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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: tejjo

<font color="#cc0000" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4">baby isliye hi to ss h😃</font>


to thodi or bdi to ho skti h na
itni choti nhi honi chahiye
ye to abhi mere brabr bhi nhi hui
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: princesspriyart


to thodi or bdi to ho skti h na
itni choti nhi honi chahiye
ye to abhi mere brabr bhi nhi hui

pehle next part to pad lo dear 😃bada hi h😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Nice name Riya
Finaly u gave
n Look whatt , mere suggest kiya hua PIYA isme present hai 😃
I know Shruja di ne bataya
It's suits your story also " Bairi Piya "⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Accha to Last update kab milega
main bahut curious hu padhne k liye
What Payal will do that makes Adii realzation
update sooon sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
thank u guys for ur lovely comment...love u all...now this is the last part...or iss ss ko nhi jhelena padega😆 or is ss ka naam bhi aaj hi rakha h meine..how fast i am🤣 n the title is...'..bairi piya''given by shruja dii...nice na😃

part 5

he shouted continuously-''payal...payal''she quickly went to room n saw him-''kya hua''he looked at her angrily n hold her tightly form shoulders-''tumhe ek baar mein koi baat samajh nhi aati...tumne aaj bhi divorce paper padh diye''she loosened his grip n smiled-''aadi mein tumaare liye chai laati hun tm fresh ho jao''aadi hold her hand-''mein tumse kuch puch rha hun''she looked at doors-''aadi chodo na mujhe kitchen mein jaana h warna sab jal jayega''

he was more angry-''jalne do sab jalne do lekin tum aaj hi divorce paper par sign karogi''he took out papers from the cupboard n gave her...she didn't took it n moved towards the doors...he locked the door n made her sit on couch n gave her pen...she looked at him while mad a sad face-''mein sign nhi karungi''he got more angry-''dekho payal chup chaap sign kar do mera dimaag or mat kharab mat karo''

she looked at him-''thik h jaisi tumhaari marzi she signed the papers in one go n leave the room while crying

aadi put his hand on his forehead his eyes were teary-''im sorry''

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next morning
he wake up n heard some sounds..he turned n saw she packed her clothes n other stuff...he looked at her surprisingly...-''yeh sab kya kar rhi ho''

she looked at him-''mein jaa rhi hun...tumhaara saara saman jagah par rakha h koi takleef nhi hogi dhundne mein...or.khana bhi bana diya h office jane se pehle kha lena''she put her bag n moved towards the doors...she stopped n turned-''u love me''he was confused with her question at this time-''no''she smiled n said-''tum jhuth bol rhe ho aadi...''n she leave

after sometime
he sat alone in house...n looked at her photo...one drop of tear fell on photo...then he realized that he was crying ...as he about to wiped his tears before that two soft palms wiped his tears...he looked at her...yes she was in front of her...he smiled n hugged her...she too embraced her...after few seconds he realize that he embraced her he pulled his face n said little angrily-''tum to chali gyi thi na''she sat next to him-''han but phir mene socha ki shaam ka khaana kaun bnayega isliye wapas aa gyi...kal saubah chali jayungi''he smiled..this is the first time she saw him smiled-''aadi tum haste ho to bhot acche lagte ho''

aadi-''agar kal subah chali gyi to kal ka khana kaun bnayega''then both of them smiled...she came closed to him-''aadi baat kya h kyun hmesha mujhse dur rehte ho tum';

he stood up from the couch n said-''kahan na kyunki mein tumhe pasand nhi karta ''she know he lied-''jhuth nhi sach sunna h mujhe...agar mujhe pasand nhi karte to phir ro kyun rhe the...agar mujhse pyaar nhi karte to mere hatho ka jala hua khana kyun khaaya...or us din jab meine kaha ki mein ghar mein bore ho jaati hun to ghar jaldi kyun aaye...meri jaan kyun bachaai thi tumne''she cupped his face-''mujhe pta h ki tum mujhse pyaar karte h phir kaehte kyun nhi ho''he turned his face-''payal tum jao or apna kaam karo''she grasped his hand n said-''nhi aaj tumhe btana hi padega''

