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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

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samiha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

omg!!!! ek sath 10 ques!!!!
tera scrap dekh k mujhe laga tu itni achi kabse ho gayee kuch din pehle hi to update kiya tha tune ab phir itni jaldi update kar diya!!!!! aur sabse bari bat update k bad tune scrap bhi kiya!!!!!! tu aur itni mehnat!!! jarur dal me kuch kala hai
par yaha a k pata chala puri ki puri dal hi kali hai...
kaha soacha tha update milega aur mila kya 10 ques!!!!
thik hai ab jab a hi gaye hai to aur kya kar saqte hai!!!! ye le teri ans...

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

at 1st when i started 2 follow this stry it was a nrmal TR ff 4 me bt nw i can proudly say this is one of the best TR ff i have read in this forum!!!!😳😳😳

its really hard 4 the readers 2 accept the main lead with negative shed!!!! bt only because of ur writing skill it became possible !!!!! sometimes i felt lyk 2 kill rey 4 his wrng deeds bt at the very nxt moment u made a soft corner 4 him in my heart!!!!

i just luvd the way u portrayed taani's character

among so much negativities she alwayz stayed positive nd determined.

all in all this ff is really a treat 2 read atleast 4 me😊

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

ummm till nw my most fav scene is TR marriage as i was waited 4 this marriage since i read the teaser!!!...😳😳😳

nd also there is 1 more reason 4 lyking upppsss nt lyking luving tht marriage scene was the way u described the 7 vows nd the entire marriage rituals!!! as maine pehle bhi kaha hai tht maine bohot sare ffs me taarey marriage parha hai bt itna beautifully kisine describe nehi kiya hai jitna tune kiya hai!!! it felt lyk mai sare rituals visualize kar rahi hu so till nw taarey marriage is my most fav scene...

bt may b in future taarey confession nd their intimate scene ye jaga lene wala hai...

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

ab MR. REYANSH SINGHANIA k rehte ye jaga koi aur le le kisi ki itni himmat hai kya!!!!!!!...😳😳😳

reason- i badly wanted 2 hate him bt just cant...😆😆😆

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

the writer of THLH...😆😆😆

because of late updates nd also 4 nt sending pms😡😡😡

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

because i m the masi of this ff...😆😆😆

on a serious note i started reading this ff because of its concept nd taarey bt i started luving this ff fr ur unique & brilliant writting style nd last bt nt the least i follow this ff because the writer of this ff is my rosogolla...😉😉😉

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

tu ne THLH me funny scene bhi dale hai😲😲😲

mujhe to pata hi nehi tha...🤣🤣🤣

when rey was trying 2 say srry nd taani irritated him nd also the tea rejection scene...

ab kya kare iss dark romantic ff me funniest scene kaha se dhunde !!!!! yehi 2 yaad aya so issi se kam chala le...😆😆😆

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

ab tak bas ek hi romantic scene diya hai tune humko kamini...😡😡😡😭😭😭

obvio taarey hug in ooty (chap-9)...😳😳😳

aur jindegi mai agar tune kuch ache kam kiye hai to unme se ek ye hai ki wo chap tune mujhe dedicate kiya tha...😉😉😉😆😆😆

i really hope ki tu aapna ye ache kam jari rakhegi & taarey intimate scene ki chap bhi mujhe hi dedicate karegi...😳😳😳😉😉😉

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

when taani came 2 knw tht rey was behind the MMS scandal!!!

i just felt lyk killing him...😡😡😡

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

ummm when taani's family members were blaming taani 4 the MMS scandal nd she had no way 2 prove herself nd also when rey blackmailed taani 4 the marriage nd taani had no other option left without agreeing to marry him!!!!

i just felt so bad 4 her in tht moments...😭😭😭

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

rey's past, taarey confession & taarey romance ( 18+ wala ok 😳😳😳😆😆😆)

suggestion- jaldi update diya kar...😡😡😡

Edited by samiha_taarey - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

First of all A BIG SORRY for taking a long time to reply, i was a bit busy and then when i saw your questions, i thought as you call me Ms Intelligent...i should top in this exam 😆, and for topping a student needs to prepare thoroughly...so following that rule, i have read the whole story i.e. 19 chaps and my analysis wale replies after every chap all over again so that took time... And TaDaa...by re-reading i have solved almost all the mysteries of this ff, you said i was holding the right nerve but now i have cut that nerve and seen what's inside, i already had some pieces and by re-reading i have got the remaining pieces too and the puzzle is solved for me, but don't worry this has increased my interest more in this story!

