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Posted: 12 years ago
awww dear!!! i loved it!! i really liked the concept and 1st part...right now running late for college.. would be back and read more and comment more...😃

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update soon we r waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting!!!!!!!
I am actually biting my nails u know!!!!!!
I am so addicted to ur ff, I live the concept. And the way u r taking the storyline is very nice! U r not bragging the story and that's what keeps me glued to ur ff!
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Thanks for the pm. Can't wait to read the guilt ridden redemption
of Arnav.
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read ur ff... i must say its commendable.. the storyline and the events r shocking yet interesting.!
wud luv to read more..cont soon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MastiMuskaan

awww dear!!! i loved it!! i really liked the concept and 1st part...right now running late for college.. would be back and read more and comment more...😃


MUSKAAN




Originally posted by: ankitbaka

update soon we r waiting





Originally posted by: cutiepreet

just read ur ff... i must say its commendable.. the storyline and the events r shocking yet interesting.!

wud luv to read more..cont soon..!



Originally posted by: vtan

Thanks for the pm. Can't wait to read the guilt ridden redemption
of Arnav.



Originally posted by: KeyCat

Eagerly waiting!!!!!!!
I am actually biting my nails u know!!!!!!
I am so addicted to ur ff, I live the concept. And the way u r taking the storyline is very nice! U r not bragging the story and that's what keeps me glued to ur ff!



Thank u so much all
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Posted: 12 years ago

heres the update sorry couldnt do proof read and color change i m sorry for late update but i was not fine hope u like it

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The guards,the plants, the walls,the doors in short every single living or non living beings of RM witnessed the strange scene which never happened before. A man who used to enter with pride' who used to walk like he own the whole world'. Who used to shout on others who used to make people dance on his tones'. Who always believed there is no such force as Almighty existed' was entering with head and shoulders down like a defeated man. He always thought he can never b wrong but he was wrong and that was the reason he was a defeated man. He climbed the stairs n went towards his room. His inside was aching with pain. He wanted to end his life. From the very 1st meeting he did nothing but misunderstand her, treated her nothing more than a piece of sh*t and now he felt nothing but hate for himself. His past was playing like a movie and he wanted to see one single moment where he had treated her like a living being. He clutched his hair in fits. Just then the door opened. "Chotay u r back. Come here I have brought food for u"

"M not hungry Di. Please leave I want to be alone" he didn't want to hurt his di at this condition of hers. She could hurt herself and baby. So he said politely.

" but chotay u didn't have ur dinner" she said

"I had it di when I was in meeting we had sandwiches" he lied "but u leave the dish here I will eat when I feel hunger. Is that ok with u" only he knew how hard it was for him to behave normaly.

"its ok chotay .. if u don't want it now but do eat when u want and take ur medicine as well" she left he room and Arnav locked it. He went back to bed and laid down on it while his brain took him to the past. He remembered how badly he treated her when she accidentally came to his show. How he tried to ruin her life by providing the video clipping to media, how he shouted at her in his office, how he let her fall, how he ordered her to manage the parking lot in heavy rain, how he used to throw her out of his car whenever he get a chance and on top of that how he used to let out all his frustration of being attracted towards her on her. His mind started playing the scene of the day when he forcefully married her .

Flashback

It was the day of Payash marriage. Everyone was so happy. He was so happy. Gupta family had arrived and he was planning to confess his love to Khushi when Jija ji called him saying there was someone asking about him. He left saying to Khushi we need to talk later. But later he found out about his di missing and then his di came back with bruises and band aids attached to her face arms and every visible part of body. She told him about her accident. He was worried and then her Di said those words " Chotay if u ever felt like saying something to someone say it right away before its too late" yes that's what he was going to do. He was going to confess his love. He came out of his Di's room and started searching for Khushi. there she was climbing the stairs towards terrace. He walked towards her when someone stopped her and started conversation about his new project. Soon he excused himself and started climbing the stairs. But when he opened the door to terrace his whole word was drowned. He felt the floor beneath his feet moving. There stood His Khushi in the arms of HIS jija ji who was confessing his love for her. And the he heard the most shocking words of his life when she told him to leave Anjali. He moved from there and went towards his SUV. He drove aimlessly and wept his heart out. But after weeping the man who opened the eyes was no more Arnav he was again ASR the ruthless he had planed how to save her di and that's how he married Khushi forcefully blackmailing her that if she didn't agree he would let her jiji suffer a broken marriage again. How shattered she felt at his words and agreed to marry him. That was the beginning of hell for Khushi. He told her that he would put all the blame of sudden marriage on her and that she had to agree. She agreed and that's exactly he did. He told everyone that they both were in love and it was Khushi who insisted to get married right at the moment so he had no choice. He saw how rudely his and her family treated her but he was not interested in this all and left the place. After two weeks of their marriage one day he came back from office and saw Mami ji scolding Khushi for nothing big. She had her head down and listened to every word without saying anything. It had become her habbit to say nothing just doing and listening everything. It pricked his heart. Instead of going to his room he came towards the back yard. He leaned against a wall listening t o the sounds of birds coming back to their nests. He was feeling peace after so long time. That's when he heard someone talking in the nearby window. His feet moved on their own accord out of curiosity and he peaked inside the room. There stood shyaam smiling at a photo while speaking to himself.