he looked at her while crying-''kya karogi janakar bolo''

payal-''adi mein bas janna chahti hun ki tum itne rude kyun ho mujhse''he hold her hand n made her sit on couch angrily...then he wiped his tears-''tum sunna chahti ho na ki kya problem h mujhe to suno...han mein tumse bhot pyaar karta hun jitna tum mujhse karti ho usse bhi jayda...or us din se jab meine tumhe pehli baar party mein dekha tha...kkabhi kisi ladki se pyaar kya uski taraf dekha bhi nhi meine kyunki mein sirf apne kaam se pyaar karta tha...par pta nhi kab tum meri jindagi ban gyi...har waqt tumhare baare mein hi sochta rehta tha...lekin kabhi tumhe kaha nhi kyunki mein tumhe wo saari khushiyaan nhi de sakhta tha jo tumhe chahiye thi...kyunki mujhe tumor h brain tumor...''to heard this she shicked n stunned as her go away from her...she grasped his hand tightly-''aadi nhi''his eyes filled with some fresh tears-''hmesha tumse dur isliye jaata tha kyunki mein tumhaari jindagi barbaad nhi kar sakta tha...us din sab tumne mujhe i love u bola to mein apne aap ko rok nhi paya or wo sab ''she cried out while holding his hand-aadi''he wiped her tears-''isliye mein tumse shaadi nhi karna chahta tha...or tumse rudely baat karta tha ki tum mujhe chodkar chali jao''

she embraced him n cried out loudly-''mein tumhe chodkar kabhi nhi jayunga''he pulled her face-''meri life kab khatam ho jaye koi bta nhi h tum''she put her palm on his mouth-''nhi aisa nhi hoga mein tumhe kabhi kuch nhi hone dungi''aadi remove her hand n said-''meri ek baat manogi''

she nodded while sobbing...he wiped her tears-''kuch din mein hmara divorce ho jayega ...to tum kisi acche se ladke se shaadi kar lena jo meri tarh rude na ho''she removed his hands-''aadi pagal ho gye ho tum mein kisi or se shaadi kabhi nhi karungi...agar tumhaari jagah mein hoti to kya tum shaadi karte''he lowered his head...she pulled his face upward-''mein bhi nar sakti ...mein tumhare sath hi rahungi or tumhe kuch nhi hoga''


payal-''iska koi to ilaaj hoga na koi na koi raasta nikal hi ayega''she hugged him...aadi hugged her back-''payal ab koi fayada nhi h''

payal-''kyun nhi h ...hum kal hi doctors ke pass jayenge...he looked at her-''mein pehle hi doctors se check up kara chuka hun''

payal-''aadi mein tumhe khona nhi chahti''n hugged him back

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at night

he turned to other side of bed n shocked ...she was not on bed...he looked at window she was standing there...he went nearer-''tum yahan kyun khadi ho''she was crying...she wiped her tears n turned-''wo mujhe neend nhi aa rhi thi to mein yahan aa gyi''he grasped her hand n moved towards the bed-''aankhe band karo neend apne aap aa jayegi''she laid on bed n closed her eyes...he covered her with blanket n switched off the lights...