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

well i feel this is one of the best ff's i have ever read, the story is really really good, but the best thing about this ff is its execution...as said earlier by me, the natural flow of this story makes it a notch higher than other stories. i have read many stories with similar concept, as in the anti-hero troubling the heroine but then falling in love with her and becoming a perfect loving hero, but this particular story will be remembered by me forever because no one has used this concept as brilliantly as you. This is one of the those ff which brings a 100watt smile on my face whenever i see a new update. Coming to the characters...Rey and Taani have been characterized as total opposite characters, but yet they have some similarities...One is the love for their family... opposite is that Taani shows it but Rey doesn't...and similarity is both don't get even half of it in return, and the little bit they get in return is from their grandmothers...the second similarity is Determination, both are very strong and determined, both of them want to win every time and make the situation favorable for them-self...but the opposite is that Taani always does what is right but Rey doesn't care if he is doing the right thing or a wrong thing, he just wants to win at any cost. And I Love both grannies for loving their grandchildren unconditionally, and i feel bad for Rinni, hope she recovers soon. Won't say anything in particular about the other characters...but yes i would like to mention, they are like salt and pepper which make the story spicier...i like to read their small bits in the update.

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

Your writing is meaningful so there are many fav dialogues, won't mention any...but i would like to tell you that i love the lines where you give this fictional story a touch of reality.

Fav scenes are...first one Taani's reply to Rey's cheap offer in the form of slap

Second is TaaRey marraige...the way you described the meaning of those 7 vows and Taani and Rey's feelings with each vow was amazing, i loved it

Third is Taani's dhamki to Rey...if you'll come near me, i'll kill you and hang myself.

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

I answered this question for you at the end of last thread, but i'll answer again. last time i said i love both Taani and Rey's character...and i still do but now after re-reading the story ...i have not only fallen in love with Taani all over again but now i also respect her. She has faced all the harsh-realities of her life with utmost bravery.She is an independent and strong woman. Right from fulfilling the needs of her family, fighting for the justice of Bishaka and that vegetable vendor, to dealing with a man like Reyaansh Singhania...the way she has handled everything is commendable 👏 Even if the person before her is abusing her, or putting disgusting allegations on her...she has always answered back in the right way without crossing her limits or abusing the person in front of her. So Taani is my fav character from this ff.

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

None...i believe the real villain is not revealed yet. I was suspicious about Shivam but now after re-reading i have given a clean-chit to him, because in past he was too young to give any pain to Rey and Rinni, he may be involved in making Rey-Rinni's life miserable but his involvement was indirect. His behavior with Taani was not bad either when she worked with him. Lets see if he continues to be positive after his comeback or not. Looking forward to some Devar-Bhabhi moments between Shivam and Taani. Lets see Taani lets him become her jiju or not 😉

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

For the first time i opened the thread of this story only because it was a TaaRey ff

Then i started following this story for its concept.

Now i am in love with your writing style.

The reason why i love this ff so much is that...i have always liked suspense stories more than love stories, and this story has so much secrets and suspense, that too a very well maintained suspense so that's why i love this story so much and eagerly wait for its update.

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Till now there hasn't been even a single scene which has made me laugh. But yes, there have been a few times when reading a certain line has brought a smile on my face. I always smiled when Rey called Taani as "Meri Dulhan"

Second one is the first encounter of Chachi and Taani, her weird behaviour brought a smile on two faces...Taani & me.

Third one is also from Chachi's weird antics...i didn't smile on this but i had a look of amusement on my face when i read the line where Chachi ji said that Taani looks like a cunning and clever girl.

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

i don't have any other option so i'll go with that 'Ghazab Ki Raat' when Taani and Rey came close for the first time on that rainy night. But that was not romance for me because i believe romance happens only after two individuals fall in love with each other...so i am waiting for Taani and Rey to fall in love with each other so that i can get to see some true romance between them as TaaRey.

