Beti, of course you can. Thank You for celebrating my Rinni's birthday. You people are enjoying nah. By the way, how was your puja?" she asks the normal question

Taani answers her all good things, asks her about health, talks with her about the daily routine issue. After some times of hesitation, she now finally makes herself ready for the direct question, "Granny, who is Vaishnabi?"

Suddenly the room has turned into a dead room, in Good English we can call it as like Pin Drop Silence. Taani reads the silent questions hidden behind her eyes and tells her temple's incident of Vaishnabi and Shivam in detail. Gayetri remains quiet for sometimes when Taani asks her again, she is becoming impatience with each and every moment passes. "Please don't keep silent, for God's sake. I need to know it and Mr Reyaansh Singhania wont tell me that, EVER" ,she insists by kneeling down to her.

A drop of tears is rolled out from her eyes, "I don't know if I am doing right or wrong by telling you. But I think, you have the right to know it beti, as his better half" she pauses. "He strictly told me to seal it and to loose it forever so that no one can restore it, but today the time has come and I knew it we can't ignore her for so long."

Pre Cap(Promo)

Taani can't understand what she will do now as she doesn't know before that Reyaansh Singhania has some allergy from cheese and chilli flakes. Reyaansh feels suffocated by this constant hiccups. Taani comes closer to him and touches his mouth with her lips. Time stops there forever. Taani rings Shivam in one funny morning and thus, One week passes.

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A/N - Thanks a Lot Guys for your beautiful comments and feedback which were very much needed by Me. So leave your comments about this update, we are very close to the dark past which has already started unfolding. Sorry, I promised you to write that intimate TR scene with this update, but kya kare I has to push into next chapter coz I want to write Rey-Vaishnabi confrontation a big one. TR scenes will be there, trust me, but as per the situation of course. The next update will be on Sunday. I am requesting all of you to visit Page 36 and give your feedback to me. Please let me know if you want bigger update or not. Thanks.

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes...I am so happy today 😃

1st Reason...after stalking the thread for almost an hour, refreshing the page after every 10 secs...i was successful in my mission "First Place" 😃

Secondly i am happy because now i have become eligible for becoming a detective 😆

after all i have cracked all the mysteries in this ff 😉

abhi mera just pehla teer (arrow) nishane pe laga hai...and i am so happy, baqi ke teer nishane pe lagen ge phir to mein 99999th cloud pe pohanch jaun gi 😆

i am so glad you gave those questions and i decided to re-read the story for answering them...because ye saari ki saari mystery maine re-reading se hi solve ki hai

you have given some really nice clues in every update...so thank you for that 😊

ok enough of this...now i'll do my regular analysis in sequence

after the 18th chap...in the precap part you mentioned that Taani will discover Piyu will someone, so i thought outside the temple, Taani will see Piyu with Shivam...but here Shivam was alone

the moment i read that "restriction in Reyaansh Mansion" line...a grin came on my face, because this line told me that what i am thinking is right...Shivam is indeed Rey's younger but step brother!

the way he complimented Taani and all...i thought ok good he is still nice to her

but then what rubbish he started to speak...I love you and all 🤢

Taani gave him the right answer...he doesn't love her because jis se aap pyaar karte hain aap uske liye saari dunya se lar jate hain but that Shivam even took away that job from her just because of some board members..that shows he much he loves her...jhoota kahin ka 😡

don't know what are his intentions...is it that just like his brother even Shivam has this misconception that Rey loves Taani, that's why he wants to take her away from him to take revenge from Rey..God knows what is he upto, but no worries as i am sure he won't succeed!

the best part about this scene was that Rey overheard their conversation, i hope now the Shivam-Taani thing is completely out of his mind 😊

i was right if Taani won't come back in 5 mins he'll come searching for her...glad he has started caring for her 😊

Rey considers Taani as his family now...that made me happy too 😃

and then strikes the atom bomb...which did not harm me at all because the moment i read the intro of a middle-aged woman...i was like here comes Taani's mummy ji, ab to blast hone wala hai so i pulled up my protection and hid myself at a safe place 😆

and i win "World Tour" for guessing it right 😆...Mrs. Vaishnabi Rajpoot is the ex Mrs. Singhania...the mother of Rinni, Reyaansh & Shivam

Rey hates her a lot...that's why he was so sensitive about his mother and behaved aggressively whenever someone mentioned about his mother.

Shivam's outburst was natural because anyone would behave that way if someone abuses your mother so badly

well abhi to Mummy Ji behaved as a nice and caring mother with both Rey and Rinni...she even came to that temple just to wish Rinni a happy birthday

now it is to be seen if she is a real villain or Rey ne usse villain banaya hua hai

Chachi ji said that Rey' father's life was a disaster...so i assume that Vaishnabi took divorce from Rey's dad and then re-married Mr.Rajpoot

now it is to be seen that why she divorced Rey's dad and it is to be seen whether she herself abandoned Rey and Rinni in the past or is it Rey's anger on his mother which has kept these mother-children away from so long!

poor Taani couldn't understand anything...her curiosity is justified

oh so Rey still remembers that she is his friend...perhaps he doesn't understand the meaning of friendship, how to behave with your friend and the right...one person has on his/her friend. Hope he understands all these soon because he desperately needs the help of a true friend and he won't find a better friend than Taani even if he searches the whole world.

Good that Taani did all the preparation for the birthday celebration before hand...she indeed made that day really special for Rinni 👍🏼

hmm the entire family members came to wish Rinni except Chacha-Chachi...we just know about Simmi, who are these other family members? Taani has already met them, why you didn't introduce them to us? That's not fair!!!

So Rey is also happy with all the arrangements...hope he thanks Taani for all this, and this time his thank you should be better than the last time 😆

Hmm so Taani already knows who can answer her queries...good that she has asked Granny without wasting any more time...Taani deserves to know the truth asap!

Glad she didn't ask Rey again...otherwise ghuse mein wo pata nahin kya karta, good she knows that he'll never answer this question for her...this means somewhere she has started to understand his behavior which is a very good progress in their relationship 😊

Lets see how Taani reacts after knowing the truth...what will be her opinion about about all this mess? And how she's gonna deal with this matter?

hmm the precap...i always wanted Taani to take the first step in coming closer physically, glad its happening 😊

Taani ringing Shivam on a funny morning...now that's something strange 🤔

well looking forward to read the next update

btw i wanted to ask one thing...in the precap part of chap 17, you wrote "He starts shouting but...they keep their first step together...keeping the second vow of marriage"

He shouted when he came to know about Rinni's illness

They kept their first step together...when they both became friends and shared with each other their likes and dislikes

But keeping second vow of marriage...as i remember in 2nd vow...the groom asks the bride to be his strength so that he can protect the family..the bride agrees and demand eternal love and undivided attention

i wanna ask ye ho gaya kya??? if yes then when???

One more thing...i checked the first page of this thread, you didn't mention Taani's grandmother in the character list...secondly you have mistakenly written Shivam in place of Swayam as Taani's brother!

and ya sorry for again taking a long time to unres...but this time i am not at fault, i read the update last night only and even wrote my looong reply but when i was writing the second last line...i pressed some wrong button and all my reply got deleted...i got frustrated and i was sleepy too so i closed my lappy, now i have wrote the whole reply again!

Edited by Favouriteofall - 12 years ago