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next morning

she came hastily towards him n said-''aadi tumhe pta h agar hum tumors ka treatment early stage mein karye to survival ke chances hote h...tum bhi apna treatment kara lo pls''he comb his hairs n said-''payal mene bola na mein pehle hi yeh sab kara chuka hun''she said quickly-''koi baat nhi hun kahin bahar jaakar tumhaara ilaaj karayege''he put his bag n moved towards the doors...she was very sad...he turned n said-''ok fine tumhaare liye mein yah bhi kara sakta hun but koi fayada nhi h''she smiled-''thik h to tum jaldi aana...kuch nhi hoga tumhe'he leave


at evening

both of them reached ta hospital...doctors examined him n said-''dekho payal adi ke survival ke chances bhot kam h ''she angry on him-''rehne dijiye aap hume aap se treatment nhi karana...mere aadi ko kuch nhi hoga mein use kuch nhi hone dungi''she leave with veer

they reach at home n shocked to saw rajni n yash ani...they returned ...rajni slapped payal-''tum kya chahti ho ki mere beta pehle h is duniya se''n cried out...aadi console her..payal came towards her-''maa mein sirf aadi ko bachaan chahti hun siliye''she was very angry-''bas rehne do tum kya samajhti ho ki humne kuch nhi kiya...''aadi cupped her face n said-'maa aap royie mat plss...mujhe to jana hi ab ya baad mein to phir kya farq padta h''rajni-''aadi aisa nhi bolte ''


payal went to her room...

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he was lying on couch when she came with tea-''aadi hum kahin or bhi to tumhaara ilaaj kara sakte h na''he looked at her-''payal is sab se koi fayada nhi hoga...tum samajhti kyun nhi ho''she was almost crying-''lekin koshish to kar sakte h na aadi mein tumhaare bina nhi ji payungi''he hugged her-''accha bolo kya karna h mujhe''she smiled n said-''meien aaj news paper mein america ke bhot bade doctor ke baare padha h wo specialist h hume unse milna chahiye na''he nodded-''ok hum kal hi america jayenge''both hugged

after one day they reached america n meet with doctor...he examined aadi n said-''ok operation karna hoga hum puri koshish karenge...survival ke chances kam h''she was very sad...but aadi came n said-''mujhe operation karana h''she was shocked n said-''aadi nhi agar tumhe kuch ho gya to''he stopped her n said to doctors-''operation kab karana hoga '' doctors-''kabhi bhi jitna jaldi hoga utna hi accha hoga''

aadi-''ok mein kal hi karana chata hun''she was very shocked..he came out from the room she was still gazing him-''itni jaldi dur jaana chahte ho mujhse tum''he smiled-''jana to h hi aaj nhi to kal par agar mein bach gya to tumhara kya hoga''her fresh tears came out...he wiped her tears-''sach to h ki mein bhi tumhe khona nhi chahta tumhaare saath jina chahta hun isliya han bola''n then both hugged

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next day

aadi lying ob bed n she sat next to him n crying continuously...he looked at her-''payal i love u''she kissed his forehead n he leave for operation

after sometime

doctors came out form the operation theater...she went nearer n cried out to heard his reply


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after two months
she looked at his photo lying on wall...he looked smart n handsome in photo...then suddenly two more hands came around her waist...she smiled n curved her neck-''aadi ''he kissed her temple-''hmmm''

he turned her n said-''tum meri photo kyun dekh rehi thi''she kissed his cheek-''kyunki mein tumhe bhot miss kar rhi thi''

he lifted her in arms n moved towards the bed...he lying over her n kissed her passionately...she caressed his hairs n kissed him...he looked at her lips n about to kiss when her mother in law call her-''payal''she stood up quickly n opened the doors-''ji maa''rajni smiled n said-''tumhare tickets aa gyi h yeh loo''she took it but confused...she came inside n said-''yeh to switzerland ki tickets h''

aadi-''han hum honeymoon ke liye jaa rh h''she was very haapy n said-''mein bhi''he made his face-''nhi meine socha dad mom or ani ko le jau tour ke liye...hum mein tum nhi aati ho kya''she smiled n pulled his tie towards her-''u love me''

he smiled smirkly-''na''she pulled him more closer-''nhi''he grasped her waist-''hmmm i love u...tumhaari wajah se aaj mein apne puri family ka saath hun''he kissed her lips gently...she tore the kiss n said-''to hum kab jayenge''he pulled her more closer-''han kal hi jayenge''n again kissed her lips...she again tore the kiss n said-''wahan bhot dhand hai kya hume garm kapde le jaane honge na...mein to saare sweaters rakh lungi kahin hum bimaar ho gye to''he pulled her on bed n laid over her...she widened her eyes..-''aadi chodo na mujhe packing karni h''he tightly tugged her n kissed her lips gently n harshly...

