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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

sorry guys my cpu part has burnt n sooo update only next week if its repaired

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

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today 1stly ...4 keep Pm me..😡😕.

...4 late comment...becouse my exam......

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all updates r

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

That was just awesome !!!! really beautiful

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Part 10

then she saw a Gun in her Dad's hand n then she heard Gun Shot n shouts "Maannn"

As she opens her eyes she sees Maan standing there with his back turned n sand falling frm the sack that was tied frm Maan's shoulder to his hip n nw Maan shacking his a** n the sand falling on the ground.

Here Rajeev after hearing Geet shout asks her "Wt happened Beta?"

Geet "Nothing Dad i just saw a snake nearby so i shouted"

Rajeev "dont worry Geet there are no Posionious snakes around here bt i will inform the Forest Department to check the area once"

Geet "Leave all that Dad Wt are u doing here with ur gun?"

Rajeev "Geet u know this brave young man [pointing towards Maan] he got to know tht i wanted to practice gun shooting n tht all ou workers ran away as soon as i asked them so he became a volenteer for my gun shooting practice"

Maan [s.t] "oh god wt n all i have to do to impress Geet see nw im even hv become a volenteer to tht budha for his stupid gun shooting. Oh god u only save me frm him"

Geet "Dad do u hv some shame or mind atleast. its ur daughter's wedding in 10 days n here ur practicing this stupid gun shooting n there all r tensed as to whr hv u gone?"

Rajeev "Sorry beta yaa come nw we will go n u dnt get angry n cool down"

Geet n rajeev were going through the fields when Rajeev was talking something to Geet n then suddenly some1 pulled Geet towards the big banana plants enough to cover them both.

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Part 11

then suddenly some1 pulled Geet towards the big banana plants enough to cover them both n then Geet sees that it was Maan n gets angry n shouts at him "wt do u think of urself,wt r u doing?"

Maan "i m sooo happy to see u here i knew u would come n u left the watch in d hills whn u shouted" n he made Geet wear he watch

Geet "are u mad Maan ur making me wear this watch knowing tht u hv told my Dad tht u will put it on the hand of d girl u luv"

Maan "ohhh wowww i thought u never remembered my words n didn't give a dam to them bt im surprised u remember each n every word of wt i said"

Geet "Maan just stop this madness u know tht i will nt marry you no matter wt.my marriage is in 10 days just stop all this its going no where u will just end up heart broken "

Maan "Geet wt ever it mayb even if im heart broken i want to tell my heart tht till the last moment i tried bt u were nt in my destiny n god knows u may even fall for my luv in these 10 days.sooo im nt giving up sooo easilyyy"

Geet "Do wtever u want but then dnt hold me responsible if ur heart is broken"

Maan "Dnt worry Geet i will never loose my luv"

Suddenly thy hear Rajeev searching for Maan n Geet n Maan just went away frm there n as she turned she saw her Dad "Geet wt are u doing here n wts tht..."

Maan "aree Sir whr had u gone i just turned around n both u n Geet were Missing i came running searching u both as i thought tht u were lost"

Geet "Maan u are new to this area n not us hw can we get lost? its you who had lost ur way"

Rajeev "thats okkk nw come lets go home ur Mom will be waiting for us n Geet i saw something in ur hand. wt was tht ???"

Geet "nothing Dad see nothing's there" n she shows her hand n the watch was kept in her other arm

Afternoon

As they finished there lunch a servent came running into the dining hall n told them that Rakha has come back frm jail n hearing this Rajeev took his gun n rushed out towards his jeep with the servant

Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

plz do commenttt n keep pressing d like buttonnn

n willl update next 2 parts 2mrwww

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Wow Roopali today we got double updates... chalo achha hai

Hey loved maan when he was thinking k geet ko impress karne k liye mujhe iss buddhe ka volunteer banna hoga😆😆😆

uff geet tho apni zidd chod hi nahi rahi

but loved maan's faith...k i will try till the end...atleast then i will feel k i did not give up n u were not there in my destiny... n kya pata k tumhe bhi mujhse in 10 dino mein pyar ho jaaye

beautiful n amazing work

continue soon

n like button is not working will cm back later n then try shayad tab like button work karna shuru ho jaaye

love-Piya