BAARISH- MAANEET FF #2 Part41 - pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
hey
gr8 part,,
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
it was very touchy why Maan did this to her?4 life ha been soiled what was the reason?update soon na yaar i love this ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
it has neen 13 month passed no updates?what is wrong at leas apne royal fan ke liye story puri kardo please?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: idunno

it has neen 13 month passed no updates?what is wrong at leas apne royal fan ke liye story puri kardo please?


hey im completeing d story dnt worrryyy
just nt freee
will try n update 2day 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Note...
im nt going 2 update for d next 1 week
plzzz bear with me n thn u will get all d last parts of the ff
sorrry to keep u alll waitinggg
but i hv hell lot of work 2 complete...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all many thanks for updating at least as i forgot this ff but still suspense has not come out Maan got merry to preets gf and preet got marry to maan's gf please update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
ur update...😳
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Part 41


Present


Preet "Geet yaadein yaad karke muskurana chahiyee…… ronaa nahii chahiyeee"


Geet "Kabhi kabhi yeh aasuu hii nahi rukthe jithna muskuranee kii koshish karoo yeh akhosee beh hii jathe haiii jasee ke tumaharii akhoo se uss kii yaad mein…."


Preet "Kya karuu Geet Pyaar bhi tho uthna hii kiya tha naa uskooo……" n tears made way frm Preet's eyes also


Geet "Dekha meine tumhe bhi emotional kar diyaa"n wipes away the tears


Preet "Aree meriii Dramatic Wifey……" n hugs Geet tightly when suddenly Geet starts coughing continuosly n started breathing heavily

So Preet made her sit on a chair nearby n went to get a glass of water

But Geet coughing just increased n Avanii saw it n excused herself from Maan n Rajeev n went towards Geet…..


Avanii held Geet's hand tightly n started patting her back to make Geet feel abit relief n then she kneeled down near the chair n kept her hand near the Baby Bump n starts carressing it n Geet feeling the Baby Kick n was slowly feeling abit relaxed …….

Preet came n saw someone kneeling near Geet but as of now Geet was his main concern


Preet "Dekha Geet aur karooo apni manmaniii

Tumhe tho mazza atha haiii naaa meri koi bhi baath na sun kar"


Geet with tears "Yesaa nahii haiii….."


Preet n Geet were busy in themselves that they failed to notice Avanii who was just staring at Preet with tears in her eyes n walking backwards as if trying to turn back the last 10 mins of her life…..

As Preet saw upwards to thank the lady who was with Geet he was shocked to see Her…… he had tears in her eyes n Geet was confused as to what was happening……….

Avanii's eyes were filled with tears n were trying to locate Maan but Maan was no where in sight n as she caught Preet seeing her she just turned her back n started running towards the garden….

Preet as he saw Avanii running told Geet to be sitted there he will just come in sometime……..

As Avanii reached outside in the garden she fell on the ground crying……….


Preet reached there n made Avanii stand n he couldn't see her crying… he just hugged her...


Avanii tried with all her might to get out of the hug n run away frm Preet but Preet's hold was strong n slowly when Avanii stopped protesting Preet lossened the Hug


Avanii "Kyun kiyaaa tumne mere saath yesa……Kyun?????????"


Preet "Meriii majboori thi………"


Avanii "Tumharee paas humesha hii koi na koi excuse hota hai…….. kya tumne kabhi mere baare mein soch nahiii humesha apne Mom Dad ka saath diya……. Chahe who sahi ho ya galat"


Preet "Par mujhe puri saachai nahi pata thi Avaniii…."


Avanii "Haan issi liye uss din mujhe ghar se bina kuch kahe bina kuch sune nikal diya….."


Preet "Mein maan tha hu meri galatii thii par tumne bhi tho mujhe phele kuch nahi bola tha….."


Avanii "Kyaaa boltiii tumhe ke …………." N she starts crying again falling on her knees


Preet "Plzzz Avaniii mat rooo….."


Avanii "Tumne mujhe zindagi mein asoo ke ilava kabhi diya hii kya haiii Preet……. Mein humesha yehii manthii rahii ke puri duniya yaha ki wahan hojayee lekin tum mera saath nahi chodoge…..

Lekin tum tho sabse phele chale gaya meri zindagii se saara ilzaam mujhpe daalke………."


Preet " Avanii mein maan tha huu meinne galatii kiii par plzzz mujhe sazza dedooo par plzzz dnt leave me plzzz"


Avanii "Kis haq se rok rahe hooo Preet……

Kaha the tum jab unhone mera Rape kiya tha…..

Bolo aaye tum waha mujhe bachane ke liyee……

Kaha the tum jab woh 2 mahine mera continous gang rape karthe raheee…….

Tumhe bas apne Mom Dad jo bola ussi pe yakin tha na…….

Kaha the tum jab unhone mere Bache ko mere peeth mein hiii maar daala……….

Aur woh bhi tumhare Mom Dad ke Kehne par…..

Kaha the tum jab tumare Mom Dad ne mujhe maarne kii suparii unhe diii thiii……..

Tumhe tho humesha se hiii laga tha ke merii tumare Mom Dad ke saath dushmanii thi naaa……..

Kyun unhone tum mein aur mujh mein humesha faraq rakha

Mujhe Betiii bolte the naaa woh

Tho phir Kyun??????????

Haiii koi Javab tumare paas Capt.Preet Aluwalia"


Preet "Avanii mujhe saach mein yeh sab patha nahii tha……

Tumhariii kasam…….."


Avanii "aaj tak tumne meriii naam kii bohat sii kasam kahii haiii

So aaj yeh sab Drama kyun Preet ???????"


Preet "Avaniii yeh koi Drama nahii haiii

I loved you yeh tum bhi janthi hooo

Par I mis understood you………." N puts down his head in shame


Avanii "Yehii tho haii naaa Preet ke tum kitnii bhi galatii karooo I always supported you but jab tumhara time aya mujhe support karne kaa

You Mis-understood me n left me alone to face it alll

Bas itna hii tha tumhara pyaar mere liye……"


Preet just went on his knees n hugs Avanii's waist "Plzzz Avaniii plzzz mujhe ek aur baar chod ke maath javv

Mein sab kuch phele jese kar dungaaa

I promise plzzz bas mujhe chod ke maath jav……"


Avanii "Kuch phele jesa nahi raha Preet

Sab kuch badal chuka haiii

Tum mein aur halat bhiii

Aur tum aab kuch thik nahi kar sakthe Preet

I have a Family now im not alone anymore ke koi bhi akee mere saath kuch bhi karke chodde…"


Avanii removed Preet's hands from her Waist n as she turned towards the Hotel ….Preet held her hand

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BLASTTT

Precap-

Present – Twist abhi baaki haiii …………

Edited by rsroopali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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To My Dear Rum...
May u be always cure peolpe's Cold...😃😉
Meri Pyaaariii siii Rummm
Luv uuu
May all ur Dreams Come True Not 😈
Waise im a Devil naaa Jasmine n idunno
i keep u people waiting sooo long for such a short update
sorrryyy😔
plzzz forgive meee😊
n njoy the Updateee😉
9 more parts to end the FF Baarish😭


Edited by rsroopali - 12 years ago

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