Arshi:- 'Kuch to tha Rabata' Thread two link pg 1

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Hello all this is my 1st
FF 😊the concept was in my mind for long but was not sure or should I say I
couldn't find enough courage to move ahead but now I m gonna share it pls bear
with me as its my 1st attempt so pls do like and comment I have
almost completed almost but it needs to b re-read and chapter distribution so I
will try to update ASAP for me n further much delay m gona start...

IMPORTANT NOTE FOR NEW READERS

one thing i want to ask u guys please keep with me u may find it easy to guess what had happened as i purposely didnt let everything hidden but what really happened is yet to reveal whether its bad or worse just stay and read Plus this is a reality based ff

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Intro

All characters r same and all the incidents are almost same except some'. Payal and bua ji don't love khsushi much the reason is becoz shashi ji always treated her more dear than Payal'. shyaam n khushi didn't met in lukhnow it was some police men who saved khushi from goons. Khushi got job in AR because of her friend's preetu's fianc n all other incidents as u know m not describing the scenes which I changed in details so giving a brief description shyaam met Khushi in RM and fell in love or lust coz her beauty n bubbly nature. Khushi unaware of this fact treat him as his brother'Shashi's shop was sold out because he was unable to repay the loan. Khushi and Payal brought their parents to Dehli'.On the day of payash wedding when shyaam saw Arnav behaving a bit different towards khushi he sensed that he is going to propose her so he decided to show his feelings and then all things happened just as in drama except tht Arnav asked khushi tht she will take all the blame on herself of this sudden marriage that she wanted to marry him the very moment as payash. She did as were asked and got a slap fro garima but the most sad incident which happened was the attack of Shashi as a result of which his half body got paralyzed. Both the families consider khushi for this '. When she went for pagphera to her home they treated her bad and insulted her. She ran to the room of her babu ji who was sleeping and sat down on the floor near his bed and hold his hand and start weaping and in a trance she spoke all the truth of her forced marriage when she felt the grip of his father hand on her hand. She looked towards her father and she was shocked to see that his father's face was drenched in tears . so thts it so the remaining scenes and incidents will b described in upcoming chapters plus there will b flash backs full of inner feelings

Prologue page 1

Chapter 1 Page 1

Precap 4 Chapter 2 Page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3150216/arshi-kuch-to-tha-rabata-thread-two-link-pg-1?pn=2

Chapter 2-A Page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3150216/arshi-kuch-to-tha-rabata-thread-two-link-pg-1?pn=2

Chapter 2-b

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3150216/arshi-kuch-to-tha-rabata-thread-two-link-pg-1?pn=4

Chapter 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3150216/arshi-kuch-to-tha-rabata-thread-two-link-pg-1?pn=8

Chapter 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/63800282

Chapter 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/63962411


Chapter 6

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3150216&TPN=23�


Imp note

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64660504


CHAPTER 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64794705

chapter 8


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65029656

Chapter 9


chapter 12
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PROLOGUE

"Have u asked her about anyone in her family" asked the head nurse to the junior

She is saying she has no one" the nurse replied

But we need a sign on the papers n her condition is not good"

She is saying she will do it herself

Ok let me talk to doctor"

She left for the room of doctor n knocked it

Come in"

Sir the patient in emergency no 2 saying she don't have any relative so she will sign her papers herself"

Doctor was really worried about it as it would b a police case n he didn't want any mess in his career but he also knew tht the patient's condition was not in a state where he can argue or reject her signature so he asked to let the girl sign those documents stating tht I fully understood the risk of this operation n I m giving my permission to do it"

The head nurse took the paper to the patient n told her to sign. When she was signing the papers she was still for time after writing her name but then completed the sign with a grief sorrow on her face n after signing she held her head on pillow. Nurse took the papers n saw the sign n again saw the poor creature laying on bed" she was a pure beauty except for her color which was turning from pale to white due to blood lose. She was such a fragile creature n after wht had happened to her n her condition the nurse was terrified for the 1st time in her life tht may b she wont b able to pass through the surgery. She again look at the paper n saw her sign n read it a bit loud

"Khushi Kumari"

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sorry guys it was supposed to be khushi kumari and by mistake i typed gupta will tell u reason later

