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Posted: 13 years ago
haha biryaani aunty nice name
thank god maan n devdaas are safe
continue soon
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome waiting for ash date scene.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
awesome
i actually loved the biryani aunty
great
precap is again super cool
continue soon roopali dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 18

Maan-"Vo Briyani aunty ka Engineering beta hai na uske saath"

Geet-"kyaaa????Uss Adityaaa ke saath'

Chiii Babajii"

Maan-"Uss mein chii kii kya baath haii?"

Geet-"Seriously Maan just imagine their date.

A romantic setting full of red roses n scented candles n Adityaa n Ash sitting on the opposite chair lost in each other's eyes'."

Maan-"But that's gud naa wt's sooo wrong in that?"


Geet-"The wrong part will start when Ash is hungry"

Maan-"Their date is set by mee n I hv arranged for Food dnt worry"

Geet-"You think Aditya will order something from that instead he will tell her he has a surprise for her"

Maan-"Surpriseee??????? But I hvnt arranged for one"

Geet-"That's the thing'..He will close Ash eyes n as Ash will open her eyes she will see a Tiffin Box full of Home made Briyaniii by Briyanii aunty"

Maan-"Oh shit!!!!!!I totally forgot abt warning Aditya nt to bring the Briyanii as Ash hates itt"

Geet-"But it will be fun to see Ash's face even for Aditya if she agree's to eat the Briyanii , Aditya will start with his Meri Matha Maahan lectureee"

Maan-"Ayooo meine Ash ko kaha pasadiyaaa"

Geet-"Dnt worry Ash is a brave girl she will handle that Aditya n uskii esii halat karegiii na ke Aditya GF tho chodo kabhi kisi ladkii ko nazar utha ke bhi nahi dekhegaaa n incase dekh bhi liyaaa tho apni Meri Matha Maahan lecture kabhi nahii degaa"

Maan-"Sounds interesting kal subha uthkee phele mein Aditya ke ghar jakee uski halat dekoongaaa buhot mazzaaa aayegaaa"

Geet-"Sooo abbb we hv 4 n half hours free chaloo yaha buhot Famous temple haii hum waha ke darshan karke athee haiii"

Maan-"Par mein Bhagwan mein Viswas nahi kartha"

Geet-"Tum nahi karthe lekin mein karthii hoo aur mujhe jaana haiii'' basss"

Maan-"Think haiii chalooo tum aur Devdas darshan karke ajanaa"

They sit in the car n Maan started to drive

Geet-"Maan what were you scolding Devdas for on the tracks"

Maan-"Ohhh nothing i was just telling him that if for urgent pressure I hv not run that way n this stupid made me run at that speed n whn I asked him why he went there?you know what is the reasn he told me???"

Geet-"Nooo Maan I dnt know what did he tell"

Maan-"He tells me that he was hungry n in your house you dnt give him enough food soo he went too eat"

Geet taking Devdas in her lap-"Sorrryyy Devdas now I will personally supervise your food, kkk"

Then Maan just was seeing Geet making cute faces at Devdas n after some 15 minutes '.

Geet-"Maan what happened why are you sooo silent n not talking n nt irritating me??"

Maan-"You women are sooo strange some time u tell us tooo just Shut Up n when we dnot talk you ask why we are not talking n keeping Shut"

Geet-"Yaaa your talks are irritating but I got to know that behind this flirt Maan Singh Khurana there is a Emotional Maan just Maan"

Maan-"and why did u suddenly start to feel that?"

Geet-"The way you just ran for a Rabbit not even caring about the danger to your life explains that"

Maan-"Devdas is not just a Rabbit he is my Best Friend n I can guarantee you that even if no one in this world is with me Devdas will never leave my side no matter what"

Geet-"You have sooo much trust on Devdas"

Maan-"This whole world is built on trust then what am I"""

Geet-"Maan will you be my Friend??"

Maan-"Omg Geet am I dreaming you the Geet Handa is asking me to become your friend?"

Geet-"Oh nooo the Drama King is back cant you just

Answer my question"

Precap-Will Maan accept Geet's Friendship?

P.S 'Biryani aunty ka naam haii Meeta aunty

N This update is dedicated to kawaii_geet aka Ash as you have xam 2mrw n here is my torture to you in a version of your Date that Rakhi dii was sooo eager to read

n Ash


For both your Date n Exam...

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Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy 2 reAD this.plz update daily as u promised wen u started this ff.I hope Maan'll accept geet's friendship.I'm happy that G asked him 2 b his friiend
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum...luvd imagination of aadi-ash date...
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc update yaar!!!!poor aadi kya hoga uska???? plz cont soon unki dosti bhi karwa do...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear
poor adi
cont soon

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