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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

very nice title!!!!
Very sweet ending!!!
It had a great suspense till the end!!!!

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Nice story thank god th end is happy. But we love our neha nd veer nd dats y u wrote Veer instead of Aadi:D :D :D

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riya

@Riyaa16

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Nice story thank god th end is happy. But we love our neha nd veer nd dats y u wrote Veer instead of Aadi:D :D :D

oops sorry dear...galti se likh diya...😃

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: tejjo
oops sorry dear...galti se likh diya...😃

dekha di aap mujhe bhot chdhte the na jab bhi main shaleen ko veer likhti thi

ab meri baari...

''lagta h di veer ko bhot miss kr rhi h...😉

okay, maine chidda diya,

aap chidd gye na?😕

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

wow...superb ending...👏

he always stayed away from her...cause he didn't want to spoil her life...oh that was so cute...😊

n she finally decided that what ever wiill happen she will save him...ise kehte hai true love...

n finally he is alive,trust,believe and faith in each other are the basic reason that one can win over any hurdel...😍

waise mujhe pata nahi tha ki adi itna romantic hai...😉

luv u...😊

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

wooowww...

wat a beautiful n really amazing ss..

loved it..

firstly i was confused as y adi hates her soo much...

n always angry with her...

but then it justify his actions..

do write more,...

loved the ending...cute one..

thnx for the pm...

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Hi Riya 😛

Edited my comment

please check 😳

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone
Hi Riya 😛

Edited my comment

please check 😳

thanks sona...loved ur comment

thank u😳

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aroojm

@aroojm

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Ahhh tejjo what an amazing SS man i can't believe its done already😭 😭😭😭

But OMG what an SS man i almost cried when i found out that our adii has brain tumor 😔 and u gave me a heart attack thinking that he dies i was sacred to read ahead but that was a surprise yayyy he's alive 😃😃😃😃 and they finally got to go on their honeymoon... payal is soo cute

I always wondered why he was soo rude towards her... but more confused as to why he always wanted her to leave even though if he loved her a lot.. but after finding out why... all his behavior towards her was very understandable he loves her soo much that he always wanted to see her happy awww soo cute

i am sorry for replying so late just been really busy sorry
but i loved all your updates you are a really good writer please do write something new will be waiting thank you soo much for this really cute and loveable SS 🤗

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

sorry for late reply
loved this part most!!
i was thinking y he is so rude!! and now knew tht!!
loved the scene when he told her
liked he was ready for operation taking his life in risk for her!!
and wow its was happy ending made me very happy
hope we will also get some happy news abt rtmc
thanks for liking n using title😊

Edited by shruja - 13 years ago