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ansah

@SahSah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

That was just superb...totally loved the update...

roops awesome job done

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Nice update ⭐️

Loved it n thanks for pm ...

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

nice update
Geet is married and has a son wow.
Looks like both are headed in the same direction.
Maan's way of conveying his love was so sweet
wonder how Geet is going to react

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

dear...😊

1stly ...4 PM me hunn...

u really done n

...👏👏👏👏.

4 that to u..👍🏼.

... ......n really .😃😉...

4 donn't comment regular but also late n short.becouse of my exam.....

4 ur update tons of n ..🤗.

again 4 ur update..😃..

lov,❤️

Tama

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Sowmya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Nooo plsss...this movie is tragedy... i cant see maneet away from each other...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

The part was nice loved it sweet hope she comes
du update the next part soon will be waiting
thn 4 the pm
keep writing
god bless you

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Part 3

Present

Geet was listening to the song "HUMKO PYAR HUVA"n saw Omi also trying to drive the car sitting on Preet's lap n then remembered her reaction on Maan's proposal on the radio.

Past

After listening to Maan's proposal she spat out the Tropical Iceberg n her friend had the dreamy expression as if it was the world's best thing ever done n she pulled Geet to the car park where they had been yday but

Geet"I dnt want to go there, he just making fun of me. He has not even seen me"

Friend"Oh comon Geet,i want to see his face as yday his face was full of mud"

Geet "Leave it na yaar i dnt want to take that watch n he seemed like a Roadside Romeo"

Friend"Aree Geet come na yaar ok we will just take your watch from him n come back ok"

Geet"Ok"

n they went to the car park area where thy went yday n thy saw a lot of crowd n she got a call as she had to complete some other work it was 3.15 when they reached there n saw a car going out n the crowd dispersing.

Present

Maan was njoying the song "HUMKO PYAR HUVA" n making pattern on her hand n getting naughty with Avni n Avni only smacked him n showed that Ashi is awake. N so he went back to his driving n saw a lot of commotion on the road n remembered that day what had happened after the radio proposal.

Past

As Maan was waiting in the car park many of the people who had heard the radio show came to that place to see who this Maan was? n who this Girl was that he was talking about? n they gathered a huge crowd nn many police officer's also came their seeing the commotion.

It was 3pm n no one came n that time Yash came n saw Maan has created so much commotion in the car park area n Maan was continuously staring at the manhole n then the watch like a devdas.

Yash "Maan enough of all this drama of yours now come home"

Maan "No Dad,she will come my heart is telling me Dad"

Yash"Maan if she had to come she would have come n do you even know the girl's name"

Maan "No Dad, but i know that she is the world's most beautiful girl in the world like an angel from heaven"

Yash" Now enough is enough just sit in the car n lets go home n this time i don't want to hear anything just do as i say"

N so Maan sat in his car with his dad n left the place.

Tropical Iceberg[njoy it its vry yummyyy]