Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@roops, wardah, swati, poo chan
haan haaan
udao mera mazak🥺
kabhi mujhse milkar to dekho
pata chal jayega ke mere innocence ke baare mein😛
aur waise bhi
yeh DQ giri to
tum logon ke saath ka asar hai
so me not to be blamed at all😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 5

Present

As Maan came in after changing the tyre Avni took out her hanky n wiped Maan's face n Maan just held d hanky m started singing...


Past

Maan was shocked,surprised and wt not he just started to run behind that car but he was not fast enough and that car zoomed off and Maan holding the hanky folded it n kept it on his neck [Aamir Khan style in Ghulam movie] n started singing Athi kya Khandala to his Mom n drove off to Madikeri thinking of the girl n without anymore mishaps n as he reached his Mom's best friends house, he left his mother and told her that he will come back by evening and zoomed off to the nearby market for timepass.


Present

Preet suddendly stopped the car as Omi was sleeping and it was a deserted road and had a vry beautiful sceneric view.
He came out and brought Geet out and then slowly with care pulling her in his arms and Geet reading his intensions just hugged him and then Preet captured Geet's lips n started kissing her collarbone n then bit her shoulder and as Geet was lost in the moment suddendly she felt some metal touching her neck n she saw a beautiful diamond heart shaped necklace wished her Happy 5th Anniversary Jaan n then Geet thanked him for the gift by giving a even more passionate kiss to Preet n the journey to Madikeri continued.


Past

As Geet was in the shop seeing many diamond pendents for Ash as her bday was just a day away and she had some how sent Ash to some other shop so that she could shop for ash's surprise gift and then after buying the gift she was seeing some heart shaped pendents n as she was trying one pendent.
Guy "Hey thats not suiting you it looks too loud"

Geet just ignored him n went to try some other pendents
Then Geet took a really simple pendent to try

Guy "See its very simple but your face is more brighter than this pendent it looks really low in front on you"

Geet "Hello Mr i never asked your views so why are you bothering me"

Guy "Oh so now im bothering you,just wait a sec n then he asked the shopkeeper if he had mud"

Geet "Nw what do you want to prove with mud"

Guy "Miss im not at fault if you cant recognise me with mud over my face"

Geet "Oh so your that manhole guy "

Maan "Yes im that manhole guy n Hii im Maan Singh Khurana n you are????"

Geet "Hiii im Geet Handa n now can i have my watch n hanky back"

Maan "No u cant have them back"

Geet " Why not its mine "

Maan "It was your but now its a symbol of our love"

Geet "What??? I just saw your face today n wt do you mean by our love.
Just out of humanity i helped you but no road side romeo's like you can never be happy without Troubling girls for timepass"

Maan "Geet enough if im nt telling anything dont mean i cant talk, n for me it was love at first sight u agree or not "

Geet "I will not agree what will you do? hun"

Maan " See our meeting is destiny you like it or not n i promise the next time I meet you I will fill your mang with my blood n tie a Mangalsutra at that very moment. n that is Maan Singh Khurana's Promise"

Geet "Lets see Mr. arrogent"

Maan " surely my Angel"

n Geet just pulled Ash who had just come there when she saw Geet showing her finger to some stranger to the car n Maan saw them going n then it started raining.
Preet's gift

Geet seeing pendents

the loud one


the simple one

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
OMG...me 1st again????😲

yippie...yuuuhooo
oye bally balle...


now cuming to update
geet buying a diamond pendant for me...😲
OMG...luv u sooo much roops...
muuuahh!!!!!😳🤗



maanneet face off...
wonder if maan will keep his promise
hehehe😆
plz update soon!!!😳



Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res yaar, I liked the update, but present khatak raha hai
Maan Geet not together😭
but, I ma loving the crazy Maan of the past😆
curious to know what happened in the past
Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...

seems like both r happy in their lives now...

but somewhere still remember their past...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part! They were so sweet in the past! But in present also they love their parteners,interesting concept!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update::
Loved how man challenged geet in the last part
Wonder how maaneet are gunna be together cuz it luks lyk geet is really happy wiv preet
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
simply awesome
love it
maaneet face of superb
waiting eagerly next one
thnaks 4 pm
lucky DQ geet bought for
yu pendent
537048 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey so dat was a nice update and maan is challenging her dat he will fill her maang and tie mangalsutra waiting to see all dis pls do update soon

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