Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks alot dis made my confusion clear do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful and very descriptive character sketch roops
and the way u described them in those time periods...its wonderful and unique..very different 👏👏👏👏and i loved it except Adi (u knw y)💔😭
dil ke armaan aansuon me beh gaye
hum wafa karke bhi tanha reh gayeee😭

and seriously..me still against maan-avani and geet-preet😃
omi is shooo cute and ur cousin too😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd it
plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n beautiful cs
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOT DONE
CANT SEE MAAN-ANAVI AND GEET-PREET
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the descriptive character sketch
yes it cleared the story to great extent
continue with the updates soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
oyeee ohyeee😉😉 kya character sketch tune likhaa full on 100 on 100...👍🏼👍🏼 its sooo interesting n sme thing refreshingg
wahhh shabbir as preet loved itt❤️❤️
it looks fascinating n looking forward for new twist in storyy ... dude it is different from mungaru male n i think tujhe ye script producers ko deni chaiyye for sequel wt say!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

To all the 23 people who have trust in me n my story
n thanks a lottt tht u commenteddd n liked ittt
i owe u guys this updatee
it is totalllyyy dedicated to all d people who read my this phita hua FF
u guys rock who make me feel so gud
thank alottt
now enough me geeting too much sentiii
this part has a surprise for uuu
n i want long updatesss guysss
will be waitinggg
hope u like d Surpriseee

Part 34


Past


Geet went to Maan n just held his hand as if assuring him that Im with you dnt worry just tell me what is troubling you and then when she didn't feel Maan responding to her. She followed Maan's grace n saw Maan intenllyyy looking at a board which says

Geet Handa

Weds

Preet Aluwalia

Geet was shocked for a min as she had forgotten her marriage which was after 4 days but seeing Maan tensed, she decided to lighten his mood abit'..

Geet "Kyaaa asee muu latkayee kadhe ho???"


Maan deep in thoughts "Hmmm"


Geet "Kyaaa hmmm?????mujhe shaadi karni nahi haiii?????"


Maan "Hmmm'."


Geet just gets annoyed by his Hmmm n pinches his hand


Maan "Ouchhh" n he is shocked'..

"What D '' Kya kar rahiii hooo Geet?????"


Geet "Kyaaa Wt D '. mujhe tho badii baathe kar rahe the uss din ke shaadi karunga'bache ka naam tak decide kar liya tha na.."


Maan "Haan tho, isme pinch karne wali kya baath thi???"


Geet "Tho jab mene yeh kaha ke shaadi nahi karni mujhe se tho apne Hmmm kaha'.."


Maan "Who tho mene baath suni nahii issi liyeee'.ek min tumne abhi kyaaa kaha???"


Geet "Kyaaa?????"


Maan "Tumne mujhe yeh pucha ke mein tumse shaadi'.."


Geet "Tum tho duffer hooo kabhi puchoo ke nahii tho meine hiii puch liyaaa"


Maan "Mein tumhe duffer dikh tha hu???"


Geet "Oyeee apni yeh badi badi akhene neech karoo n haan tumne abhi thak mujhe shaadi leyii pucha nahi haiii tho tum duffer ho'."


Maan "Par mein ne tumhe bola tha ke agalii baar agar milgayiii tho shaadi kar lunga"


Geet "Haan tho????wo tho phele kii baath thi abhi mein ne I Love You bola uske baad nahi '."making a grumpy face


Maan seeing her grumpy face just went behind Geet n sat down on his knees'..


"Miss Geet Handa, Im Maan Singh Khurana, a very happy go lucky guy who may not have all the money in world to buy you all the things but will surely not miss to fufill all ur cute demands n I may not be the Best husband in the world but will surely be the best one for you N may not always keep u happy may give u some pain n may also get angry but will also make sure tht at the end of each day u will sleep with a smiling face'.


N now as my knees are paining I will not prolong my proposal n just ask u

Will You become Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana?"


Geet already had tears seeing his stupid but truthful proposal n sat down on her knees n peaked on his lips n answered on his lips telling


"Yesss I accept ur Proposal n will accept u as Mr.Geet Handa" n thy kiss turned to be more passionate with them sitting on the floor in each other's embrace.

Precap-

Maaneet n Shaadi Shopping


Note Pg-119


Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me 1st yippieee me 1stt...🥳
haila itna shocking part ke baad itna pyaara haiyee😍

and this is the best yet the stupidest proposal ever roops..🤗
awww this maan is sooo nice yaar
and geet...umm she is trying to make him feel btr
but i knw andar hi andar she is worried too!!!!!


uff me cant wait for nxt
abhi story is getting more interesting!!!!!!😳
agla update kab?
ye to bahut jaldi aa gaya
can i expect another 1 fasssttt???????
😍
Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Comment tomorrow…after my exam if i survive...

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