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Posted: 12 years ago



Hey Double Congrats!! For holding the first position and for cracking the mystery. You didn't let me down. It's proved that I(we) can officially call you Ms Intelligent👏👏👏
Thank you thank you 😎
Now, aap itne shiddat se kuch likhe hai mere liye toh mera bhi kuch farz banta hai aapke liye..so this is for you!!! and specially I know how it feels when you write something and tech probs come suddenly
aww...thank you so much for this gift 🤗

@1st bold - you sure?? actually you know when I started writing this FF nah, just wanted to show two clashing personalities with some twists and turns aur pata hi nahi chala when it turned into some Mysterious story😆😆
yes i think so...mera pehla guess to bilkul correct hai, lets see my other guesses are right to what extent!
wo kehte hain na jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai...all these secrets and suspense has made this story all the more interesting 😊

@2nd bold - pls cloud se wapas aa jao nah!!😆
yes i am back as of now...baqi guesses correct hue to phir se cloud pe pohanch jaun gi 😆

@3rd bold - really hats off. THANK YOU. I am satified. Clues, yes i have just written something making a balance with the circumstances. Perhaps it acted as clues.
those clues show that your story is well-planned 👍🏼

@4th bold - PERFECT!!!👍🏼 no harm in telling specially when i will write it in the next chapter, Yes they are step brothers. And yes I have written that Pre cap, but after next update I mentioned something that I had to push that incident a bit later, so that is still yet to come. Sowwy for any confusion. Many times I have to mold this stories to arrange it properly.😳
Step brothers 😃 about the precap...its ok, lets see what twist that scene will bring in this story 😊

@5th bold - ACTUALLY. my objective/intention was to clear the MU between Rey and Taani and this was the first step. Though I have not cleared how much convo he heard, still with the progress of the epi, we will see that Rey will confess his misconception in front of Taani..now my mouth is zipped🤬😆😆
i hope he heard that line of Taani "i have no feelings for you aur na hi kabhi tha"
hmm confession about the misconception...excited to read that 😊

@6th bold- Taani's mummy ji or Rey's mummy ji?😕
arre you don't watch daily shows..us mei heroine calls her mother-in-law as Mummy ji...so Rey ki mom and Taani ki mummy ji 😊

@7th bold - I wanted to indicate all the servants, the small children, Simmi and Granny as the entire family members. There are no other characters in Singhania family. Sowwy if created confusion, I will re read that place again and will modify it😳
i thought like this only...but that entire family members thing me a bit confused that's why i asked that question...don't be sorry in fact thank you..thank you for being there to solve every confusion of your readers 😊

@8th bold - you again somewhat caught the right nerve and that's y i once asked u to be my co writer or to start writing a FF. Trust me this Thanks Giving ceremony is gonna be grand one this time😉😆..now I don't say anything more..but but but..we should never expect Rey to do anything spl for Taani too nah😛,
Grand Thanks Giving Ceremony...now you are making me over excited, i feel like fast-forwarding the time so that Sunday comes asap and i get to read the next update 😉
i know i know...i am not expecting much for that sadu, just a plain thank you but this time his tone should have some warmth...last time ki tarha bluntly thank you na bol de phir se 😆

@9th bold - Glad that you have understood it. taani preferred to give him a space..sometimes we should give it, o/w the relationship becomes suffocated..wat say?
yes this is called "understanding" in a relationship...this "understanding" is a very important ingredient for a long-running relationship
a person like Rey needs space and i am glad Taani is giving him that space!

@10th bold - of course yes. Few reasons, if Rey takes this step, Taani would have thought as his lust not love and it can make this situation even worst. 2ndly, He was tensed and she was worried about him. That was one of the way to support her partner in time of need. The sense of reliability should be shown and felt.
exactly my thoughts...that's why i wanted Taani to take the first step!
i hope after knowing the truth about Rey's past...Taani understands how much love and care Rey needs from his life partner.

@11th bold - now this is a gross Pre cap. Can't say if this is gonna happen in the next chapter or not😳
i am ready to wait for it...the thing that caught my interest was "funny morning"...i would love to know why that morning was funny 😊

Now for the 2nd vow, I need to tell you something. Actually not you, but to all those readers. I am writing here, but will copy paste my comment with the next Author's Note. Yes, you are right abt the vow. But in this case, it can be directly happened nah?? it's not possible at all.