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Chapter 1

The doctor asked the nurses to start preparation for the surgery and asked them to take a sample of Khushi's blood to match with blood in blood bank of the hospital. Khushi was exhausted n feeling her body numb coz of the amount of blood lose. She wasn't able to stop her mind from replaying them again n again to get the meanings out of them. It was just the same day's morning when she was feeling so happy tht she was feeling herself on cloud 9. today her Arnav ji was coming back after almost 4 months. Though her n his family hadn't forgiven her wholeheartedly yet but she was sure they will forgive her now for sure. But Arnav ji had forgiven her and she was very happy. Even though she was feeling some change in his behavior whenever she had called him coz he didn't call her himself but she was so much happy tht she didn't even bother to realize it n consider it just as a too much bussy routine for him as he was bussy establishing his new branch in Dubai. It had took more time then Arnav ji had estimated but even then it didn't matter to Khushi coz she knew tht it was important. The whole morning she was bussy in cooking all the dishes which her husband loved ignoring the comments of Mami ji who was taunting her as usual. She had done the cooking task just before the noon it took much time coz other ppl was also using kitchen for their cooking n plus she was giving extra attention to make perfect dishes the most important n tiring was KHEER which took almost two hours to pass to the standard which Arnav ji liked. It was the time when he was about to reach home she rushed towards her room n then bathroom she took a bath n then wore the red churidar Arnavji has gifted her alongwith many other dresses n stuff just before going to dubai. Their 6 months contract marriage had just almost one month left but he has promised her that he would tell both the families about his and her relation and the reason behind contract marriage and that they would re-marry with all rituals and blessings of both families. She did the minimal makeup as usual n left the room but when she reached living room she was unable to find Arnav ji . none of the other family members were present as they were gone to pooja in a nearby temple on Anjali's demand. She asked HP where was he. HP told that Arnav sahib has gone to office straight from airport. She was sad n decided to wait for Arnav in the living room n switch on the tv. She was bussy in her daily soap tht she didn't noticed tht someone sat beside her. Suddenly she felt a hand on her waist. She was shocked n she turned towards the person n her eyes were shocked to see SHYAM JEEJA Ji sitting beside her n make herself lean on with his hands holding her shoulder n waist tightly that she flinched in pain and tried her best to move couldn't move coz her delicate body was unable to move his harsh n strong grip. She closed her eyes. Just then the main door opened with a bang n Arnav came inside looking furious like hell.

Her thoughts were snaped by a junior nurse who seemed to b liking this little girl infront of her laying almost lifeless n who wasn't shouting in pain as doctor had given her heavy dose of pain killer injection. She asked her :- who r u?

But she remained with her mouth open with shock when she heard her reply

"I M A SL*T" a hollow dreamy voice came of her mouth before they took her in operation theater


Heres chapter 1 will post chapter 2 soon

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amazing sweets... ur brilliant writter.. so senti... pour soul khushi.. m waiting for nxt prt already... n takecare of urself..get well soon..:))
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Originally posted by: TINA!

very different n unique!

Thank you Hun
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Originally posted by: Mariam.Ejaz

ouch!!! poor khushi!!!

yes hun she is in this story
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Originally posted by: MyPrinceBarun

amazing sweets... ur brilliant writter.. so senti... pour soul khushi.. m waiting for nxt prt already... n takecare of urself..get well soon..:))

thanx so much hun yup it is quite senti thanx for praising yup i m a bit fi9 now hun love ya sis
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PRECAP

Juhi:-" I m sorry if m getting personal but I heard from my sources tht on 5th july something terrible happened to ur life may we know wht was it"

At this particular question khushi's eyes become dark as there was no life no hope in them n different voices echoed in her mind "SL*T","BI**CH","W**RE", "GHATIYA" "DARO NAHI DARLING", " HAMAIN BHI KHIDMAT KA MOUQA DO", "BACHAO" n she replied in a hollow voice as she was speaking from a far dessert ground

"I DON'T KNOW WHT U R TALKING ABT IT MIGHT B THT UR SOURCES R WRONG"

Juhi felt tht there was something more then mysterious in this girl n she felt herself more keen to know abt her

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Chapter 2-A

It was a pitch black night. There was not a single light. A girl was running on the road bare-footed. Her feet were bleeding but she didn't bothered by them. It was like she don't even felt the pain. Her mind was concentrating on running and running at the higest possible speed. She was afraid of dark she wanted to search for shelter and light so she ran fast. Suddenly sound of running feet started from behind her. She was terrified to death. She increased her speed. She has to find some place to hide but how was this possible as there was no light. She ran for dear life. Her heart jumped with joy finally she saw a place where there was a small light and a person was also standing. "I am safe now" she thought and ran towards the place. She reached there and start panting "K.. kia hu..humain ap k yahan panah mil sakti hai hum musibat main hain'."

She said while catching her breaths'the person who had his back towards her turned and said with a poison coated sweetness "Kion nahi Khushi ji"

Khushi screamed to saw him and again started to run as she knew that there was now one person addition to the previous followers. Everything was black again. She cant see where she was going but she ran and ran and ran till she hit a muscular chest. She felt peace in her heart the touch was familiar. Her heart was at peace as she was safe now. She looked above to see the person face. Yes it was him "Arnav ji" she hugged him but what happens next made her heart beat fast with fear "don't touch me u wh*re." A voice came from behind her "aap kitni ghatia hain Khushi ji" and then it was again black. She felt the footsteps coming closer she start running again wondering y her Arnav ji said so she has to find him tell him everything but at the moment she has to run. But though she was running ahead but the road seemed to b moving backwards she tried again and again but she was going backwards to the dangerously becoming close footsteps and finaly she was among a gang circling her, playing with her dupata and throughing and catching her as she was a ball. She was pleading. She was praying. She was weeping. Suddenly a voice small but lovely came MAA.. she turned and everything disappeared and she saw a very small baby dressed like fairy in her fav. Pink color was lying on the road facing her. As soon as there eyes met she gave her a cute smile. The girl's heart jumped with joy when the baby again said MAA. She wonder how such a small creature say a word she began to move towards the baby when out of no where came a guy and he through a big stone on the baby.

