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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

😆 Maan hating the fact he sccepted pari why ab bechari neh kya kiya

poor maan what are they up to😆
great update loved it
love ya ruchi


Pari and Vicky hmmm!!!!😉

Love you too sweets!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Itna jaldi
Thoda sabar karo 😆


Me loves you dears!! That's why typing with one hand!!!😳 Written 200 words so far!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Ruchs, that was short aur sirf 1 part hi update hua hai?

Sara is angry, ja is part ke liye mein nahi karti comment.

Do cont soon and do PM me.


Me Sorry!! Sob Sob!!!😭

Pweez me ka comment do na!! Pweeezzz!!!😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATING TOMORROW!!!

Though maybe a short part since me has hurt my fingers!! 😭 Am a very big disaster prone item you see!! 😆

@Mel- As promised am not stressing my hand issiliye trying to give a short update!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

UPDATING TOMORROW!!!


Though maybe a short part since me has hurt my fingers!! 😭 Am a very big disaster prone item you see!! 😆

@Mel- As promised am not stressing my hand issiliye trying to give a short update!!!😳

Ok...don't stress hard for giving updates
First take care of your health
Still ...we all are waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Ok...don't stress hard for giving updates
First take care of your health
Still ...we all are waiting


take your time dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATING!!

Me got a holiday today due to rain so me typed out the update slowly for all my dears!! Hope you like it!! Coming up in few minutes!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you dears for the encouraging comment and so many likes!! Love you dears!!!😳

Specially for all you dears, me giving this update!!😳

Hope you like it!!!😳

Pweez drop by a msg if you want PMs!!😳


PART - 46


While poor Maan was cursing his ill fate, the trio aka our Superman, Pari and Geet were busy deciding the perfect movie… All the elders were just watching their Mahabharata over a movie…

"Main keh rahi hoon na, it must be something romantic… Aaah the air of love… Bilkul humare inn deewanon ke liye purrrfect…. So let it be Teri Meri Kahaani…"

"What the hell… Tum kabhi apna brain use karti ho??? Do you read the newspapers??? Have you ever seen the reviews???? The pathetic movie has not even got two stars, so no chance… Let it be something which has dual tadka being both comedy and witty… How about Rowdy Rathore… Uski bahut achchhi rating hai…"

"No way… that is like slapstick comedy… Maan bhai will absolutely hate it…"

"So what… Geet will love it am sure… Kyun doll?? You decide… That stupid Teri Meri Kahaani or Rowdy Rathore…"

" Ummm… Inn dono mein se koi bhi nahi…"

"Kyaa???"

"Whatt?? But abhi toh yehi dono movies chal rahi hai na…."

"Nahi Nahi Nahi… Mujhe sirf ekk hi movie dekhni hai…"

"Arrey toh aap hi bata dijiye waise bhi dekhni toh aap hi ko hai na… Bataiye kaunsi Geet bete??" Dadima finally intervened seeing this war is heading nowhere…

"Madagascar 3!!!! Maine uske last 2 parts bhi dekhey thhey and I loved them!!!"Geet rubbed her hands gleefully getting excited….

"WHHHHAAAATTTT?????"

Everyone exclaimed extremely shocked!!! Vicky and Pari held their heads muttering "Unbelievable…"…. While the elders muffled their laughter knowing their Geet, who was soon going to be a mother but was still a complete kid at heart…

All of them silently pitied Maan… And imagining the million Dollar scene, Maan Singh Khurana, a multi-millionaire businessman watching Madagascar 3, a cartoon movie… They all really wished to have just one look of his face that time!!!

Vicky and Pari looked at each other and winked…

"Hmmm thank god humne pehle se hi saara intezaam kar rakha tha…. Nahi toh yeh Doll pata nahi mere bichare bhai ka kya haal karti… Maan, dude, you owe me one big time for what am doing for you!!!" Vicky thought to himself…

Lest did he know, that this is our Geet and though she is now a full grown woman but she is till the same, iska kuchh nahi ho sakta!!!!