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Two scenes were depressing for me

First one was when Rey called Taani to meet at the church just a few hours before their wedding and told her that he is the mastermind behind that MMS and gave her his conditions for the marriage...that scene was depressing because the strong girl like Taani who never bowed down before any evil had to accept all the conditions of Rey despite knowing that he is the one because of whom she has lost her honor, and he'll ruin her life if she marries him.

Second one was Rey's revelation on their suhagraat about his real intentions of marrying her...he made a joke of a sacred relation like marriage, that was very depressing.

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Taani's scenes with her grandmother, her meeting with Rey's grandmother...and one scene before their marriage when Piyu congratulated Taani for the bright color of her mehendi saying that her husband will love her a lot...then Taani thought that she doesn't know if he'll ever love her and if the word love is even meant for her or not, that scene was very emotional.

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

Well i am looking forward to the revelation of all the secrets...i wanna know i am right to what extent. i am also looking forward to see how slowly and gradually Taani and Rey fall in love with each other by fulfilling those 7 vows...and also in my term, how they slowly climb different steps on that ladder leading to love, basically pyar tak pohanchne ki kuch stages hoti hain, i wanna see them experience all those stages before realizing that they love each other and then obviously their love confession. Besides this i also want to see how Taani as a true partner helps Rey in overcoming his painful past.

i know i'll get to read all this and it will be beyond my expectations as usual...so really looking forward to read the upcoming updates 😃

Edited by Favouriteofall - 12 years ago

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall
in reply to your comment...i just wanna say i have full trust on you...now and forever, i am sure you'll never disappoint me with your writing 😊
coming to the update...it was superb 👍🏼
i loved it!!!
hmm so 1 month passed
i loved the bonding you have shown between Rinni and Taani
Taani takes care of Rinni just like a mother takes care of her child
good that Taani has got someone with whom she can share her feelings
i loved how you have justified Taani's act of offering friendship...couldn't have been better than this 👍🏼
and yes she is absolutely right!
"If he HATES me, I will LOVE him till I force him to love me" i loved Taani's determination...she has my best wishes and support, i hope she succeeds in her mission
hmm so Taani wants to make Rinni's room colorful...that's a good idea
and here comes Mr.Singhania...hmm someone wants his wife to know his fav colour 😉
but then he doesn't let her speak...manners Mr.Singhania
then he asks her to make his tea...makes sure its not drinkable and then rejects it 😲
i couldn't understand what was that for
so Rinni's birthday it is...lets see Taani kya karti hai to make this birthday memorable,
waise Taani jo bhi kare birthday to for sure memorable ho ga 😉
Rey loves Rinni a lot
Hmm so Rey finds her different from others...the best part he atleast thinks about her 😊
hmm so now Taani will see Piyu with someone...lets see whom
i am sure she won't come back in 5 mins...lets see if Rey gets worried about her or not
and with this i realize that in my last comment in the last line i mistakenly mentioned Rinni in place of Piyu
anywayz coming to the precap...hmm so Shivam is responsible for Rey and Rinni's miserable life...the first thought that came in my mind was...is Shivam Rinni's boyfriend or husband and then i also remembered that Rinni fell down from the stairs that's why she is in this condition...is it that Shivam pushed her from the staircase
but then Rey's parents are also responsible for Rey's miserable life...so kya all these are inter-connected or they separately played a part in making Rey and Rinni's life miserable
uff phir se so many questions...i want the answers soon Debu
hmm something unexpected between TR 🤔
and next update will be on wednesday 😭 its ok..i know you are busy
i'll wait for the update 😊

@1st bold - a big thanks, perhaps short because it's all because of your love and support that I am writing this story. I know that few of my readers surely wait for my updates and love to read my story, so whenever I feel low, demotivated, I read your comments🤗

@2nd bold - for it thanks again, coz she really needs it. I wanted to show a strong, determined person full of positivity. Circumstances has helped to be like this. Hopefully, I can show more of her character soon with the updates and i guess, i have not developed her fully

@3rd bold - that is awesome observation👏👏 coz I even didn't notice it😳😆, just wrote that line

@4th bold - you can take it in two ways. 1st, this is nothing but to irritate her. 2nd this lies a thin sense of humor , to tease her/his wyf..do no hi possible hai