" Why Khushi ji why did u reject my love. Why did u marry Arnav. I loved u the moment I saw ur innocent beauty. Ur eyes ur smile ur laugh everything made me forget about Rani Sahiba. How much I tried to touch u before but u never let me. U always ran away from me n u love Arnav. I will not allow this as I cant see u with anyone else that's y I told a lie to him that we both are in love. U r mine, only mine."

Arnav was shocked. He couldn't believe himself. He remembered how Khushi"s face turned pale on his proposal. He was remembering each and every moment. Thts y she was so hurt at the time when he said he hated her(at the night of her kitchen poja) and thts y she told him tht he wasn't worth for anyones love and now he felt hatred for himself too. "Shyaam just stay there" he shouted from the window and with force climbed from it in room. He rushed towards him n crabbed his colars with force

"how dare u. how dare u lied to me u son of a b***ch." He punched his face. " because of ur lie I married her forcefully. Because of ur lie she is suffering. I so wish to throw out of this house but just for Di just for her m forced to bear ur presence. But let me warn u don't u even dare to look at my wife with ur lusty eyes" with that he snatched Khushi's photo from his hand. He looked at the Khushi in pic her smile her shinning eyes. Everything was lost. She don't smile anymore. Her eyes don't shine anymore. He vowed to himself that he would bring back the lost khushi. after eating dinner he took hold of her wrist and came in his room holding her hand. He made her sit on the bed and he himself sat down near her feet. "Arnav ji what happened had I done something wrong. Please forgive me I wont repeat whatever mistake I have done but please don't let my jiji suffer." She begged him and it pricked his heart further. He looked above at the angelic face of his wife. "Khushi" but before he could complete he sat down beside him touching his feet. "please forgive me for whatever mistake I have made but p..pp'please do..don..dont made my jiji su.. suff.. suffer." She said sobbing badly "I will wake up more early if u want I will clean the whole house. If its not necessary I will not take rest whole day. Any thing u ask I will do but I cant see jiji suffer" she was speaking while sobbing and joining her hands now infront of his eyes. He tried to speak again but she cut it off. " please arnav ji please don't" he didn't let her complete n kissed her full on the lips. He kissed her for sometime and it was feeling good but he had to inform her about his mistake. He pulled back and look at her face. Her eyes were close tears running down her cheeks but there wasn't any panic. He called her name and made her look in his eyes and told everything. After telling everything he looked back in her eyes there was pain but no anger. He said " Khushi I am sorry for everything but I just did it for di. If u find in urself the courage to forgive me please I need it. I promise I will not misunderstand u again. I will give u love and respect as I love u. I don't know when I fell in love with u but I loved u since a long time. That was the reason of my breakup with Lavanaya. Please forgive me for my mistakes." He felt panic coz she wasn't replying. Why she is not replying. "Khushi see I am sorry please say something punish me love please do whatever u want to do. Khushi I love u please listen to me say something. Please say something" he was panicking out and closed his eyes when he felt soft hand on his check. "u love me" she asked like a drowning man tried to get hold of something to save himself from drowning

"yes I love u I love u very much"

then y did u do this to me" she asked in pain

" I am sorry shyaam lied to me and now that I have found his truth my hand are bound coz of my Di I cant do anything with him." He said helplessly. " I need u Khushi I need ur support please forgive me and give me another chance please Khushi"

"I forgive u though u hurt me so much but right now I need u too. No one loves me anymore. Everyone hates me coz of u. but still I need u I need someone's love to survive to live. Let it b my husbands love." She said smilingly. She looked in his eyes which were filled with love only love and her heart swelled with joy "he loves me only me" he bend his head towards her and touched her lips gently and she gave in. He picked her up in his arms and made her laid down on bed and then both made love and felt peace in each others arms.

END OF FLASHBACK

The sound of alarm made him jerk from his thoughts. It was morning and all night he was awake thinking of past


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Chapter 11
Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the PM. nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely and awesome.
The guards,the plants, the walls,the doors in short every single living or non living beings of RM witnessed the strange scene which never happened before. A man who used to enter with pride… who used to walk like he own the whole world…. Who used to shout on others who used to make people dance on his tones…. Who always believed there is no such force as Almighty existed… was entering with head and shoulders down like a defeated man. He always thought he can never b wrong but he was wrong and that was the reason he was a defeated man.
awesome and superb writing.
really loved it.
but that was a small mistake, after that he did big blunders, which are no where to be redeemed.
what he did to kushi is the worst. enemy will also think it over to do such a thing to a women.
har kisiko uske karma ka fahl mitahi hai.
but what kushi did to suffer like this.
now eagerly waiting to see what you have planned for the fantastic FF.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Have sent PM to some today but have severe pain in leg so others will b sent tomorrow
plus will reply to u all ur comments


plus add me for further pms i cant send pm to every single person so if u want pms pls do add mei meant to say single PMS and sorry i had sent twice or thrice the same msg
Edited by Farwa_Ibrahim - 12 years ago

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