Nooo

Khushi woke up screaming and panting. She saw this dream again. She felt herself helpless and started weeping hugging her legs

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New York

Hello and a very good evening to u all my viewers '. Welcome to a brand new episode of ur fav. Show celebrity corner and as we promised to all our viewers that we will invite the famous writer Miss KK to our show so here we r. I know u all must b surprised coz she had never been seen on tv or newspaper and she is quite strict with this policy of her but I somehow managed to corner her as u know m juhi and I can do anything so here I m with my guest who is my fav. Writer Miss Khushi Kumari I mean KK

Juhi:-Hello Mam its pleasure having u on my show n thank u very much for giving my show the Honor to having u as our guest

Khushi:- thank u Juhi for having me in ur show n u can call me Khushi.

Juhi:- Thank u Khushi.. n now no more of this thank u n now we should start the interview I guess

Both of them start giggling

Juhi:- So tell me Khushi who inspired u to become a writer

Khushi:-I dun know may b my own life but the biggest reason was to earn livelihood

She said it with a smile on her face but the smile on Juhi's face was vanished for some time coz of such a truth but she came out of shocked at the very next moment

Juhi:- wao m amased at ur ability of saying the truth anyways' my next question is how does it feels to b famous n have lots of fans

Khushi:- it feels good ( without any proudness in her tone)

Juhi:- (who was not much satisfied with this ) phir bhi kuch to special feel hota ho ga

Khushi:- special to nahi han kabhi kabhi heran hoti hun tht I m famousn whether I deserve it or not

Juhi:- of cource u deserve it so tell me something abt ur life

Khushi:- well its nothing special in my life Juhi just as a simple girls life with lots of ups n downs

N with tht she laughed a bit but one thing which Juhi felt her eyes were not matching her laugh they were emotionless

Juhi:- phir bhi khushi kuch to batayi na for ur fans who were eargerly waiting to know abt u n they r 1st getting a chance in our channel so I dun want to miss a chance u know

Khushi:- (laughing) so u r insisting so tht it would b ur show to give information to my fans 1st hand"

Juhi:- Koi shak (again both laughed) now pls tell na

Khushi watched her with a loving smile n thought this girl is just like me bubbly n know how should she deal but with this very thought other memories also flashed through her mind which made her smile disappear n again she was emotionless Juhi who was examining her was 1st happy to see a hint of smile in her eyes too alongwith her face n there was a emotion of love for her too but she was astonished to see that the next moment after showing a hint of sorrow her eyes were again emotionless n she was wondering how can she manage to go back to her mask so fast. Before recording the interview she has investigated a lot abt her n find out tht there r only two persons who visit her flat n with whom she had been seen other then this nothing could b found abt her she also tried to take some information from those two people but all they told was tht khushi is a very nice loving girl and they denied to tell her more"

Khushi:_ ok so I was born in Lakhnow my parents died in a car accident when I was 8 years old I have completed my masters recently coz due to some problems I couldn't studied after my intermediate and now here I m sitting infront of u n there is nothing more for me to tell u this is Khushi Kumari ( she said this with a small smile)

Juhi:- Hmm ok though m not satisfied but no problem I guess u don't want to discuss ur personal life

So heres my next question tell us abt the two days in ur life one the most sad n the other the most happy

Khushi :- (after thinking a bit) the most sad day of my life is when my parents died n the most happy day was when my 1st book was a success"

Juhi:- I m sorry if m getting personal but I heard from my sources tht on 5th july something terrible happened to ur life may we know wht was it"

At this particular question khushi's eyes become dark as there was no life no hope in them n different voices echoed in her mind "SL*T","BI**CH","W**RE", "GHATIYA" "DARO NAHI DARLING", " HAMAIN BHI KHIDMAT KA MOUQA DO", "BACHAO" n she replied in a hollow voice as she was speaking from a far dessert ground

I DON'T KNOW WHT U R TALKING ABT IT MIGHT B THT UR SOURCES R WRONG

Juhi felt tht there was something more then mysterious in this girl n she felt herself more keen to know abt her

Chapter 2-b

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3150216/arshi-kuch-to-tha-rabata-thread-two-link-pg-1?pn=4

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SO THAT was chapter 2 A its kinda long so i splitted it in two parts plz silent readers pls comment and like m posting it as i have put my heart writing it so plz show me whether u liked or not...

plus i want to say to u guys its my own imagination and concept and any similarity with any other ff though i havent found any such till now anyways any similarity is may b coincidence and pls dont copy it on facebook pages without informing thanx love ya all readers and writers

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