after sometime

she packed their stuff when he shout-''payal tum hmesha towel bahar kyun rakhti ho''she bite her tongue-''sorry mein bhul gyi ''he looked at her angrily-'' i kill u''she came nearer-''hum honey moon par kaise jayenge phir akele jaoge''he looked at her angrily-''tumhaare paas aisi baate aati kahan se''she laughed n came more closer she opened his buttons of shirt he smiled and lifted her in his arms ...n moved towards the washroom...she smiled in his embrace n kissed his lips n then ahem ahem in washroom😉

so guys that is last part hope u like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Accha to Last update kab milega

main bahut curious hu padhne k liye
What Payal will do that makes Adii realzation
update sooon sooon

last update post ho gya h see😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
😛Res... sorry I know I m tooo late in commemting but I read it when you updated but res karke jod kiya
cho chorrry dear
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
update was too good...mindblowing...superb
and very long
ohhh He had tumor ... Brain tumor 😲
that's why he tried stay away from her
but at that night he couldn't resoist her 😳
Thank god Payal was there for him
and only because of her n her faith .. aadi got back to her 😛
but after his operation you scared me Riya .. why payal cried 😭
forget it ... but Addi thik ho gaya na .. bas I 😛
loved their scene
It's so Romantic 😳 😳
again Payal forget to put his towel 😆
and then in addi drag her in bathrooom ☺️
ehm ehm 😉
thanx dear for pm
n aisehi ss likhte rehna 😊
lov u ⭐️
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
res.se.ved
~~EDITED~~
vry sweet ud, sweet stry

main aise hi adi ko galat samjh rhi thi

kinna bora tha uske saath, he had tumor,
bechari ne divorce pprs pr sign bhi kr diye
he ws mising her n crying...aww!

loved wen she returned for the reason who will cook 4 him...?>

good, adi ne at last use bataya ki he has tumor...

they went to us, n adi dinn hesitate...he agreed for operration
barve man.
he wanted to live n love payal...


yes, adi is fine, n dey r going to switziii...wow.
gande nuaghty lovers, washroom main ahem ahem kr rhe h...😳

nice stry, thnx 4 writng dis for us di...

lov u.

🤗
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Omg Omg Omg😲😲😲😲... main bata nahi sakti ki yeh part kitna amazing tha...😛😛😛😛

Jab pata chala that Adi has tumar, I almost had tears in my eyes...😭😭😭😭

Last part kitna happy happy tha😊😊😊😊, Adi ne sirf Payal ke liye abni jaan ko risk kiya...aur operation ke liye haan bola😊😊😊😊

Really superb update...😛😛😛😛

Please continue writing such ffs ... you are an amazing writer😊

Love ya😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd d ss Baire Piya !! 👏
Adi ko tumor !!!!! dat xplans a LOT !!!
yahan i was thnkng he was rude but vo to angel nikla !! 😃
aww...kitna pyaar karta hai vo payal se !! 😳
dis line ko padh kar i thought ki vo ...nahin bachega...
doctors came out form the operation theater...she went nearer n cried out to heard his reply
but thankfully aisa nahin huva !! khushi ke aanson the vo !!!!
i luvd readng dis !!! ⭐️
it was very intrstng !! 👍🏼
kafi suspense tha !!!
ur wrttng is exponentially incrsng !!! 👏 ⭐️ i dont noe how much bettr can u get ...coz ur alrdy fabulus di !!
do write more wonderful stories !!loads of luv...🤗

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