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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Hi dear!
Well I know i promised a long comment...but I'm still in between exams...so sorry for short and late comment
But i read all the parts and the SS was amazing!
The tumour part was an unexpected twist
For a moment wen u said she was looking at his photo in the wall, I got scared...but thx for the happy ending!
really liked the SS...and the name is also nice
Keep writing more
Love u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
1 baat achi huyi
main late huyi to maine saare parts ek saath padh liye :P
mujhe wait nahi karna pada


Loved it
Awesome SS

continue hoti to aur maza aata :)
But lalach buri bala hai

Write more SS/FF :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
nice part sweetie...start writing some more...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Freethinker

nice part sweetie...start writing some more...😊

thanks dii
yeah di mene ek or ss likhne ka decide kiya tha bt fir socha mere readers meri ek or story kaise bardast karenge 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

1 baat achi huyi
main late huyi to maine saare parts ek saath padh liye :P
mujhe wait nahi karna pada


Loved it
Awesome SS

continue hoti to aur maza aata :)
But lalach buri bala hai

Write more SS/FF :P

han di isliye to meine jaldi jaldi sare parts likh diye taaki apko wait na karna pade...hehehe
waise thank u di for appreciating n encouraging me
han di yeh to sahi baat h ki laalach buri bala h bt mein apke ff ke liye fir v bhot greedy hun
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
loved the title

part 1

payal is reading comic😆

she hadpofy his room n cupboard


''aisa lagta h puri family ke kapde yahan leke aa gyi h''😆 😆

payal-''kahan na sorry''he saw her n said-''kab kaha sorry tumne''🤣

hilarious dialogues👍🏼



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payal aadi to rijha rahi hai😳

one song comes 2 my mind


Aaja Piya Tohe Pyaar Doon, Gori Baiyyaan Tope Vaar Doon
kis Liye Tu, Itna Udaas
sukhe Sukhe Honth, Ankhiyon Me Pyaas
kis Liye Kis Liye Ho,
aaja Piyaa ..



but yeh piya kitna bhav kha raha hai

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payal is soo cute . honeymoon par jaana hai

n adi is just not interested . not done

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: pranita1202

loved the title

part 1

payal is reading comic😆

she hadpofy his room n cupboard


''aisa lagta h puri family ke kapde yahan leke aa gyi h''😆 😆

payal-''kahan na sorry''he saw her n said-''kab kaha sorry tumne''🤣

hilarious dialogues👍🏼



==========================================================================


payal aadi to rijha rahi hai😳

one song comes 2 my mind


Aaja Piya Tohe Pyaar Doon, Gori Baiyyaan Tope Vaar Doon
kis Liye Tu, Itna Udaas
sukhe Sukhe Honth, Ankhiyon Me Pyaas
kis Liye Kis Liye Ho,
aaja Piyaa ..



but yeh piya kitna bhav kha raha hai

===================================================================


payal is soo cute . honeymoon par jaana hai

n adi is just not interested . not done

thanks dear for ur comment😃
loved ur comment n song too😉
thanks alot
love u😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
@tejjo: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
thanks girlz rule for ur comment
im glad that u like it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
@tejjo: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

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