Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago

...this 4 u...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 15 n 16 ...

awesome ... superb ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both the parts were amazing Roops BUT SORRY LIKE BUTTON IS NOT WORKING
I loved this dialogue from maan k buddhe ko kuch kaam nahi hai kya young man bolkar kaam wala banakar rakh diya hai😆😆😆
maan is still thinking that geet will mrs. khurana very soon dekhthe hai aage kya hotha hai
i hope devdas and maan both would b fine
love u -Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi cutie pie
two parts
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awesome parts dear...and sorry for late response
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 17

Maan just jumped on the track n started running towards the train.

The train n Maan were just some distance away from Devdas.

Geet saw this n just shouted-"Maaannn……"

As she opened her eyes she saw that the train had stopped and she got down on the track n then what she saw was shocked…….

She saw Devdas in the hands of Maan n Maan scolding Devdas n also caressing Devdas with love n care.

Geet seeing that both Maan n Devdas are fine just thanked God that both were safe.

Then Geet was just sitting on the bench waiting for Ash to come as she was late for nearly 1 hour n her call was coming switch off.

Then geet started scolding Ash in a low voice-"Dekha Babaji iss ladki ke nakree abhi thak nahi aayi aur agar mein 2 min late hojavo tho Dqgiri suru kardgii aur aab Madam khud 1 ghantha late haiii"

Maan-"Devdas yeh kya hua tumari friend kisko dath rahi haii samne tho koi dikh nahi raha hai"

Geet-"Maan tum thodi der ke liye chup nahi rahe sakte kyaa mein already yaha tension mein huu"

Maan-"okkk finger on my lips"

Geet-"Ash Ash plzzz phone uthaa mujhe tension hora haiii"

Maan-"Uskoo kyun disturb kar rahii hoo bechari phelii date pe gayii hai"

Geet-"Kya kaha tumne Date????? per vo tho yaha Railway Station aane wali thi"

Maan-"Haan mein tumhe batana bhul gaya tha ussne subha call kiya tha ke vo nahi asakthi"

Geet-"Par tumhe kaise patha ke vo Date pe gayi hai vo esii bathe phele mujhe hii bathathi tumhe nahi"

Maan-"Bhagwan sab kuch dee tumhe par galth famii naa dee Geet meine hii usski Date fix kii hai aur usne mujhe promise kiya tha kii tumhe kuch nahi bolegii"

Geet-"Okkk thik haiii par vo date kiske saath gayii haii"

Maan-"Vo Briyani aunty ka Engineering beta hai na uske saath"

Geet-"kyaaa????Uss Adityaaa ke saath…

Chiii Babajii"

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