"the groom requests the bride to be his strength so that he can provide security and protect the family with courage. The bride agrees to abide by, while demanding eternal love and undivided attention "


here I have shown something ulta, you know. Here, Taani protected Rey's Di Rinni, she herself called doc and took care of Rinni in time of need. because she knows that Rey is her husband. And as she can't demand that Divine love now, she demanded his friendship and attention by this way!!! hope I am clear with it and it's convincing enough😊..when priest reads those vows, both of them, together take the oath applicable for both families too.
okay okay...yes it can happen this way, in fact you have showed it in a really good way!
thanx for clarifying it to me...yes write it in the A/N...after all the readers should know about your wonderful thinking too 😊

For all the comment, Just Two Words:


For helping me and I have edited the first page😛, So for you


for this i'll say...thank you for liking my comment 😃

and i think you like rasgullas...so in return of those chocolates, here's a bowl full of yummy rasgullas for you 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
Its an awesome update love it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Debu!!!! Congratulations for your second thread..


The first update was awesome...
The title of the chapter really attracted me..
And guess what, I loved the chapter again...
The special person is rey's elder sister..
I felt so bad for her..
And she really seems very close to Rey...
I am sure that I am gonna love this new member a lot..
She really seems to be very special...
And those two other members...
So irritating...
Simply spoilt my mood...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! Is that what I read???
Taani and Rey are friends now...
Someone plz. Splash a bucket of water on me...
Is it for real...
Real or not, I loved it...
Aww.. Taani loves Tom and Jerry..
I too love Tom and Jerry..
I still watch it...
Loved the TaaRey scene so much...
And Rey loves Rinni so much..
I am sure this Guy is gonna fall head over heels for Taani..
The story seems to progress..
I am really very happy...
Thank yo so much for this amazing chapter, Debu..
Really loved it a lot..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Debu!!!A big tight hug to you...🤗
The update was so cute...
I loved it to the core..
Loved how Taani shares a great bond with Rinni..
I hope that Rinni recovers soon..
Would love to see the duo scenes,,
And I majorly loved this cute side of Rey...
I love him as a brother,,
He is so caring and sweet...
The way he rejected the coffee..
I was laughing...
And then, whom did Taani see at the last...
Wanna know that...
FAB update, dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update, Debu...👏
Finally one more secret is gonna be revealed...😛
Loved how Rey got concerned about Taani when she did not return...😳
And That Shivam..😡
What crap was he telling to Taani..😳
Rey's Anger..OMG!!!So scary...😲😆
Poor taani...😆
Aadat hogayi hogi usse...😆
Rey's mom's entry...😲
I wanna know abhi ke abhi that is she a Villain???😕
And Rey!!!😲
He said that Taani is her friend and also reminded her to stay in her limits...😲😡
Crazy Guy!!! But I love him...😳😆
He should know what friends are for...
You share everything with them..
Anyways, no use of saying..🤢
Rey to mera comment padhne wala hai nahi...😆
To kya faida...😆
Loved how taani planned a party for Rinni...😛
She is so sweet..😛
Hmm.. So Taani very well knew that she can get her answers from Granny..😆
Very excited for the mystery to be revealed...😛
And the precap...☺️
I am blushing now..☺️
Cant wait...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Debu!!!! Finally I read all the chapters..
I am so sorry to keep you waiting..
I really really loved this story..
I never realised when i read all the chapters..
I wanted to keep reading...
You are an Outstanding writer,Debu!!!
I really love your writing style..
This story is really different from the others..
A very unique concept...
In this FF so far, my favorite scene was that hugging scene where Rey saves Taani from the goons...
The Unique concept along with your writing style is keeping me glued to this magnificent story of yours..
Really Really loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
You are an Outstanding writer di
I really love your writing style..
This story is really different from the others..
A very unique concept...
precap is awesome di
The Unique concept along with your writing style is keeping me attached to this amazing story of yours..
Really Really loved it...

update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting chapter
do update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012



@bold - you want more MU???😲😲😲
already toh itna sara MU's result is this marriage..you can say that now it's time 2clear all MU one by one😊

next chapter will make u clear more, i guess
Thanks a lot for commenting😊


Arey i just thought like dat...n acchi baat hai ki MU clear honge...ab to sirf wait kar sakte hain next chap ka jo precap se hi itna interesting lag raha hai 😉 n yaa comment karna to humara farz hai..vo bhi inta accha chap read karne ke baad! 😃

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