@5th bold - not actually, i wrote, Shivam is back and that person will be introduced. both are separate..sowwy for confusion😳😃

this is beautiful comment😊

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lovelysweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

i love this story. love the way u describe the feelings. ur story is very nice and mature. this is one of my favourite stories i would say. i just cant wait till the next update. when i start reading i feel like reading this ff. The cahracters are just amazing dont know what to say about . I love tanis character. I love tani. Reys character has a mystery and i think thats why its amazing. Rey always has this mystery in his word. Rinnis chracter i feel sorry for her. Love tani and her bond.love reys care for her to. The other characters are also good. Ur story should get a grammy i would say

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

My favourite scene is the last chapter that tani talking to rinni and rey came in. Poor tani tries to be friendly with him.my fav dialogue is the one when rey is like if you f*** your wife rape is not a word for it. Loved when he changes his mood then

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

My fav is rey shocked but its true. Loved his suspense and mystery cant wait to see why he is so arrogant. I love his character

4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?

Shivam cause he is kabab mein haddi. Also the person who made rinni life miserable. Dont know him but hate him

5) Why you follow this story - for the concept/writing style/for TaaRey/ just time pass/or any other reason?

i follow this story because of it uniqueness i love it i just wanna read this everyday actually every moment

6)The funniest scene(s)/event(s) until now?
I loved the sugar part

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?
The rain one

8)The most depressing scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Rinnis situation

9)The most emotional scene(s)/event(s) until now?
Tani talking to rinni di about rey

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

Im looking forward to rey and tani hate love relation like rey cares for her. I want agressive love making to. I want tani to ingnore him and rey feeling bad cause tani avoiding him

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: riachandnani
Awesome update! Loved rinni taani bond! Loved d way taani takes care of her! Don't like d way Rey spoke to taani ! How mean! Interesting pre cap! Update soon n thnx for d pm..
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arree Rey toh abhi bahut sudhar gaya hai Riya😉😆
Thanks sweetie for the comment😊

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: hima_taarey
abi toh frnds baney...
pls uss jerk ke wajah se
taarey k beech probs mat laao...
and debu di... loved this upddate...
mostly taani's pov with rinni...
it was so damn cute...
rey badlega na?
he will love her soon na?

Thanks Hima😊
Rey zaroor badlega..use badalna hoga😛😆..tumhare liye😆😆
yes Taani's POV, i wanted to clear it

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey
omg!!!! ek sath 10 ques!!!!
tera scrap dekh k mujhe laga tu itni achi kabse ho gayee kuch din pehle hi to update kiya tha tune ab phir itni jaldi update kar diya!!!!! aur sabse bari bat update k bad tune scrap bhi kiya!!!!!! tu aur itni mehnat!!! jarur dal me kuch kala hai
par yaha a k pata chala puri ki puri dal hi kali hai...
kaha soacha tha update milega aur mila kya 10 ques!!!!
thik hai ab jab a hi gaye hai to aur kya kar saqte hai!!!! ye le teri ans...

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?
at 1st when i started 2 follow this stry it was a nrmal TR ff 4 me bt nw i can proudly say this is one of the best TR ff i have read in this forum!!!!😳😳😳
its really hard 4 the readers 2 accept the main lead with negative shed!!!! bt only because of ur writing skill it became possible !!!!! sometimes i felt lyk 2 kill rey 4 his wrng deeds bt at the very nxt moment u made a soft corner 4 him in my heart!!!!
i just luvd the way u portrayed taani's character
among so much negativities she alwayz stayed positive nd determined.
all in all this ff is really a treat 2 read atleast 4 me😊
A/N - I know that you always interested to read contract marriage on TR nah..so no wonder why marriage part is your fav too😃..
2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?
bt may b in future taarey confession nd their intimate scene ye jaga lene wala hai...
A/N - I like it..i really like it a lot..TR confession
3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?
ab MR. REYANSH SINGHANIA k rehte ye jaga koi aur le le kisi ki itni himmat hai kya!!!!!!!...😳😳😳
reason- i badly wanted 2 hate him bt just cant...😆😆😆
A/N - same here😳..but tu zada Rey par nazar maat dal😡😡
4)Which character you dislike/hate most and Why?
the writer of THLH...😆😆😆
because of late updates nd also 4 nt sending pms😡😡😡
A/N - main late update karti hoo? haayy..ye likhne se pehle tera mob toot kyu nahi gaya😡😡
7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?
ab tak bas ek hi romantic scene diya hai tune humko kamini...😭
obvio taarey hug in ooty (chap-9)...😳😳😳
aur jindegi mai agar tune kuch ache kam kiye hai to unme se ek ye hai ki wo chap tune mujhe dedicate kiya tha...😉😉😉😆😆😆
A/n - tune chapters number bhi likha..i am impressed😳😳😳
theek hai tere liye kuch romantic scenes aur likh denge😉
i really hope ki tu aapna ye ache kam jari rakhegi & taarey intimate scene ki chap bhi mujhe hi dedicate karegi...😉😉😉
10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)
rey's past, taarey confession & taarey romance ( 18+ wala ok 😆)
suggestion- jaldi update diya kar...😡😡😡

