THE GIFT OF LOVE:thread 3:PART 74 : page 47 march 7/14

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My first FF enters the third thread...

Thank U all my readers who have supported me always...and motivated me to write...

Even today whle i was writing the next part i was watching Geet in star utsav. It was the episode where Pari enters and Maan orders lunch for Geet...😊

GHSP was a wonderful show...and it still has the charm...

I really wish we get a season 2 one day...😳

Anyways here is our third thread :

THE GIFT OF LOVE




Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3 :

Part 67 : page1

PART 68 : page 10

PART 69:page 18

PART 70 : page 24

PART 71 : page 31

PART 72 : page 36

Part 73 : page 41

PART 74 : page 47





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats one the 3rd thread 🥳
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Here we go...

(This time i'm not that late i guess 😳)

PART 67

Maanvi was creating a havoc to sleep. Annie was there. Her little Vaishnav was also there to play with Maanvi di but Maanvi Singh Khurana is one of a kind. She didn't even let anyone in her room. Her dad had promised to be with her the whole day. But in the evening as always Adi uncle came and took him for some important work. Thats why he called her bua to come over and left for the meeting.

Annie was getting worried now.

Annie : me Geet bhabhi ko call karu dadi?

Dadi : no need of that Annie. i had informed Maan. He is on the way. He will deal with her

Annie : papa's girl huh?? uff dadi..day by day she is becoming like bhai. Atleast bhai would listen to u and me but Maanvi is ten times bhai...

Just then Maan arrived,

Maan : aur kyu na ho.after all she is Maanvi Singh Khurana...

Annie : bhai...plss dont make her a khadus like you..

Maan : she knows when to be sweet..

Annie : hmmm thats the only relief i have got. Atleast she have some traits of bhabhi..

Maan : Anniee...

There was a bang sound from Maanvi's room.

Annie : sambhaliye apni ladlee ko.

Maan was goin to her room when a servant came informing,"baby madam ne kuch nhe khaya shaam se. hume andar janey tak nhe diya. ye khana to dekha tak nhe.

Maan : khana mujhe do.

Maan took the plate and went to her room. It was closed but not locked. Still he knocked.

Maan : can i come in Maanvi...

She opened the door and cutely turned around, her back facing him. It reminded him his Mishty's antics when she was mad at him.

Maan : gussa ho ap??

Maanvi :...

Maan : papa had told u before na..we elders have our school...office.

Maanvi: u broke ur promise...

Maan : no darling. See i m back. Papa had to attend a very urgent meeting. Sorry...

Maanvi was acting stubborn. And the great MSK was on his knees to pataofy his daughter.

Maanvi : ok on one condition!

Maan: Ur wish is my command princess.

Maanvi: U hav to tell me a bed-time story...

Maan was shocked. stories!!!! He was never into this cheeky stuff. But now he had no other choice. It wasn't difficult for him to preside an international conference...aur face the crazy media...but to tell a story and that too for Maanvi. Well he cant refuse a request by his princess. So,later at night he took his princess on his lap leaning on the bed.

Maan : ummm...ek baar kya hota he Maanvi..ki na..( he suddenly couldn't stop his smile as he was reminded of his Mishty's words "ek baar Maan Singh Khurana hota he jinhe story sunani nhe ati...")

Maanvi : ek baar kya hota he papa?

Maan(waking up from his thots) :huh? wo..ummm hota aisa he ki ek princess hoti he jo ek bade se palace me rehti he..

Maanvi : princess? wats her name??

Maan : naam..wo..Maanvi..Maanvi naam he uska

Maanvi : wow!!

Maan : princess Maanvi lived in a huggge palace with her mumma and papa.. One day some villagers came to Maanvi's papa and started crying..

Maanvi : kyu??

Maan : coz they were in a trouble. There was a monster animal that used to torture them...kill their pets..destroy their crops and attack their babies. Hearing this the king told that whovever brings the monster will get a reward. But no one had the courage. And then little Maanvi came up and told that she will protect the kingdom and save her people. So she set on her magical white horse...

Maanvi : wow magical!! kaise??

Maan: kaise?? ha..wo..this horse can fly,swim and even fight and it has the speed of a 1000 horses.

Maanvi listened with her eyes wide opened. Maan was relieved that he was managing so far..

Maanvi: horse ka naam?

Maan : naam..Snowy..

Maanvi : kyu?

Maan : coz its white like snow..so they set out together. After travelling 1000s of miles and crossing 7 hills they reached a jungle...There was a den inside the deep jungle and there they saw a ferocious lion..

Maanvi: lekin Maanvi was there for the monster na?

Maan : ha ha..lekin..umm raste me lion a gaya na..yehi to twist he..

and he continued as how Maanvi conquered a lion, anaconda and a crocodile and...

Maan : And then Maanvi and snowy reached the treasure island..

Thats when Maan saw that his little doll was sound asleep with her head on his chest. He made her sleep properly covering her with a quilt and kissed on her forehead.

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Meanwhile at Sharma house,

Abhay threw his wine glass and it broke into pieces.

Abhay : Maan Singh Khurana!!! How could he get away every time??? This time i had planned everything clearly.. Maan would be busy at home. At that time we will set up an income tax raid and cause him disgrace...how could this leak?? This was between the three of us rite? DEV??

