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Posted: 13 years ago
i feel sad abt naina & maan.i think maan sacrifices his luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
he should have told his intention to the family why to hide if he loved her?
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Posted: 13 years ago
lot of questions still lingering...awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 36


Past


N the word TRUST was just going round n round in his mind.


If he was doing right or whether he was wrong'


As Maan was lost in his dilemma Geet got ready n saw Maan lost in his thoughts standing by the window


She went and hugged him frm back


Geet "Kya hua Maan???? Aap kaha khoyee hue haiii???"


Maan as he didn't want Geet to know abt the talks between him n Geet's Mom


Maan "Kuch nahii Geet'. Mein tho yeh soch raha tha ke tume hamare Suhaag Raat pe kaise kaise positions mein pyaar karuuu'.."


Hearing this Geet just hid her face in Maan's back n moaned Maaannn''..


Maan getting naughty huskily said "Geet abhi se Moan karne kiii practice kar rahiii hooo????"


Geet getting more naughtier *ofcourse how can she let Maan win???* "Nahiii mein tho yeh apni wild fantasies ke baare mein soch rahi thi ke if you can fulfill it'.."


Maan feels offensive "Kyaaa matlab haiii tumharaa'. That I dnt have that much stamina to fulfill all your fantasies????"


Geet "Dekha Maan'.. meine kuch nahi kaha tumne apne muu se hii kaha haiii" shows him her tongue n starts running


Maan running behind Geet "Tum rukho Geet mein tume chodunga nahiii"


Geet dashs into Meera n says "Sorrryyy Auntyy"


Meera "Itsss Okkk Beta itni jaldi mein kaha baagh rahi hoo???"


Maan "Mom usse pakadoo who mujhe ched rahii thiii na aab dekhooo ????"


By the time Meera holds '.Geet starts running on the sofa n around it n Maan is on 1 side n Geet on the other side

As Naina comes there Meera n Naina both are seeing the Tom n Jerry Live show n seeing the mess just shouts "Stoppp Ittt Youuu Twooo"

Maan n Geet stops n tells "Sorry Mom n Aunty" together n turn towards each other n tells "Dnt Copy My Liness" n turns there back n twists their lips n stand

Naina "Geet aab tho bas karoo chotee bacho ki taraha ladnaa

Aur haan tumhare uss Desginer ka phone aya thaa ke Bridal Design baan gaya haiii you just have to go n select it"


Geet "Aree haan Mom mein aaj hii jaa ke dekh lethi huu' akhir Geet Handa ki Sariii haiii esii wesiii thodii na chalegiii"


Naina "Haaan Meri Maa jaaa abhi jaaa ke dekh le aur Maan plzzz tum bhi iske saath chale jav"


Maan "Jii aunty meiii kaiseee"


Meera "Chalee jav Maan waise bhi tumne abhi thak shaadi ke liyee koi sherwani select hii nahi kii haii

Wo bhi saath mein karke anna"


Maan "Thik haii Mom"


Maan n Geet were sooo happy as their Mom's only sent them all alone outside where they could spend some time alone n discuss how they would break their luv's news to the Family'.

Maan n Geet reached the designer store n like 1 of the design


Maan "Geet dekh Red colour kitna acha lagraha haiii"


Geet "nahii mujhe Blue colour zada pasand haiii or kitna different haii normal brides ke colours se"


Maan "But Blue se zada Red tumpe suit kartha hai..."

Present


Preet "But Blue se zada Red tumpe suit kartha hai"


This statement just brought Geet out of her past thoughts


Geet "Huhhh"


Preet "Kya hua Geet tum decide nahi kar pa rahi thiii'"


Geet "Nahiii meine tho Blue waliii leni haiii jiii"


Preet "Haiii tum kitni cute lagthi hooo jab delii waloo jese bolthi hooo.."


Geet "Yese hiii cute nahi lagthiii ????" n pouts her lips


Preet "Haiii meri Jaan aap tho hamarii Zindagii haiii aur hamesha hiii har pal alag lagthi haiii"n nuzzles Geet's neck


Geet "Preeettt sab dekh rahe haiii"


Omii "Mom Mom dekho yeh kaisa haiii'"


Preet groans "Isse abhi anna thaaa'"


Geet giggles n says "Humara hii beta haii Jaan"


Omi "Yeh kaisaa hai Mom????"


Geet "But beta aap tho aeroplane ya car se khelthe haii naa tho fir yeh Barbie..."


Omi "Mere paas tho bohat sarii Cars haiii but meri princess ke paas tho sirf kuch 50 Barbies haiii"


Geet "Beta Princess abhi chotiii hogiii vo abhi inse nahi khel sakegiii aur abhi tho Mom ke pet mein haii naaa abhi 4 months bakii haii"


Preet "Tho kyaa hua Jaan hum tho Princess ke liye sab lengeee'. Haii naaa Champ'"


Omi "Right Dad chaloo kuch aur dresss our soft toys dekh the haiii phir pillow sab kitnaa cute aur pink pink colours hai yaha peee'"


Omi n Preet went towards the Babies section


Geet patting her Baby bump "Dekha Princess abhi tum ayiii nahii aur yeh haal haiii already tumhara Room full hogaya haiii par tumhare Dad aur Bhai tho shopping bandh hii nahi kar rahe haiii

Bhagwan hii jane kya hogaaa jab tum aajavogiii"


N selects the Blue saree as it was Preet fav colour.

Precap-


Meera slaps Maan


Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
tamanna1391 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update geet lost in beautiful past omi disturbig preet geet romance
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Posted: 13 years ago
what is the suspense why they separated?please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
NICE UPDATE DEAR AWESOME👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sob sob aaj prove ho gaya k tu bahut badi gundi h roops wo b nirdayi wali gundi...
past was totally naughty but i almost cried reading the present sob
kyun kar rhi h aisa tu? U just broke my heart u knw tht
it ws sooo painful :'(
next part padhne ki himmat b nhi ho rhi :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

...😊
4 PMing me dear...
all r the updates done by u dear...😛
...dear..😃
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one dear but wanted to know that will maaneet become one in this FF.

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