NEXT DAY

Maan had strictly forbidden Vicky as well as the others from booking tickets in a normal cinema hall… He had given them the liberty to select the movie but at the same time, he had given specific instructions that they should book a decent hall and the whole hall in fact the whole mall should be booked exclusively for them… He had also given Vicky, Papaji and his Dad the duty to arrange and hire the best security available for their outing… After all the fiasco that happened a few weeks back, he didn't want to take any risk specially when his Jaan and babies were concerned!!!!

Though Rimi and Brij were declared dead to the world, Maan still had doubts that they had some other accomplices as well… The police was still searching for Rajinder, Tai ji and others… Also evidences were found that Brij was not the mastermind behind all this scheming… Even Maan had felt so at many points of time that Brij was not smart enough to make such a massive plan by himself…

With so much going around, Maan didn't want to take Geet out but he knew that it was not practical to hold her like a prisoner in the mansion… Though he had made some arrangements of making her a captive somewhere else, where she would be really happy to become one since she would be alone with him!!! So he relented this once for making his Jaan happy while making side-by-side preparations for their much-awaited HONEYMOON!!!

MOVIE THEATRE

Vicky personally checked everything and took care of all the arrangements… He asked the manager of the hall…

"Everything is exactly as I said na???"

"Yes Sir…"

Vicky nodded and then called Maan informing him that everything was ready so he could leave for the cinema hall with Geet…

KHURANA MANSION

Maan was waiting for Vicky's call and as soon as he got the confirmation, he escorted Geet to his limousine arranged specially keeping in mind the comfort of his Jaan…

He signaled the head of his bodyguard clan and they immediately took their positions… Four bodyguards were to escort them on motorbikes; two in front and two from behind while six bodyguards would be there in each car, which would be sandwiching their limousine…

Geet got super excited seeing the beautiful black limousine and literally started jumping in it like a kid… She was in awe of the entire interiors completely as per Maan's taste… The beautiful purple draping, the super comfortable leather seats cum sofas, covered front that separated their compartment from the driver's area, ensuring privacy… But what fascinated her the most was the Tom and Jerry movie running on the flat screen in front of her…

She was super happy today as it was one of her dreams to sit in a limousine and today her Maan fulfilled that too… She leapt forward and kissed his cheek and exclaimed in her usual manner…

"I love you… love you… love you… love you… love you a lot!!!!"

Maan just shook his head at her antics though silently he was very delighted that his old Deewani was slowly returning back… He returned her gesture was kissing her near the nape of her neck and slowly whispered in her ear…

"Love you too my little wify…"

Geet stood shocked for a minute completely in daze and then after recovering a bit she turned the into a complete strawberry and hid her face in the crook of his neck making Maan chuckle at his little wify who was still so shy with him…

MOVIE THEATRE

Soon they reached the Cinema Hall and could see Vicky who was waiting for them at the entrance… They got off while the bodyguards immediately covered them from all sides but maintaining a comfortable distance from them at the same time…

"Tumne sab kuchh double check kar liya hai na Vicky???"

"Yup dude everything's perfectly ready… Bass tum dono ka hi intezaar tha…"

Maan ignored his sarcastic comment and just nodded… He looked at Geet who was checking out the mall that was completely reserved for them today… He held her from the waist and directed her towards the lift…

"Maan…"

Vicky stopped them and Maan threw an irritated glance at him…

"Arrey don't look at me like that… Main to bass keh raha tha… ENJOY!!!"

Vicky exclaimed mischievously and then vanished from the place as he knew that his life would not be very safe if he stayed there for some more time… He very well knew that once Maan saw what he had arranged for them, he would get killed mercilessly at the hands of his own twin brother!!!

Maan at once understood that something was fishy when he saw the mischievous glint in Vicky's eyes but he couldn't do anything now, as it was too late, except praying to Geet's Babaji… He took a deep breath and entered the lift….

PRECAP

Innocent Geet!!! Poor Maan!!!😆

Hope you like it dears!!!😳

Me will try to update Aaiynaa too soon!! Will take a li'l time because my hand is injured!!😭

You can find all my work at my blog too- Ruchi's DEN!!!!

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PREV- PART 45 NEXT - PART 47


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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome eagerly waiting for next part n dear pls take care of urself

Edited by tanvi04 - 13 years ago

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