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hey roops...sp sorry for late comments
actually i hve read all the parts n liked them too
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n now story getting interesting..
geet was da grl and he refused without seeing her once...umm
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oh his father wanted him to marry geet
was geet aware of it?
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Part 29


Present


N Avani moaned " Mmmaaannn"


N that only increased maan's pace and he started kissing her lips and soon they were making out in the front seat on the car with their clothes on and their daughter sleeping on the back seat'


N As they were going to reach out to undress each other Ashi started wiggling in the back seat and seeing that


Maan ' Why does she have to start waking up now only????? N pouted like a small cute kid


Avani ' Maan she is your daughter only see she also cant take a bit sound when she is asleep'. Pulling his cheeks in the process n telling it in a tone which was sarcastic


Maan ' What do you mean by cant take a bit sound when asleep????? (Raising his eyebrows)


Avani ' now don't act sooo innocent as if you don't understand anything''


Maan ' Seriously avani im your innocent saa patii I didn't understsnd what your trying to tell (making a baby face n hving a smirk attached to it)


Avani 'Achaaa my innocent sa patiii n started tickling him n maaan just could not stop himself frm laughing out loud and that woke up Ashi but Maan and Avani were lost in tickling each other and seeing them Ashi started cryinggg

Seeing Ashi cryinggg Maan and Avani stop tickling each other and pick Ashi from the back seat


Avani ' Dekha Maan I told you na usko lagjayegiii beche u never listen to me dekho aab mera shona bachca kitna ro raha haiii


Maan 'Isme meri kya galti haiii kya mujhe sapna aya tha keee Ashi ko lagegiii aur phele usse puch tho lo kyun ro rahi haiii''

Meri Princess kyun ro rahiii haiii bolo naaa????


But Ashi didn't answer them both and Avani phone started ringing n Ashi took the phone from Avani's hands and pulled herself away from Maan and Avani and went to the back seat n answer the phone cryinglyyy n saiddd "Maaamiii ''"


The lady on the other side "Kyaaa huaa meriii rajkumariii kooo kyn ro rahaaa haiii?????"

Precap-

Reason why Ashi was crying'.

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Part 30

Present

Ashi took the phone from Avani's hands and pulled herself away from Maan and Avani and went to the back seat n answer the phone cryinglyyy n saiddd "Maaamiii ……."


The lady on the other side "Kyaaa huaa meriii rajkumariii kooo kyn ro rahaaa haiii?????


Ashi "But Ashi only started to cry loudlyyy"


Maan "Avani dekha ab Maami kaa phone aya hai tho puriii nautanki karii bilkul apni Maami ki tarah"


Avani glared at him to shut up and to concentrate on why was Ashi crying????


Lady told Ashi to put the phone on loudspeaker and Ashi did as she told


Lady – "Maan tumne mujhe nautanki kaha??????"


Maan –"Areee nahiii tumee kuch galath famii hogayiii haiii meine tumhe kuch nahi bola"


Lady –"Abbb tho tum jhut bhi bole lageee hooo Maan how baddd…….. n started crying


Man frm other side with the lady – "Abb tum ne kya kar diya Maan dekho iss haalth mein kyun usko pareshan kar rahe hooo"


Maan – " Areee main pakka wala pinky promise karke boltha huu mein ne usse kuch nahi bolaa wo apne aap hii kuch samaj ke rone lagiii n yaha pe Ashi bhi rona bandh nahi kar rahi haiii"


Hearing this the Lady stopped crying


Lady "Aap sab chup hojaooomeri Rajkumariii ro rahii haiii aur aap sab gussa karke time pass kar rahee hooo"


Ashi " I Lubbb you Maaammiii

no mama no papa no prince no mama no lub Ashiii

Onlyyy Ashi and Maaammmi playyy"


Lady (Maami) " Areee Ashii Maaamiii also lub you and onlyyy Ashi Maaammmiii and Baby play"


Ashi " Yeshhh Baby althooo"


Maami " Tho aab Rajkumarii kyun roo rahiii thiii????"


Ashi "Maaamii Papa Mama ticklyy ticklyyy play and no tell Ashi and with Ashi Mama Papa nooo playy (stared crying again)


N hearing this Maan and Avani at last realised why Ashi was crying and just rolled their eyesthinking abt the Drama Queen in front of them


Lady "Maan Avani yeh mein kyaaa sun rahiii huu tum log kyun merii Rajkumarii ko bhul ke ticklyy ticklyy khel rahe hoo huh????"


Avani "Par Bhabhii….. meri isme koi galti nahi hai wo tho Maan hii mujhe pareshan kar rahe the"


Maan "Meine kyaaa kiyaaa haiii Avanii???"


Avani "Whoo….. whooo…"n started blushing


Lady " Helllooo Maan n Avaniii kuch tho sharam karooo bachiii ke samnee romance kar rahee hooo"


Avanii and Maan both started blushing hearing that n Ashi was giving them confussed looks as to what they were talking



Precap-

Past continues


Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago

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