BAARISH- MAANEET FF #2 Part41 - pg 6

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I m Roopali
n welcome to the second thread of Baarish.
Thanks to all who have liked n commented till now.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congos for new thread sissy:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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on the new thread roops...😳
waiting for the update
and dun be sad...everything will be okay
tu tension na le
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread
waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4

This Part is speciallly dedicated to rsroopali thats me n poojaaddis thats Pooja my best friend

muahhh luv u lotsss n im always there 4 you n u also alwaysss be for me


Past

Coffee Plantation


Maan "Yesss Geet Handa I used you to satisfy myself n its not the first time im doing it'.I have done it with sooo many girls before you sooo it realllyyy doesn't matter to me what happens to you'.."


Geet "I reallly wonder if you are really loved me or that all was also a drama to make me fall for you"


Maan "Comon Geet, Love????? Are you serious????

When I told you I used you to satisfy my needs'. Are you reallly soo dumb to think that Love has any chance in MSK's life its just Lust n always will be Lust'"


Geet "I curse you Maan that even after knowing you love a person you will never be able to get it'." N stands there having tears n slowly turns n goes away n it starts raining heavily''

Maan enters the hotel totallly broken but he had to make himself strong n he couldn't break down at the moment someone else needed him n he was her only support n some how controls his heart n sees the person crying her eyes out as if is lost alone in this whole world...

Geet got an call from her Dad that she should reach her wedding venue as soon as possible n Geet just forgot abt her heart break thinking smthing happened to her family tht her Dad was calling her with such urgency.

As Geet reached the Hotel n was shocked to see Maan standing there hugging the girl n her Dad next to them

Rajeev "Young Man wese tumaharii choice haii bohat achiii'. Keep it up"

(Young Man by the way ur choice is vry nice.. keep it up)


Maan "Thank you Sir, aab apko apna promise yaad hai naaa humariii shaadi aapko hii karvani haiii"

(Thank you sir , now you have to fillful ur promise of getting us both married)

Rajeev "Haan Young Man mujhe yaad haiii afterall Capt. Rajeev Handa kaa Promise thaa marke bhii puraa karenga"

(Yes young man i remember my promise afterall its Capt. Rajeev Handa's promise even after dieing he would fillful it)


Maan "Sirr yesii baathe kyu karthe hoo ????? apko tho mere bachoo kii bhi shaadi karvanii haiii''."

(Sirr why are you talking all this ???you have to get even my kids married )


N hugged Rajeev getting emotional n he saw tears in the girl's eyes n he wiped it n kissed her forehead n excused himself n the girl from Rajeev'


Geet was standing far away seeing all this'''


Rajeev "Areee Geet tum waha khadiii hoke kya kar rahii hooo???? Tum thoda late hogayii warna mein tumhe Maan kii Girlfriend se milaa detha mein inkii College walii bohat sariii pics dekhii thi aur Maan ke wallet mein bhi iski photo dekhi thi par sab poto mein uski innocence nahi dekhthi jo actual mein haiii"

(Geet why are you standing there???? you came abot late otherwise u would hv met Maan's GF i have seen soo many of their college picss n even in Maan's wallet i have seen her pic but the pics fail to depeict the actual innicence of this girl)


Geet "Thik haii Dad mein phir kabhi mil lungiii, par aapne mujhe itnii urgencyy mein kyun bulaa tha ????"

"Its okkk Dad i will meet some other time but why did you call me soo urgentyyy)


Rajeev "Areee tumhe Maan kii Girlfriend se hii milane ke liye'.. becharii rorahii thiii Maan kahi nahi mil raha tha kar ke woh tho meine uskii pic dekii thi tho pechan liyaaa"

(I called u so that u can meet Maan's GF onlyyy .poor girl was crying her eyes out becoz she didnt find Maan but it was gud that i had seen her pic that i recognized her)


Geet "Thik hai Dad meriii kuch dress fitting bakii haii mein thodii der mein ghar ajavungiii"

(Okkk Dad i have some dress fitting left i will come home in some time)

n went away shedding her tears'.


Present


So was the situation today when Geet saw Maan hugging Rajeev n then Maan hugging the girl n kissing her forehead n a tear just made way from her eyes but this time the tear didn't fall on the ground but instead on someone's finger n he just cupped Geet's face


Preet "Geet '..Jaan kya huaa tum ro kyun rahii hooo????"

(Geet. jaan what happened. why are u crying ?????)


Geet "Kuch nahi Preet kuch yaadein yaad agayii"

(Nothing Preet just remembered some old memories)


Preet "Geet yaadein yaad karke muskurana chahiyee'' ronaa nahii chahiyeee"

(Geet remembering old memeories we have to smile n not cry)


Geet "Kabhi kabhi yeh aasuu hii nahi rukthe jithna muskuranee kii koshish karoo yeh akhosee beh hii jathe haiii jasee ke tumaharii akhoo se uss kii yaad mein'."

(Sometimes these tears dnt stop how much ever yiu try to smile...these tears make way from our eyes as it does frm ur eyes remembering her)


Preet "Kya karuu Geet Pyaar bhi tho uthna hii kiya tha naa uskooo''"

(What do i do Geet i also loved her her that much naa)

n tears made way frm Preet's eyes also


Geet "Dekha meine tumhe bhi emotional kar diyaa"

(See i made you also emotional)

n wipes away the tears from Preet's cheeks


Precap-

Present -

Preet running behind Avanii who had tears in her eyes seeing Preet

Edited by rsroopali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on the new thread
awesome update
poor maan he is also broken but not showing it
n geet she is so heart broken seeing her dad hugging maan n that girl
waiting for the next part

yayyy im first
anyways i'll only be first to read ur update but this is the first time im first in commenting also 😆
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on new thread
i read the first part its awesome
waiting for next
maan behaved like an ass
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new thread..I hope both get their love..
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