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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

too good

past n present mixed

clarify avani n ashi

if i have something

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Kajal

@prachimishra85

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Awww its so nice

Thanks for the PM

Cont.soon

❤️ Prachi

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Nice part ⭐️

Can't believe Maan was still in that manhole 😆

Cute update 😳

Loved it & thanks for pm ...

( Btw I think you know but still in case you don't 😛

Our very own Drashti aka Geet is the 1st TV celeb ever to have over 5,000 fans 🥳

Me really happy

So giving you a virtual treat with love )

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Read all three parts dear...Wonderful 👏

But sad that Maneet is not together at present 😭

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Part 4

Present

Maan n Ashi were having fun trying to drive the car together n then Ashi jumping to her Mom Avni's lap n is busy seeing the scenery when the car stops with a jerk n it starts raining.

Past

As Maan reached home his Mom told him that he was accompaining her to Madikeri to her best friend's house n he told Ok.

Next Morning

Maan is driving for 2 hrs now and telling his story abt tht girl to his Mom n hw they misssed meeting yday

n then suddendly the car stops with a jerk n so he is like wt the hell???? and goes out and sees a flat tyre n he is like now i will have to change ittt n as he finishes changing the tyre and as it was raining a car with full speed just passes by and bcoz of the speed the mud on the road splashes on Maan's face and he runs after the car n suddendly the car stops and he sees ...

Present

Geet sees its raining outside n a car with a flat tyre n she remembers

Past

Geet sees a person with mud splashed all over his face by her car and so she stops the car and gives her hankyy to tht guy n tells the driver to drive.

Ash "Hey Geet u should have stopped the car i wanted to see his face"

Geet "why what was so special in that guy?"

Ash "Geet you are a fool didn't u see it was the same guy who has your watch n fell in that manhole"

Geet "Whattt?????????I seriously didn't recognise how did you recognise him"

Ash "Geet its so simple yaar he had mud on his face and u should have seen his eyes he was sooo surprised"

Geet "Oh Ok leave it I may never meet that guy again then y should i bother abt him"

Ash[Kawaii_geet] Hey this is Geet's friend who is very eager to see Maan's face n she is our very personal DQ[Drama Queen]

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

res

hey...me 1st????
yay....

btw...y is the update sooo short hun???😕

luvd it...
maan in mud...😆
pata nahi kaise milenge dono!!!😳
and me lecturing geet...
wow...thts sooo cool!!!

am liking myself more now...thnx to u roops!!!!🤗
loved my entry too
thnx roops...😃
and yeah..didn't knw u hve saved tht pic of mine!!!!😳

and i really liked ur name...PERSONAL DQ for me
luv ya for tht!!!!!!

aur yeh tere liye

Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

deary loved the part nice interesting
du update soon thnx 4 the pm
God bless u

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

ooo felt like i wished and the wish gt granted thank roops mate for posting so quickly lol still cant believe it with my eyes blinking agn n agn😕
okie the part was nice im loving it teh way it is moving really past present together they both remembering as teh same things happening to them im really enjoying it rain and this mud has some relation with maan or what when u make him dirty like this i feel oye roops or kitna ganda karegi bechare ko🤣
more then that im happy for ash finally she gt her real feild where she belong too being a drama queen so deserve to be part of fiction im shhoo happpiii ash🥳now i will say roops ash ko chance de apne dialogues likhne ke her real talent will be out that how much big nautanki she is😆😆😆 vese pic mein kitni cute lagti hai yeh😕 nazro ka dhoka typz😆
Thnx 4 the pm(in advance😆)
keep writing
God bless U

Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

@wardah
thnx dearie..
but nazroon ka dhokha???😲
nahi nahi
mein to bahut achchi hoon...
me very evry very innocent!!!!😃

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
@wardah
thnx dearie..
but nazroon ka dhokha???😲
nahi nahi
mein to bahut achchi hoon...
me very evry very innocent!!!!😃

ash kis sapne mein hai yaar

who told u tht ??????

n nazroon ka dhokha means

hw can our DQ look soo innocent n cuteee😈