a/n - ye TR romance common in all, so I have to work on that😃

Main itna khush hoo ye parke, k jee kar raha hai tere haatho ko chum loo😉😳
Abb, tu itni mehnaat ki hai mere liye..i doubt k tu xam mein bhi itni saare ques nahi likhti😆😆😆
waise, ek baat tu theek boli hai..lol..lazy main..PM bhi karne ka maan nahi karta😳😆

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Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: cuppypie121
Dii aapne to GHANCHAKAR kar keh rakh dia hai 🤢
Kaabhi Rey itna sweet ho jata hai kabhi karele k tarah karwa 😲
accha back to update
Taani-Rinni bond was adorable
the way Taani shared her sorrows and problems with Rinni and on the other hand the way Rinni gestured that she understands was wow👏
loved the way Taani is determined keh woh kutta k dum ko sedhi kar keh rahe g...Taani I like ur confidence 😉 FORGET AND FORGIVE and fullfilling all oaths taken on marraige...killind the monster by the angel spirit
dii just love the choice of words u make...they litterally have a spell in them
(dii mein debate k liye har essay ab aap se hi likhwaon g 😆)
ok now coming to Rey's part
how rude of him...Taani is trying to make Rinni happy aur woh usse baat baat par insult kar raha hai 😡
waise the way he loves his dii was adorable
Taani is his wife how can he insult her this way bol to aise raha tha keh Taani uski servant ho 😡
now comin to Chai wala scene 😃
that line was hurralious: she remains quiet by feeling lack of sweetness in Rey's life and his behavior, so he must be needed something extra in his tea.
Taani Rey k liye tu 6 spoons of sugar bhi kam hain he require atleast 60 spoons 🤣🤣🤣
and the point when Rey denied to have tea😡 if I was in place of Taani mein wahin par Rey ko ussi chai se bath de deti 🤣🤣
afterall walk kar k aya tha...aur walk k baad agr ek bath le lia jai to person fresh ho jata hai😆
Well Taani leave it Rey ko to subah subah karele ka juice pinne k habbit hai 😆
Afterall karwa hona is not that easy!!!!!! 🤣🤣
wow Rinni's birthday...Happy Birthday Rinni 🥳🥳cake wohi khalo jo dii ne is thread k first page par lagaya hai😃😉
Loved Taani's attitude: I can manage, Thank You Mr Singhania!! 👏👏
A tight hug for this part 🤗
aur who is the prson Taani saw outside mandir is it Shivam or is it piyu???😲
Continue soon😊
PS dii finally aaj mera laptop theek hogaya aur yeh sab se long comment hai jo meine If par kia...ab iss jerry ne apne tom k liye itna lamba comment likha to iss jerry ko tom k cute si smile de do...love ya :-*

Thanks behena for commenting such a long comment for the first time..i love you😊
tera lappy wapas aane k khushi mein..main dance bhi kar liya

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geshiga54

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

loved bhai behan relationship between Rey and Rinni hope to see more Taarey moments but still kinda miss the old Taani but now i could c a stronger Taani at the same time. i know im confusing but i basically wanna say how nicely u describe n put life into ur story n characters. cant wait for ur next update thank u soo much for the pm!!!!!!!!1

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