Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 35

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SahSah thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Those are lovely updates as always
love emmm
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Posted: 13 years ago

...😛.
. 4 PM me...
😃
4 ur ..👏.
..ur updates..really dear...
......
tons of 4 u dear...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Part Roops
❤️ Prachi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 14


Maan just hugged Geet tightly realising hw much she had suffered in her childhood n promised himself 2 fill her life with more n more luv.

Then after some time Geet stopped crying n dozed off on Maan's lap n Maan was just carressingher hairs to sooth her n eventually he also dozed off.

Next Morning

Geet's sleep was disturbed by the sunlight n as she got up she was shocked to see that she was sleeping on Maan's lap n thn she remembered last nights events n she cursed herself for becoming so emotional n telling Maan the past which no one knows n she just ran away to her room knowing that if she stays there Maan will ask sm more questions of her past.

after sometime Maan wakes up feeling no weight on his lap n as he opens his eyes he doesnt see Geet n assumes she went away to avoid him as he knows a part of her past.

After getting dressed up Maan like always is helping in the arragements of the marriage n 1st thing under it was scrubbing n cleaning of the outside pathway where all the cars will b parked n guests will come in from so he was dressed only in a vest n 3/4th black cargo n looked sooo sexyyy that all the maids n some friends of Geet instead of finishing d work were standing in a corner n ogling at Maan as he was ordering the workers to scrub properly n also talking to Devdas whom he had kept in a baby carrying bag n tied on his chest to let the girls imagine him hw thy liked bcoz he had seen thm ogling at him.

Seeing all her friends ogling at Maan Geet became more angry n irritated.
Geet-"Dad im going to the railway station to recieve some of my friends"

Rajeev-"Beta who all are coming now"

Geet-"Garav jiju n Vidya dii"

Rajeev-"aree my army officer beta is cominggg"

Geet-"Viren bhai n Jeevika bhabhi"

Naina-"kyaaa Jeevika is halat mein yaha arahi hai??"

Geet-"Mumma mein mana kiya tha lekin usse anaho hai tho mein kya karooo bhai bhi pagal hogaye hai usske saath re kar"

Naina-"Bas bas mujhe patha hai tunee hi zidd ki hogiii n kabardar mere bete aur bahu ko pagal bola tho"

Geet-"Thik hai mumma nahi bolugi apke ladle bete aur bahu ko kuch bhi baath hi nahi karoogi ek tho itni der se areehai air anese phele hii mujhe daath kilvarahii hai"

Naina-"Virat aur Maanvi nahi arrahai hai"

Geet-"Aree Maa usss bhukad ko kyu yaad kar rahi hooo n vese bhi voo Honeymoon par gaye haii aur meri shaadi bhi attend nahi kar rahe hai"

Rajeev-"Aur kon kon arahaii betaa"

Geet-"Dr.Mannan/Dev/Arjun"

Rajeev-"Geet itne sarre naam kyun lee rahi hai sidhe sidhe bolna tere boyfriend arahaii"

Maan who was silently seeing this converstation was shocked whn Rajeev told that Geet's boyfriend was coming n here he though that Rajeev was narrow minded.

Geet-"yesss Dad my boyfriend Abhinav is cominggg"

Precap-Maan carried Geet in his arms
Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Plzzz add this id if u want the pms of these ff's

Destiny
Baarish
Iss Paar Yaa Uss Paar
Enchanting maaneet vms
Maaneet vms
Zindagi
Mera phela phela pyaar
Phir Mohabbat

as it is a joint account of me n my sis u will get the pms only if you add the buddy list as this is the last time im sending pms to all 450 of you
Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note-

Hey guys
sorry for the late updates to all my readers but cant help it
im actually dis heartened as i send more thn 450 pms n get less than 50 likes n even less comments
im thinking of closing all my FF's n just be a reader here
plzzz do tell me if my writings are sooo bad that you dnt feel like reading
n yaaa by next week i will let u know if im closing all my ff's
n u may complain abt short or late update
i dnt feel like writing it whn i see such a low response it spiols my mood which inturn results in short n late updates
bear with me plzzz
i will try n finish this ff in next 2 parts cutting down d story
Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES...
--------EDITED------
Me first yeah i m so happy Roops the update was rocking as always
well geet went away cursing herself for telling everything to maan...maan also realized this
well i m really waiting to see aage kya hotha hai
don't get disappointed Roops write for those people who appreciate ur work and yes I have send a buddy request do accept it ok
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was as usual good roops...
ooo maan showing off han...
but me still in love with devdas...
arrey baap re...itne saare guests...
waiting for more...

n dun be sad ok
just write for the 50 ppl who press like n comment!!!!
tht will be satisfactory

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Posted: 13 years ago
woww... its nice😊 only anju mahendroo is missing, dear.😃

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