Dev : y would i cheat you guys? Infact wo 1crore worth illegal gold to mera apna tha. Loss to mera hua na..akhir wo gaya kaha? Police ko wo mili kyu nhe??

Ansh : there must be some source of information thats has leaked...watever!! We need to think something else. Why cant we target that Geet? She is all alone in Kovalam now. Once you destroy her Maan will break autimatically..

Abhay: shut up Ansh!! thats not our motive. I am not here to kill aur hurt. I will never support such ideas of yours and u know that. Maan took my dad's pride and honour. I want him alive but defeated...no bloodshed no war but i want to behead his crown...that pride of Maan Singh Khurana...Once i had done that..but he rose like a phoenix but this time i wont spare him...

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Next day,

Geet had finished all her client meetings. Her flight was 5 hours later. She was too tired to go anywhere. So she decided to stay back in the hotel room. She called at her home to know about Maanvi. Annie gave her a live commentry of the whole things and then finally Maan got a chance to speak to his shona.

Maan : Mishty...

Geet: hmm

Maan : miss you..

Geet : ek din..

Maan : ek din kya ek pal bhi tumse dur nhe reh sakta me..

Geet : ap bhi na..Maan

Maan : u r sounding tired..kya hua?

Geet : pata nhe..wo shayad travel ki wajah se hoga..i'm feeling dizzy..nausea types..dn knw y..

Maan : jaldi se ghar wapas a jao aur apney Maan ke baho me so jao...phir dekhna kaise mere mishty ki thakan dur hoti he...

She was smiling when the receiver suddenly fell from her hand. Her head was spinning and she fell unconscious. Maan's world almost stopped as he sensed the situation. Suddenly there was no reply from her side. It might be a network problem but his heart was saying something else. So he called the reception and asked them to check her. Thats when they found her unconscious. They immediately informed Maan and took her to hospital.

Maan (on phone) : I dont know Adi..Maanvi and I need to be at Kovalam within next 5hrs. Arrange a helicopter or a private plane..watever..

Adi : ok s.s.ir...

They finally got a private plane booked. Annie also joined them. Maan was in a foul mood. Sensing the situation Maanvi kept quiet all the time. She wasnt told that Geet was unwell.

The moment they reached the Lakeshore hospital Maan almost ran through the corridor. She was under observation in a private ward. He got his breath back when he saw her sitting on the bed with full consciousness. He ran to her and hugged her tightly.

Maan : u scared the hell out of me.

Geet : dn worry Maan...i am perfectly alright.

Maan : yeah thats why u r in a hospital.

Just then the doc came.

Doc : There u are Mr. Khurana! I appreciate your concern. Lekin agar wife se itna pyar karte he to unhe is haalat me zyada travel mat karne dena..

Maan : kis haalat? kya hua ? wats wrong..

Doc :Relax Mr. Khurana nothing to worry. Infact its a gud news...ur family is goin to have a new member in a few months..

It was pure bliss that he felt at the moment. His life felt complete...yet again a gift from his love. He could already see his complete perfect family. His heart rushed to meet his shona.

He sat next to her in the bed.

Maan : i told u mishty..that i cnt leave you alone for a second..see wat u have done..

Geet : mene kya kiya he??

Maan : acha kuch bhi nhe kiya huh??

She blushed..

Maan : we r goin to be parents again..our Maanvi will get a baby sister..

Geet : baby sister?? apko kaise pata?? aur jab ek beti he humari to next to beta hoga na...ha maana ki humari beti bilkul apney papa ki carbon copy he phir bhi...ek gabru jawan to chahiye na..ek angry young boy...

Maan : wo to dekha jayega...philhaal ap apna khayal rakhiye...

Geet hugged him lovingly.


Their life was so much filled with happiness... After all that they went through now their life is calm peaceful and full of love. Its happiness everywhere...


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PRECAP : Maan - Dev face off... 😎

Edited by madhubala123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it
Geet is preg
Want negative to be out og deir lifr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update loved it ...hope maaneet problems solved soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update..
geet is pregnant...wow.
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update..
loved it..
offcourse maanvi shuld be like her dad...
aww..msk telling a story was too cute...
geet in hospital...i was so scared with the precap..
huff..its a good news..
waiting for more maaneet moments..
plss dear is dev ka jaldi kuch kro...
continue soon..
moni..
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oopsi
bada wala sholli 4 not relying before
was busy in my bros' marriage na😆😆
oo
now TIA wala comment😉😃

part 66😃
mere maanu n geet ne itna hard work kiya
toh hight tak toh jana hi tha haina
bt those bad gadhe people y cant they leave my maaneet alone
n wt is their plan
babaji inn logo ko akal dena
nhi toh maanu ke punches toh mil hi jaye haina😉😉😆
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part 67
annie is r8 maan toh maan beti baap re baap
lvd maani
maanu n story 😲
world eight wonder😆😆
bt anything 4 his princess haina😃😛
bad people's plan failed
maanu koi gazar muli hai kya jo aiwe hi kha jayege😆😆
bt to destroy maanu they can stoop very law n geet ko target bnanae ki soch rhe hai babaji
manu chodna mat unko
geet preggy again wow
wt a good news
lvd the update
precap- waiting


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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awsm update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeah!!!! Another baby on the way...but hope this dev - ansh - abhay fiasco ends soo

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